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Posted: 7 years ago
#41
Loved Sukor's talk .
Vicky is psycho.
Suraj is so protective. Loved how he dealt with these fools.

Waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
Hi long time ago my last update happened.
Short summary: Suraj is a goon with a heart he has taken care of all his friends. His love is Chakor she has stolen his heart in just a day... they have consummated n r deep in love. Vicky Singhania n his Father Singhania r evil. Chakor will now find out what Vicky is hiding.

Now she is at home with Suraj. Suraj who has threatened her colleague for the misbehave with her. Chakor is very happy today she didn't cook no it was Suraj who had told the others to prepare everything. At home her 2nd home .
Suraj was holding her hand when they come in.

Chakor was feeling uncomfortable as she wasn't sure abt Vicky - should I or shouldn't I tell him? -.

Suraj waves with his hand in front of her eyes. Chakor...?! Chakor...?! He looks here n there cups her face n gave her a small kiss.

Chakor smiles... Suraj! She shies n hugs him.
The other were watching like always .

Suraj; u where lost somewhere not answering me I thought to wake u! They forehead meets...

A cough... Suraj - hmm finally they come n that too on wrong timing as if they were waiting... -.
he looked at them with a death glares...

Chakor; Hey Suraj don't u dare to do anything to them!. She walks forward to them. These r my brothers.

Suraj gesture with his hand. Wah u changed the party!

Chakor laughs. Haan! N rushed back to him n gave him a tight hug.

Ajay; do we made food...
Aryan; actually we bought food!
Vivaan; haan we tried to cook but...
Adi; we failed miserably...

All sad faces... we r used to have food made by our Chakor Bhabhi n the food we made by ourself wasn't equal to her tasty food!!!

Chakor laughs... - I know Suraj y u r so attached to them! They r awesome different from each other yet they r United with a bond of love n understanding! -.

Suraj; I'm starving I don't care the food is bought or not I want it!

Chakor; okay u all sit n I will serve U!

Suraj; no u r our guest!

Chakor pouts. I'm what??? I guess!!! Oh please if u think abt me just like a guest then maybe I should leave!

Suraj hold her hand.



(My I can't get enough of it pic ).
Sorry Chakor u r not our guest...

Chakor; then?!

Suraj; pulls her toward him, their Bhabhi! Chakor smilies with a light blush on her cheeks.

Suraj; besides his... points on Ajay...

Ajay n Chakor; what? But y?

Suraj; u r his sister... {rivalry of serial hehe couldn't hold myself}.

Chakor laughs as well as Ajay.

Ajay; fine then leave her! Aryan; but that means she my sis too... oh what a twist! Now leave our sis!

Suraj face expression changes from happy to angry/ annoying.

Chakor; food okay I will serve now all of u sit.

Chakor was looking around. Where do u eat???

The boys; everywhere!

Chakor; No dastarkhan lo aur zameen pe lago {take a cloth n placed on the floor}!.

They obey but do they have a cloth big enough for all of them... Suraj vanished to the kitchen. He back hugs her...

Chakor; Suraj! We r not alone!

Suraj; I know but it feels like u r avoiding me..? R u hiding something from me?!.

Chakor turns she places her hands around his neck. I will tell u later!

Suraj nods.

The boys found two clothes they spread them out n sat on the edges...

Chakor comes with plates n cutlery. They all took it form her hands...

She tasted the food the boys had bought n adjusted the salt n spices in it.

Suraj; Chakor make it fast!!!

Chakor comes with the food n starts to serve them... they all ate together n Chakor was having her new family by her side.

Late in the night... Suraj has decided to stay at Chakors place for her safety but she rejected it.

Suraj; Chakor! I will stay here with U!

Chakor; okay but at least give me 5 - 10 min!

Suraj nods. Chakor I'm warning U! If u won't open the door I will break it!

Chakor knows he will do it! Chakor changed the bedsheet as in the morning she couldn't... she cleans up a bit n then opens the door...

Suraj looked at her... he pulls her toward him. U clean up here?! Y? I love everything I don't care how it looks like!

Chakor smiles...

Suraj; now tell me what u r hiding?!

Chakor lowered her gaze. Suraj u r right there is something fishy with Vicky Singhania he has behaved very rudely n the way he shout at me...! I think he is scared of U!

Suraj; I told u to stay away from him! Chakor; I am but u know what he said to me?!

Suraj; no what!

Chakor; before I left he called me in cabin.

Suraj; what! His anger raised. Y?

Chakor; to warn me... he said before...

Vicky; this is an office not ur home! How dare u to call a goon into my office n let him threaten one of my staff members?
Chakor I don't care this is an office to work not ur bedroom where u can call someone n he comes to ur satisfaction.

Suraj fumes he made a fist... what he said to u in his cabin! He asked in anger tone...


Chakor; he said... I know u n Suraj had an intimate night...

Suraj looked at her... he looked at the room... to figure out how he could know that...

Chakor; he further said... not to call u ever again to the office or else he will call the police and will make false accusations on u!

Suraj; I will come n kill him if necessary!

Chakor; no that is exactly what he wants! U can't give him this!

Suraj; but...!

Chakor seals his lips...

Suraj; broke the kiss. How he could know abt our night?.

Chakor; I don't know?!

Suraj; does any of ur colleagues lives nearby?

Chakor was thinking... haan the one whom u treated! He lives just to 2 streets away from here!

Suraj; maybe he was the one Ajay told me!

Chakor; what???

Suraj: last night there were some noises Ajay couldn't see the face but it was a male person. Maybe it was the colleague of urs...

Chakor; Suraj! She hugs him... u know I will find evidences against him... u r saying he works with his father then I will find out!

Suraj; no it is too risky.

Chakor; I will n that is final! Suraj pushes her on the bed... n kisses her passionately...

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Sorry again for the delay...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Krupy

Loved Sukor's talk .

Vicky is psycho.
Suraj is so protective. Loved how he dealt with these fools.

Waiting for next.



Thank u sorry I didn't got the notification.
Thank u dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
thanks
Very nice

liked it

keep going.

good Chakor informs Suraj about Vicky
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: sumsukor

thanks

Very nice

liked it

keep going.

good Chakor informs Suraj about Vicky



Thank u dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Interesting update
Love the bond between Suraj and his friends.
It's good that Chakor told him about Vicky and now they have an idea about who was spying on them.

Keep going 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Interesting update

Love the bond between Suraj and his friends.
It's good that Chakor told him about Vicky and now they have an idea about who was spying on them.

Keep going👍🏼



Thank you I will try to give u a fast update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Hii Sukorian
Loved the update.
Like the bonding between Chakor and the boys.
Loved how Suraj sensed that Chakor is hiding something and glad she shared with him about Vicky.

Waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Krupy

Hii Sukorian

Loved the update.
Like the bonding between Chakor and the boys.
Loved how Suraj sensed that Chakor is hiding something and glad she shared with him about Vicky.

Waiting for next.



Thank you dear I will try to update ASAP
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Hi
This is a short one!

Recap; a family moment of Chakor n the boys! Suraj got to know everything from Chakor abt Vickys treat.

Suraj was lying on the bed next to Chakor she cuddling him n rubbing her nose on him all the time to irritate him...

Suraj hugs her tighter... she laughs as his beard starts to tickling her...

Suraj stop!!! Please Suraj!!! Haha it's tickling me!!!

Suraj kisses her nose... then u better stop irritating me.

Chakor nods she was wearing his shirt lying on his chest when they heard a sound... both looked up...

Suraj; what was this?

Chakor frighten she holds him tight. I don't know...

Suraj holds her. He consoles her. Let me check! Chakor nods but hold his hand. Be careful! Suraj nods. He releases his hand n left to the balcony...

He sees a shape of a man... he took out his mobile and calls Ajay...

Phone convo

Ajay picked up; Hello Suraj what happen y u call so late...?
Suraj; where r U?.
Ajay; Washroom cleaning my handsome face.
Suraj hits his palm on his forehead n shook it. Get out of it n look down to the alley.
Ajay; what y?
Suraj; u said there was a man yesterday right?!
Ajay; haan! Is he back?
Suraj; I think so!
Ajay thought for a moment. U don't do anything I have an idea u just wait okay?
Suraj; fine!

They cut the call n Suraj was watching down...
Chakor comes from the back n hugs him. Do u think it is the same man? Suraj; haan he is continuously watching up...

Chakor felt uncomfortable. Suraj turns. Hey... he cups her face... I'm here with U! Nothing can come between us! Not even a underworld goon!

Chakor smiles...

Ajay; u understood what I said?
Vivaan; areh Haan Baba just wait n see.
Aryan; haan u just we will do it.
Adi; r u sure these two should do that? Ajay shook his head but they were perfect for it...

Both went out of the house n acted like drunken...

Vivaan; eeeyy eeyyy
Aryan; eeeyyy k hiccups kiyaaa...
Vivaan; wwwooo wooh
Aryan; aaarrreee wwhhhooo rrr u?

The man was confused who these two clowns r n what they want from him.

Aryan; nevvver seeen him he hiccups re

Vivaan; dittt hiccupe tooo.

The man gulps.

Suraj was still watching n shaking his head. Chakor back hugs him. Leave them I'm sure they will handle it. Suraj nods. I hope they do!

The man was trying to find an escape but unfortunately the both side to runaway were blocked by them.

Vivaan; oh Mister! Confused?!.

The man nods.

Aryan; Gud! Not taste this!

The two of them starts to trash him.

The man; stop please stop.

Ajay n Adi come out too. Ajay; who send u n y?.

The man; I work for Singhania n Vicky Singhania told me to keep an eye on Chakor! He doesn't want to share her!

Ajay; that means U have spread the news out that she is intimidating with Suraj?!.

The man nods. Under he order of Vicky Saab!

The 4 beats him up n warned him to come again or else he won't leave the area alive!

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Hope u like it?!
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