FFTo love or not to love.pt20 pg 22 31/10

hey guys... this is my first fan fic... i'll introduce the characters and the storyline... and u guys can give me ur opinions and suggestions...

Story line

Kanya and ranbir are childhood friends. as they grow older thier friendship develops into love. Alas one day kanya has to leave the country (kenya... thats where i am from originaly... and some of my scenes will have tourist sites...) with her family to go to the uk... so ranbir to save himself the heartbreak cheats on kanya. kanya is heartbroken. After 2 years kanya comes on a holiday trip with her college... why has kanya come back? what will happen when she and ranbir (who is now working in tourism) meet again?....

characters

Kanya(20 yrs old)- Kanya's hiding a big secret

Natasha( 20 yrs old)- Kanya's twin... she knows kanya's secret...

Shanaya (22 yrs old)- Kanya and Natasha's sis-in-law to be & Ranbirs cousin

Riya (20 yrs old)- Kanya's best friend who also knows kanya's secret

Ranbir (24 yrs old)- works for a tourist company

Harry( 26 yrs old)- kanya and natasha's brother and shanaya's fiancee

Ayaan ( 26 yrs old)- Harry's best friend

Dr. KC: Kanya's therapist

Dr. Miq: KC's supervisor who is inlove with her

Sara: KC's best friend and Miq's friend

so guys tell me what u think....

Part 1 pg 1... Kanya, natasha and riya come to kenya

Part 2 pg 2... Kanya admits she still loves Ranbir

Part 3 pg 2... Ranbir finds out Kanya is pregnant

Part 4 pg 3... Ranbir tells kanya he still loves her and she does the same

Part 5 pg 3... the whole truth and nothing but the truth

Part 6 pg 4... Ranbir proposes to Kanya

Part 7 pg 5... Ayan makes an entry

Part 8 pg 6... Ranbir and Kanya break up

Part 9 pg 7... Kanya meets a strange couple

Part 10 pg 7... World war three at ranbirs house

Part 11 pg 8... Kanya miscarries

Part 12 pg 9... Dhuk bhari kahani

Part 13 pg 10... ayan's secret out and Dr Miq!

Part 14 pg 12... KC and Miq Love story

Part 15 pg 14.... Miq finds out

part 16 pg 16... planning a suprise

part 17 pg 17... everything goes wrong

part 18 pg 19.... twists and turns

part 19 pg 21.... apologies

part 20 pg 22... joys and sorrows

its good so far and im happy ur FF is different from others..Ranbirs a sweetheart in this...what could K big secret be? continue soon 😊

ok heres the first bit... its in english... sorrry i find it hard to type in hindi.... and its abit boring coz i'm trying to establish the characters

Kanya, Natasha & Riya arrive in kenya for a 2 week holiday with their college. As kanya and natasha are from kenya they work thier way around the airport quickly.
K: natasha have u seen harry?
N: nope i wonder if he has forgotten.... u know how forgetful he is
H: i am shocked...
both girls turn around...
K&N:HARRY....
They both hug thier bro...
K: how are u?
N: where is our bhabhi
H: woa woa slow down... bhabhi will come at night... btw theres a welcome home party for u two so tell all ur friends to come ok
K&N: yay...
The three leave the airport to go to Harry's house.

At night the party is in full swing at harry's place...
Kanya and Natasha are mingling with thier college friend as well as friends from thier home town.... when suddenly...
K: HARRY.... HARRY....
H: What is it
K: what.... what is he doing here?
H: who?
K: Ranbir thats who...
H: you know.... i mean... he's.... he's your tour guide
K: what... and u didn't think it was important to telll me.... you know what....i am leaving... going back...
H: Kanya pls he's only your tour guide... i'll ask for another one
k: no no its fine... anyways natasha and riya are with me... so i guess i'll be fine...

Kanya goes into the garden to take in everything.... she still remembers the night Ranbir came to their farewell party with sheena... she had seen him kissing sheena and after that had neither seen nor spoken to him again....
R: kanya....
Kanya turns around....
K: what do u want?....
R: just wanted to ask how you are?
K: Ranbir get lost... i don't want to see u or speak to you.... i hate you you....
H: Ranbir go or i'll throw you out.... kanya lets go...

After the party...
Kanya is sitting alone... thinking about Alab* crying silently
*Alab is the baddie
N: kanya pls stop... ulll just upset ur self... he's not worth it
K: is any guy worth it?
N: you see ur Mr right will come and sweep you of your feet...
K: After everthing thats happened i don't believe there is a Mr right for me... I am destined to be alone...
N: aw Kanya... Natasha hugs her sister and kanya crys on her sisters shoulder... after awhile Natasha and kanya go to their rooms to sleep....

Ok thats it.... next update...
Kanya and Natasha move to the Hotel
Kanya and Natasha argue...
Ranbir avoids kanya

So pls tell me how it was... sori if its boring.... next update i'll try and make it more interesting

its good so far...ranbir is so innocent 😳 continue soon plzz

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

its good so far...ranbir is so innocent 😳 continue soon plzz

thnx... i will try for now am of to bed... have work tomorrow😭

hey great job!!! continue soon 😃

hey...
u got riya from my ff 😆
cute... 😉
cont soon 😃

Originally posted by: rainshine_11

hey...
u got riya from my ff 😆
cute... 😉
cont soon 😃

lol i think it just happened subconsiouly...😆

i thought she was kanya's friend anyway in the serial itself...

thnx for the comments i will try to update soon

i'm gonna try hindi.. i think it makes more sense... sori for mistakes

in the morning at Harry's place
Kanya comes down for breakfast... Natasha, Harry and Riya (who Kanya is suprised to see as she is supposed to be at the hotel) are having breakfast

K: hi guys... mei bhi ayi...
Kanya goes into the kitchen to get her breakfast...
When she returns and sits on the table she realises everyone has gone quiet

K: kya huwa... sab ke mu me dhaal bhara hai ya phir tum log tongue tied hogaye....
N: nahi woh... kya hai na ke humne Ranbir ko transfer kardiya hai
K: 😡 KYA... lekin kyu... mei use nahi darti... woh mera guzra hwa kaal hai... agar tum log ne ye kiya to woh kya sochega... ke me usko face nahi kar sakti...
H: nahi kanya... aisa kuch nahi hai....
K: Harry kaal meine tumse kya kaha tha.. ke Natasha aur riya mere saath hai muje kya ho sakta hai...
H: 😡 Usne tumhara dil tora... Tume rulaya... woh isliye Bach gaya kyunke tum yaha nahi thi... warna me uske haath pear(legs) tor deta woh nalaiyik
K: Harry 😡 Bus boht sunliya
Kanya walk off to pack her overnight bag since she and Natasha are goin to stay at the hotel with thier friends.

At the hotel kanya leaves harry without saying goodbye... when he is about to leave natasha comes to tell her
N: Harry jaa raha hai
K: toh mei kya karu
N: woh hamara bhai hai aur agar tumne use aise jaane diya to hamare dost kya sochenge....
K: teekh hai

Kanya goes to harry
H: sori kanya...kya karu mera DNA aisa hai... aur mue ghusa bohot jaldi ajati hai... lekin tumhara ghusa sirf special occasions mei nazar aata hai...
K: sorry harry...
H: Maine tourist manager se baat karli... Ranbir tumhara guide hoga... lekin apna khayal rakh na teekh hai
K: ok brother dearest

in the afternoon Ranbir comes to take them on their first trip.
Ken: Wow look at that... Kanya what is that?
K: Thats the Nyayo National Monument.
As the tour goes on... Kayna looks at Ranbir... and thinks to herself wohi ankhien... wohi chehra... wohi muskurahat... woh bilkul na badla...
N: Kyu uske bare mei soch rahi ho...
K: nahi to...
N: Tum janti ho ke mein tumhare feelings ko feel kar sakti hun... woh din yaad hai na.... Alab ka din
K: Natasha please choro ye baate...
N: Kyun saach karva hai na.... ranbir ke bare me soch rahi thi...
K: 😡 HAAN MEI USKE BARE MEI SOCH RAHI THI.... PYAR KARTI THI HUN USE...(starts crying) 😭 LEKIN SHAYID USKA PYAR MERI ZINDAGI MEI NAHI LIKHA
N: Kanya pls....
K: dekha tumne woh kaise muje ignore kar raha hai... nazre chara raha hain... jaise mei exist hi nahi karti...
N: kanya sambhalo apne aap ko.... abhi to aur imtihan hai tere liye... is liye hum yaha aye hai naa
K: Haan shayid tum theekh keh rahi ho....

In the evening...
R: yo Ken have you seen kanya....
Ken: nope she didn't come to dinner.... maybe she's in her room...
R: Already checked....
Natasha comes running out to the front desk...
N: ranbir ranbir chalo muje airport jana hai....
R: tum taxi le sakti ho.... bahar jao waha itne saare intezaar karahe hai....
N: Ranbir dekho... mei tume sub samja dungi... pls muje airport lejao... agar tum kanya se pyaar karte ho to muje lajao ge....

Ok thats it guys....

Coming up...
Why did Kanya run away?
Will Ranbir take Natasha to the airport?

👏 very good..its so sweet how there still in love..plz continue soon 😃