Sukor - My Life belongs to U (part 9) - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31
good one
Nice to see him like the robinhood rather...

good going

nice the way you portray sukor relationship
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing update
So Sukor have become a couple, loved their scenes.

Suraj is so kind hearted and his friends aren't goons. I feel sad that he had to work for Sunghania again.

Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sumsukor

good one

Nice to see him like the robinhood rather...

good going

nice the way you portray sukor relationship



Thank u double
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
Hi

Recap; Chakor n Suraj had a loved filled night. Suraj told her all abt him n his friends.

Suraj was wearing his clothes he was looking at her. Chakor was in pain but for Suraj it was unbearable. Chakor looks at him... his painful face made her scare. She rushed to him.

Chakor; Suraj what happen? Y r u looking so sad?!

Suraj; u have pain bcz of me? He was caressing her face.

Chakor smiles at him. Hmm I have pain but it is ok.

Suraj; how can u say this? How can u say it is ok?

Chakor; I got the pain by making love with u. I would repeat it anytime again.

Suraj; what...? No! He kisses her cheeks.

Chakor; Suraj plz trust me I'm not in that pain the pain is nothing in comparing to the love I received from u.

Suraj looked at her. U liked it?

Chakor; very much!

She comes close to him n sealed his lips. Suraj was lost in her kiss he was holding her bare back both noses touched while the kiss took place.

Suraj looked at her lost but she needs to go. She got fresh n took her bag. She holds Suraj hand while walking to the bus station. The whole colony was with Suraj.

Suraj; u don't need to travel by bus if u want I can organise a car daily.

Chakor smiles. Y I don't need everyone knows I'm the queen of Suraj the goon's heart. Suraj looked down. U think I'm a goon. Chakor places her hands around his neck. Haan I think u r one. Suraj lowered his head. Chakor; u know what u steal day for day? Suraj shook his head. Chakor; my heart... it was with me when I come to live her. But from the day I met u it had started to beat for u only. Suraj holds her waist. One day I will make u mine. Chakor smiles. I'm already urs. She kisses his cheek when the bus arrived she sat in n waved a bye.

Suraj was back in his house the boys were still sleeping. Suraj didn't care he was back on his roof from where he has the best overview to watch for his people.

Chakor arrived the office almost everyone had started to gossip behind her back.
Chakor was doing her daily job she didn't care but one male worker come.

Male; listen how much he pays u to sleep with him. Chakor looks at him in disgust. She gave him a tight slap. Shut up u moron.

Male; u damn bitch. R u just his mistress or u also give this friends some pleasure time with u?

Chakor was shocked to hear that. She was scared n upset. Vicky had initiated to insult her in front of all.

Vicky - that is the price of betraying me! I gave u a job n many times I gave a lift n u refuses me by choosing him no way! -.

Chakor; just shut up! I have a relationship with Suraj n u want to insult me let's see if ur tongue will work if he will be here in front of u!

Chakor left the office in tears she calls for Suraj...

Suraj picked up the phone with a big smile.

Suraj; Chakor u already miss me?
Chakor was crying n snobbish. Suraj; I'm coming the others were awake by now n follows him. Chakor was waiting outside the office of Suraj.

Suraj runs to her. He enclosed her in his arms. Chakor told him everything under tears. Suraj anger fumes like that from the boys. They enter the office Vicky never thought Suraj will do that as his father had strictly ordered him to stay away of his son's business.

Suraj; Chakor who?

Chakor looked at the guy. He she shies on him. Suraj took out his gun. {he don't use it for real just for extra drama n scare}.

Suraj; Chakor is mine only. Don't u dare to say something to her or get close to her. Another bad word on her character n will pull the trigger n all the bullets will be in ur head. U got it? The man nod in scare. Suraj; clean this disgusting. He shown on the mans pant which was wet... .

Suraj turns around. Haan I'm a local goon n she is mine only mine if u all want to say something. Then I'm here say it out or keep ur stupid mouth shut! Don't u dare to talk abt her bad behind her back she has the support of me.

Chakor hugs him she knew he will be always there. There was no one else who could give her the love n safety he faces her.

Suraj left but not completely he was waiting for her outside the office. His friends left them alone.

Adi; Majnu was mad but he has lost all.
Vivaan; haan he is a combination of all crazy lovers.
Aryan; u mean Majnu, Ranjha n Romeo?
Ajay; it is not complete...

All looked at him.
Ajay; are yaar include him too na.

Ohh haan right.

Chakor was doing her work Vicky comes out of his cabin n shouts at Chakor.

Vicky; this is an office not ur home! How dare u to call a goon into my office n let him threaten one of my staff members?

Chakor stood up. Sorry Sir but he...

Vicky showed his palm . Chakor I don't care this is an office to work not ur bedroom where u can call someone n he comes to ur satisfaction.

Chakor couldn't believe what he was saying Suraj was right it never seems like it.

Chakor hold herself. I'm sorry it won't happen again n if u want I will resign.

Vicky - no I don't want that! -. Stop this u r a gud worker I can't let u go for ur mistake in choosing a partner. I'm giving u a last chance. If u fail again I will fire u.

Chakor nods she continues with her work trying to find some leads abt his connection with Singhania's dirty work.

It was very late Suraj was still there everyone saw him he wasn't doing anything besides playing with the street kids.

Chakor comes down n felt him she looks to the across street to see him.

Chakor rushed to him. Both hugged. They went home but Chakor was lost in her thoughts...

Should I tel him abt what Vicky said????
...
Hope u liked it

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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
Wow very very nice story...plzzz update soon...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

Wow very very nice story...plzzz update soon...😳


Thank u will try my best 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
Awesome update pleaseee update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Shar456

Awesome update pleaseee update soon


Thank u will try my best
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Interesting update
Vicky is so cheap, how could he send someone to spy on them then show the photos in the office 😡. He thought his father's reputation will save him from Suraj.
Chakor has started to see Vicky's true face, hope she finds evidence against him.
Loved how Suraj stood up for Chakor.
Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Interesting update

Vicky is so cheap, how could he send someone to spy on them then show the photos in the office😡. He thought his father's reputation will save him from Suraj.
Chakor has started to see Vicky's true face, hope she finds evidence against him.
Loved how Suraj stood up for Chakor.
Eagerly waiting for next.



thank u haan she will find 😉 n if not she has Suraj

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