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Shruti

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hello friends. I am Shruti.

I posted this story in wattpad and I thought to post this also in India forum.😳 Please read and tell me your views.

Here is the story.

Part 1

In a big bungalow,

A girl of age 24 is sitting on a big sofa. She is sipping her hot cup of tea and watching TV.

"Famous artist aur Shivaay Singh Oberoi ka bhai Omkara Singh Oberoi ko aaj subha Mumbai police ne unki art gallery se arrest kiya hai. Unn par ilzaam lagaya gaya hai ki unhone mashoor business man Aryan Singhania ke ghar pe jaake unka murder kar diya hai. Sutron se pata chala hai ki Aryan Singhania ke girlfriend Omkara Singh Oberoi ke ex-girlfriend hai. Aur sunne ko yeh bhi mila hai ki Singhania's ke saath Oberoi's ke purani dushmani bhi hai. Toh Mr. Omkara Singh Oberoi ko ye kadam kyun uthana pada. Kya iske piche reason jealousy hai ya phir rivalry?"

"Hahahahaha", the girl who is sitting on the sofa laughs as she turn off the TV. " ab hogi meri jeet aur oberoi's ki barbadi." Suddenly she becomes serious, "kaha thaa maine uss Omkara Singh Oberoi se mujh se panga mat lo. Par woh meri baat nahin maana. Ab usse pata chalega ke Ridhima se dushmani mod lene se kya halat hota hai. Hahahahaha..."

Index...

Part 1- Page 1

Part 2- Page 2

Part 3- Page 2

Part 4- Page 3

Edited by Silent_reader_ - 7 years ago

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The_RomancePen

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hi shruthi

Nice to see you here welcome buddy 🤗

i am sure ur ff is gonna be a hit here too

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Shruti

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sirimiri
Interesting start continue soon.

Thank you so much dear😛

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Shruti

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi
Hi shruthi
Nice to see you here welcome buddy 🤗
i am sure ur ff is gonna be a hit here too

Hii aarohi 🤗

Thank you so much dear😳

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Shruti

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21
Interesting...
Continue Soon

Thank you so much😊.

Will continue soon..😳

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LittleAngel18

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Posted: 7 years ago

Shru Di...Glad to see you here (vartika here)

This is my most favourite ff till now, and I know it's gonna rock here also...

Edited by LittleAngel18 - 7 years ago

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Shruti

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: LittleAngel18
Shru Di...Glad to see you here (vartika here)
This is my most favourite ff till now, and I know it's gonna rock here also...

Hii vartu 🤗. I am super duper glad to see here.

Thank you so much😳. I hope so...

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Shruti

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hii friends.

Thanks for views and the responses.

Part 2

In Oberoi Mansion,

Shivaay Singh Oberoi throws his phone in anger. All the family members are in tension. Our Rudy boy is crying vigorously.

Shiv- Ek lawyer... Ek bhi lawyer ready nahin hai humara case lene ko. Humara family lawyer bhi bhaag gaya. Jitne bhi lawyer se baat hui sab bol rahe hai ye case hum jeet nahin sakenge. (He sits on the sofa)

Rudy- (crying) Bhaiyaa..Kya...kya hum O ko bacha nahin payenge.

Shivaay consoles rudra.

Shiv- Nahin Rudy. Hum om ko jaroor bachayenge. Kuch bhi ho jae main apni Bhai ko kuch nahin hone dunga.

Rudy- Mujhe pata hai woh ridhima ne ye sab kuch kiya hai. Usne hi O ko fasaya hai.

Ani- Iss chantomai ki itni himmat. Mann toh kar raha hai apni chameli se isko bohot maarun.

Jhanvi- Shivaay plz kuch karo...mere bete ko bachalo...Tej...

Tej- Apne aap ko sambhalo jhanvi. Kuch nahin hoga tumhare bete ko.

Shiv- Hna bade Papa.. Par...

Jhanvi- Par kya Shivaay.

Shiv- Par saare saboot om ke khilaf hai. Agar humen case jitna hai toh humen ek strong lawyer ki jaroorat hai. Aur..

Tej- (sighs) Aur humen koi lawyer hi nahin mil raha hai.

Shiv- Hna..

Dadi went to temple and lightens a diya.

Dadi- He Bhagwaan...ye kaisi mushibat aa gayi humari parivaar ke upar. Mere pote om ko ye saja kyun mil raha hai. Humen pata hai ki usne kuch nahin kiya hai phir bhi hum kuch nahin kar paa rahe hai. He Bhagwaan ab aap hi bhej dijiye kisiko uski madad karne ke liye.

In an another Mansion,

A girl turn off the TV which is telecasting the news about omkara arrest. She becomes sad. Another girl comes and see the sadness in her face.

Second girl- Didi ab aap ye mat kehna ki aap uss Omkara Singh Oberoi ki madad karne wale ho.

First girl- Nahin nahin bhavya...main esa kuch nahin karne wala hun.

Second girl (bhavya)- Aap sochna bhi mat...itne saare baatein hone ke baad aapko uski madad karna bhi nahin chahiye. Woh isike layak hai.

The first girl gives a faint smile to her sister but she knows in her heart that Omkara Singh Oberoi didn't do anything and he doesn't deserve this.

So here is part 2. Let me know your views...

Love from,

Shruti...

Edited by Silent_reader_ - 7 years ago

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sandjanarai

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Posted: 7 years ago

I love the concept. Amazing dear. The first girl is Gauri? Why Bhavya said that who isi le layek hai? Gauri has a past with Om? Gauri is a lawyer, means well educated and i hope a mouth which she can't controle. A bold and independent Gauri. I hope so... update soon. And if is possible pm me

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Shruti

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: sandjanarai
I love the concept. Amazing dear. The first girl is Gauri? Why Bhavya said that who isi le layek hai? Gauri has a past with Om? Gauri is a lawyer, means well educated and i hope a mouth which she can't controle. A bold and independent Gauri. I hope so... update soon. And if is possible pm me

Thank you so much😳

Yes the first girl is gauri. And your guesses are too correct.

I will PM you😛

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