Jannat Ve Os On Meevan

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Posted: 7 years ago
#1
Hi friends.
You all know me
So no more introduction
I am gonna start with 2nd os of the forum.

Jannat Ve

"Hey brother. Let's go to a fresh bakery and order cake for your birthday. "Amaya says lying on the bed lazily. Vivaan gets angry on her. He shouts at her "Amaya it's already 10. You should wake up . Cake, no need of that your smile is most important to me " . He leaves saying this much. He saw silky standing and listening all this things . He got a lot angry and asked to her rudely "Is there any joke going on?😡". She got tensed. She would not reply anything. She left smiling. He was annoyed by this "How strange these people are😆". He left the room. As he went down he saw all the light's off. Someone from backside kept hand on his shoulders. He turned ,he saw meera with a candle. She wished him silently "happy birthday Vivaan. "Suddenly a flash of light appeared and she disappeared. He got emotional and started wipping sadly "Why always you come closer to me? I know you are not any more but still I can feel you? You expressed that you love me then why did you leave me alone ?" He went to his room sadly. He picked up the photo frame of Meera. He remembered his past days.

Past few year's ago ,

It was 9 when the college bell rang. All the students rushed to their classrooms. Vivaan,the hero of the college has just entered when she shouted from the last bench of the classroom"happy birthday chotu!". He got embarrassed. He replied "come one meera. Don't tease me . Its my birthday yaar. " . A beautiful girl came out from a corner. She was Meera. Suddenly the sound of a gun was hearable . The Goli of the gun went and straightly hurted on Meera 's heart. She fell down. The goons blasted the college with throwing a bomb. That time Vivan was hurted. He searched for Meera. At last he found her outside their classroom. He found , a locket in his hand. That was the gift for him by her.

Coming back...
Vivaan took put that necklace for his pocket. He started saying for her. Just then, Amaya calls him for breakfast. "Yes, I am coming ." Vivaan said. He hides the frame and the locket in his wardrobe.

Curtains down...

End of this story
Thank you 😳

Edited by .ROSY. - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
This is a heart breaking OS 🥺Meera is dead😭😭
Loved it.
He still have her gift with him❤️
Beautiful OS Rose!
Regards
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Posted: 7 years ago
#3
Hey Rosie! Beautiful OS but its just so sad!
Keep it up!

(Wish you can continue with a happy end?😳)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: Kowsi

Hey Rosie! Beautiful OS but its just so sad!

Keep it up!

(Wish you can continue with a happy end?😳)


Thank you...
Will try it surely 😉😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: NarbhiForever..

This is a heart breaking OS 🥺Meera is dead😭😭

Loved it.
He still have her gift with him❤️
Beautiful OS Rose!
Regards


Thank you...
I am glad you liked it😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#6
very emotional & sad os..loved it..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: libo

very emotional & sad os..loved it..


THANK YOU...
DO KEEP READING MY STORIES😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#8
YOU killed Meera 😭
WHYYY? 😲
*Emotions activated* *falls down in shock*
Well written OS though dear 👏👏👏
Await more such lovely pieces from you ❤️
Please write another happy one🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: Tme0w

YOU killed Meera 😭

WHYYY? 😲
*Emotions activated* *falls down in shock*
Well written OS though dear 👏👏👏
Await more such lovely pieces from you ❤️
Please write another happy one🤗

Sure
Actually I like writing sad one...will try to write happy one next time...
Thank you
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Posted: 7 years ago
#10
I loved it! It also broke my heart at the same time.💔
Plz do write more on them.. 😳

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