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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow lovely so the beast lost himself to the bold and beautiful..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

Wow amazing story...i loved your both stories...you are mind blowing...



Thank u 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumsukor

Wow lovely so the beast lost himself to the bold and beautiful..

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Haan he did Thank u
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Shopping

Hi

Recap; flashback of Sukor meeting.

Chakor was at the office working late. Suraj had warned her to come home alone always take an auto but unfortunately tonight there was no cab coming. She tries alot n wait but nothing... Chakor looking at her watch it is already 7 p.m. I'm so late. I can't stay longer her I will walk nothing will happen.

Suraj was waiting for her return. He was continuesly looking down from the roof. Where is she y hasn't she returned yet? I should have given her my number.

The boys come. Oh Majnu {Romeo} hasn't ur Laila {Juliet} arrived yet? Suraj gave them a death glare. Vivaan; Oh come on leave him alone. Suraj give him a cute smile. When he notice a car...

Suraj rushed down the others were watching from the roof.

Vicky just stopped the car. Chakor; thank u sir... Vicky; gave her a death glare. Chakor I told u to call me Vicky we r not only colleagues right? Chakor nod. Sorry S... Vicky. Vicky smiles. Hmm Chakor r u coming to the party? Chakor; Haan S.. she bite on her tongue. Vicky I'm coming hmm Is is allowed to have a company? Vicky; sure u can. No prob. See u then. Chakor smiles she was abt to open the door when the door gets open.

Suraj was there giving Vicky a death glare n a cute smile to Chakor. Suraj; u r late. Chakor. was suprised but she knew it. She felt his present near her. Sorry I'm late but it wasn't my fault there was no auto coming. But S... Vicky give me a lift. Suraj looked inside the car. Thank u Saab. He salutes him closing the door.

Chakor was looking at him open mouth. Suraj this was very rude of u. Suraj; So what? I told to stay away from him y u took his lift y didn't u took the bus? Chakor stood there her hands on her hips giving him a death glare which was giving him a shiver.

The boys were holding their laughs. Ajay; Yeh to gaya {he is death}. Aryan; Yeah for sure. Adi; oh oh look. All were looking.

Chakor; Suraj! She starts to hit him. U r so bad. He was giving me a lift at this time which was very grateful of him. At this time to get a bus is very difficult. She pout n stamped away from there. Suraj turns to her but Chakor had vanished. Suraj hold his forehead n the boys were bursting out in a loud laughter.

Chakor was taking her time. Suraj was back at home sitting with the other's in the hall.

Vivaan; hmm I'm starving. Aryan; My bro me too. Ajay; U r really not alone. Adi; but what can we do our boss has ruined our dinner. Suraj looked at them. Hogaya {u all done}?. Boys; hahahaha.

All of a sudden they hear a loud knock. Suraj stood up. Wait. They all stood back. {another FB on next update how they come together}.

Suraj had a gun behind his back in his jeans. His right hand was resting on it just in case {He didn't kill it's for safety reasons only}. He opens the door to find his Chakor standing there with a few boxes of tiffin. Suraj smiles at her. He took the tiffin boxes n hand them over to the boys. Happy? He asked them. They boys just grin .

Chakor took Suraj hand. N u will come with me. Suraj looks at her confused. Where? Chakor; Shopping!. Suraj; but y? Chakor told him abt the function. Suraj; cups her face. There is no need to go there. U know I don't like it if u r around him. Chakor took his hands. U know I asked if it is possible to have a company n they agreed. Suraj; What u mean? Chakor; we r going for shopping for both of us. Suraj hits his hand on his forehead.

Chakor wave the others a bye n pulls Suraj out. Suraj pouts Chakor I'm hungry at least let me eat. Chakor hold his hand. Do u want to eat with the boys or with me?. Suraj hold her hand even tighter. So shopping n dinner? Chakor smiles with a nod.

Chakor n Suraj took a cab. Haan Suraj has connections . Chakor was happy that Suraj agrees to come with her. At the mall they first went to the food cornor. Suraj; I thought u will invite me for grand dinner but here we r just eating junk food. Nothing is do tasty like ur hand made food. Chakor blushes by his words. She took a piece of her food n feeds him. Suraj; Mmh this tastes better. Chakor; aahh. Suraj feeds her too.

Unknowingly of their relationship they r in a relationship.

Chakor n Suraj finished their food. Suraj was holding her hand he likes it alot to be close to her. She doesn't mind his possessive behaviour she loves it somehow she feels secure.

Chakor looked at many stores but nothing of them she likes. Suraj let's go let's look for u. I don't like anything here. Suraj nod. Chakor shows many suites but Suraj doesn't like to wear it. Chakor; hmm Suraj what this? Suraj nod that is perfect. He took it n wears it. Chakor; wow! . Suraj; Btw when is the party? Chakor; Today at 10 p.m. Suraj looks at her in shock. Chakor y didn't u told me that? Chakor made a puppy face. Suraj sorry. Let's go haan. We will buy this n then my dress n then... Suraj hold her. He saw a dress he turns her. That dress U will were this one. Chakors eyes widen. Wow Suraj tumhari nazar to kamaal ki hai {U have a gud eye}. Chakor took the dress n wore it. Suraj was lost in her beauty.

Suraj calls the shop clerk. She needs a bag, sandals n accessories. Thr shop clerk nod n give her everything. Chakor was fully suited. Like Suraj...



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Next Update Party with trouble
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I HAD ADD A PICTURE BUT IT IS NOT SHIWN IMAGINE SUKOR IN THE OUTFIT OF THE JASHANE TASHAN 2018.
Edited by _Sukorian_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
Awesome update waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi
Awesome updates.

Part 2

Loved Chakor's fearless attitude, no wonder Suraj fell for her straight away.
Loved the samosa scene,

Part 3

Glad that Chakor thought of taking Suraj with her to the party. Loved protective Suraj. True what you wrote, they're already in a relationship without their knowledge.
Chakor is a good girlfriend taking care of Suraj's friends.
Loved how Sukor fed each other, it was so romantic. Love how they picked each other's outfits, a true couple.

Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Party with trouble n love

Hi

Shanaya__Khan

recap; Sukor went for Shopping n dinner date .




Chakor was happy with Suraj choice she felt comfortable n Suraj was just looking at her with amaze n love. Chakor could feel it. She was having goosebumps but she liked it.

Suraj was looking at her. He saw how she was giving him secret looks through the window. He was giving her a cute smile n was lost in her beauty.

Both were giving each other the feeling to be the only one on earth just made for each other.

The shopmanager come. Sir ur car is here... He said a bit scared knowing him as a local goon. But Suraj never shows his anger on anyone he was very calm n with Chakor he was a different human being. But hus nature is gud. The area is not only under his control no it under his protection!. {I will give u a flashback as promised of the met with the boys it will include his nature too}.

Suraj thanked him n paid the bill. The manager was scared to accept it but in Suraj eyes he saw the anger iln accept it.

Chakor was holding his hand tight. When u order a car?

Suraj tighten his hand. When u were changing.

Chakor gave him a look with a pout. Don't think I'm that naive.

Suraj give her a smirk. Na never u r my jungli billi {wild cat}.

Chakor opens her mouth. Jungli Billi how so?

Suraj my secret . Chakor; ok my Pakhandi. Suraj hn Pakhandi {double-face shows something else than he is}.

Both goes to the car it was a small car enough for both of them. They were sitting at the backseats while a driver was driving them to the address Chakor gave them.

Suraj was keeping her close he even put his hand around her waist She was leaning on his shoulder with a smile on her face.

Soon they arrived at the hotel xyz. The driver wanted to leave but Suraj demands the key for the car. The driver handover him car key n left.

Chakor was confused. Suraj will u drive us home? Suraj nod. She gave him a look which says. Let's see if u can resist the free alcohol.

Suraj; What? don't u trust me?

Chakors eyez widen she rubs to him n hugs him. More than myself. Suraj appreciate the hug with kiss on her back head.

Both enters the hotel n the party was going on.

Vicky was impatiently waiting for her arrival what he didn't knew was that her plus one is no one else than Suraj.

Vicky was shaking the hands with other partners. His guest n colleague's what know one knew was that Mr. Singhania was also at the hotel in a back room. doing his dirty work which is covered by the "gud" work of Vicky.

Chakor n Suraj together holding their hands. Vicky was busy with his hosting work when he heard someone of his stuff memeber.

'Look Chakor she is looking beautiful'. 'Yes u r right n who is this handsome hunk with her?'.
'Don't know but looks like they r a couple!'.
'Such a beautiful couple!'.
'r u all mad he is a local goon!'.
'what a goon?'.
'yeah I'm sure he has threaten her!'
'but y?'
'he is a goon! He will get free food n drinks here that's y!'.
'Right!'
'poor Chakor!'
'we have to help her!'
'I won't fight with a goon will u?'

All were scared. Vicky saw Suraj who was ready to leave. But it was Chakor who was holding his hand tight. Both heard the whisper of the other's.

Suraj looked at her with a sad face. I think it is better if I will leave!.

Chakor made up her mind. No I wanted to come with u. U will stay.

Vicky was shocked to hear this.

Chakor; I don't care what the other's say. U r my guest.

Vicky comes to them. I'm sorry Chakor but he has to leave. My guest r scared of him.

Chakor shook her head. Vicky got angry but Suraj handled the situation.

Suraj; Chakor... he cupped her face. I will be waiting for u! I'm ur driver . He even kissed her forehead n left. Chakor was heart broken.

Suraj was waiting like he said. Suddenly a goon comes n takes him in from the backdoor. Mr. Singhania called for him.

Suraj enters the room while he hears the music from the main hall. He was lost he didn't care if the scold of Mr. Singhania being here as a guest of whom n how he dares to interfer in his son's business n interest... bla bla bla...



{please image what originally in the serial happened}

Mr. Singhania was waiting of Suraj apology but Suraj was still in his dream world. Mr. Singhania stood up n slapped him to bring him back to here n now!. Suraj was holding his cheek he lowered his gaze.

Mr. Singhania; Don't u dare to ignore me again. Now get lost from here n don't u show me ur face before I call u.

Suraj in anger...
Chakor was feeling uncomfortable angry on the other's she decided to leave. Without anyone's notice she vanished from the party looking for Suraj.

Chakor was looking left n right - Oh no did he really leave mr here alone? -.

Someone comes from back n covered her eyes. This is the touch she would even recognise if she had lost her memory.

Chakor; Suraj!. She turns n hugs him. Suraj; u thought that I left u, right?. Chakor shook her head. Suraj gave her an intense look n she nod in yes.

Suraj; I will never leave u Even if God say me to leave u. I won't.

Chakor hugs him again.

Suraj n Chakor sat in the car n drove home.

The whole area know that something was between but no one questioned it as they know Suraj n his nature. Chakor too made a place in the hearts of the other's.

Suraj drops her to her home. Chakor wqs surprised. My clothes? Suraj u always surprise me. Suraj; Really that is very gud it will never get bored. Chakor smield at him.

Suraj was nervous hmm. I think I will leave now. Chakor looked down. But she didn't say anything. Suraj was near the door.

Chakor; Suraj... I... I DON'T WANT TO BE ALONE!.
Suraj moved further. Chakors eyes got teary did she misunderstand his behaviour toward her? She hears the sound of a closing door a tear rolled down her cheek. She looked up to find her love in front of her.

Chakors sad face turned to a big smile. She runs to him he took her in bone crush hug.

Both were lying on the same bed in the embrance of each other. Chakor was kissing him while he was enjoying it...

...

Hope u liked it

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Posted: 7 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Hi

Awesome updates.

Part 2

Loved Chakor's fearless attitude, no wonder Suraj fell for her straight away.
Loved the samosa scene,

Part 3

Glad that Chakor thought of taking Suraj with her to the party. Loved protective Suraj. True what you wrote, they're already in a relationship without their knowledge.
Chakor is a good girlfriend taking care of Suraj's friends.
Loved how Sukor fed each other, it was so romantic. Love how they picked each other's outfits, a true couple.

Eagerly waiting for next.



THANK U FOR GIVIBG ME THE BEAUTIGUL FEEDBACK
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
excellent deary
jsut loving it...

so naive Sukor are


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update.
Soon Vicky and Suraj will clash.
Loved Sukor scene when Chakor was looking for Suraj after leaving the party. Chakor can never forget his touch and Suraj would never leave her.
So finally Sukor realized their feelings, awesome scene.

Eagerly waiting for next.

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