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Brightglow

@Brightglow

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

Good one avni😭

You give good message in this story.

It was awesome. I really cant take this type of parents.

They are not parents. How could they do this to their own blood.

I had tears when she touch his hand. Wat is their fault. They dont deserve this.

They really have a rights to live. Wat is this they need to punished.

Its very emotional. Their love was so pure.😭❤️

My heart broke for them. this shot have good social message.

This world is so cruel.😭

Well done.👏

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Chocolatebond

@Chocolatebond

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

Amazing job Avni I really loved it not even once I felt bored kuch bhi bolti ho tum so were you hesitating to post this one ?it's too good yaar from their first meet till their last breath you have penned down an eternal love story with strong social message in the most beautiful manner

great job behena this os was nothing flimy like you said it was closer to reality you wrote exactly what's happening in this world you don't need to hesitate for posting aur haan if you have anymore such os/ff usse bhi post karo

Much love to you

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Brightglow

@Brightglow

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks a ton Safana and Afsana... For ur kind words. I'm still in a state of sadness... Bcs of writing this emotionally strenuous one shot... Will reply to ur comments and PM's in some time :(

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WhtinAname

@WhtsinAname

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Nicely written Avni.

There first conversation was especially good.

Writing on a social issue in a OS must have been difficult.Still u wrote it very nicely.

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Nidhii

@Nidhii.3007

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

Good one avni di. I guess this is ur name .

I love all the other work of urs.

Yeah and this honour killing is still a part of our society more profusely in the districts of Haryana. They think that by killing they are saving their honour but didn't give it a thought that the one they are killing are their own kids.

Anyways the norms of the society can't be understood.

Once again good one. Loved it a lot.

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Brightglow

@Brightglow

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Tumpa12
good one
amazing
thnx for pm

Thank you 😊

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Kiranrathore

@Kiranrathore

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

First of all a huge round of applause for u dear from we readers side 👏👏👏👏...the issue u highlight in ur os is becoming more worse in india now a days..nd unfortunately i belong to haryana...where honour killing is maximum...the story u wrote is really beautiful and heartbreaking also...i got tears in my eyes ehile reading...very well written dear...hats off to u :)

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

beautiful writing avni 👏👏👏a very pain ending but i am glad you chose such a sensitive topics which i am guessing is still practiced in some parts of the world 😭😭😭

almost in tears