Just another story... PRINAL !!! OS

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hoping you all will read and comment.
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She ( Mrinal)
She stared at the blank canvas. The brush loosely held between her fingers. The paints lay unopened.
Her glance shifted to the calm sea, her face relaxed as she watched the waves dance gently with the fishing boat.
She glanced back at the canvas, white and empty. She wanted to be empty in her depths.
Yet when she closed her eyes, they nightmares recurred.
She wanted to forget the deep love she once had felt.
She wanted to forget.
She hated herself for even remembering the feelings.

Him (Prithvi)
He was on a vacation he reminded himself. His fingers where still playing away on the keys, scheduling meeting for the coming week.
Damn prithvi, he muttered to himself, take a break.
He was in Goa, a much deserved break from hectic program schedules.
His dance company was shaping up well.
He turned away from his laptop to stare at the calm sea.
The waves appeared to dance. He chuckled, ya he saw rhythm in everything.
The love for music had made him take a brave step of leaving a comfortable 9 to 5 job and put himself into a risky but passionate adventure.
He sipped his coffee, one hand reached to touch the flute, time to play some music.
The coffee was forgotten, as his lips touched the flute.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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So we have a scarred Mrinal here...hmmm...nice...
it's easy to say *move on* but the question is though you may have become an adult , the child within, never forgets the emotions and is still whimpering with fear in that dark corner of subconsciousness...
Nice start,Vidya
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ff with poetry i like this take on Prinal bravo Jaya..i hope u plan to take this further
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sorry Jaya, I have been addressing you as Vidya... apologies for my mistake
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30

Sorry Jaya, I have been addressing you as Vidya... apologies for my mistake

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That's perfectly ok dear.
And thank you so much for the comments.
Will try and up date quickly.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Indii

Ff with poetry i like this take on Prinal bravo Jaya..i hope u plan to take this further


Thank you so much😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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First was imagining that canvas painting etc in Palace set up
then had to switch back to normal mode😆😆
well written😃
Edited by -Mano- - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Di it's wonderful!! Really loved it!!👏😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you all for reading commenting and appreciating. Will update soon.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow! Loving this take on PriNal❤️

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