FF: Her King! (Completed - 23/02)

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Krupy

@Krupy

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#311

Maithu my honest apologies for not commenting on this story for quite some time. Was very busy.

Well, since the last time I commented till now, a lot of things changed in the story. Loved everything. And I'm thankful that the crown didn't fell in wrong hands not for even second.

I absolutely didn't expected that truths will be revealed the way they are. Of course I was (like always with your stories) positive surprised.

I'm looking forward to see what will King do next.

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#312

Amazing update!

So finally Suraj became King.

Imli showed her true colors very quickly.

Loved how the assembly finished the procedures so quickly, they wanted to make sure Suraj became king.

And the best part was how Suraj kept looking for Chakor.

Eagerly waiting for next.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu just loved it
am so happy for the Queen and Paakhi more for Suraj..

loved their genuine happiness

and dude is misssing her...

Waiting the way he is going to get her in style for sure and waiting for my special moments which you promised!!!

tomorrow???? Maithu for once why dont you stick to Indian Standard Time rather than GMT

sumi is wicked na i will get the story 5.5 hours early na...

okok i shall wait , my poor maithu

Thank you so much Sumi

Happy you loved the coronation and felt happy for them

Well he need to get his Queen now else, how will he become Her King LOL

Well dear, the thing is I don't post it from home.

I write on my way to work in my phone and send a mail to myself and then check it or complete it and post it! Ouf

The small daily procedure with this HK

And along with writing I need to talk with someone so so important that I stop writing when I talk u see!😳

Well I will do my best dear!

See you in few minutes

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: Krupy
Maithu my honest apologies for not commenting on this story for quite some time. Was very busy.
Well, since the last time I commented till now, a lot of things changed in the story. Loved everything. And I'm thankful that the crown didn't fell in wrong hands not for even second.

I absolutely didn't expected that truths will be revealed the way they are. Of course I was (like always with your stories) positive surprised.

I'm looking forward to see what will King do next.

Oh dear!

No need to apologies, life is like that only, we get to be stick with some other thing for few moment and it's understandable.

Yup dear, a lot of things changed and I'm happy that you liked them.

Each truth has it's own way, and this one just revealed like this.

I just followed the film by adding few details and lines of logic, that's it.

King will be back in Friday's part for sure ;-)

Thank you so much

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Amazing update!
So finally Suraj became King.
Imli showed her true colors very quickly.
Loved how the assembly finished the procedures so quickly, they wanted to make sure Suraj became king.
And the best part was how Suraj kept looking for Chakor.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thank you so much buddy

Finally the day has came and he became KING

Well Imli is like that only :-|

Happy you liked everything dear

Keep on reading

See you soon in just few minutes

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: maithu_

Thank you so much Sumi
Happy you loved the coronation and felt happy for them

Well he need to get his Queen now else, how will he become Her King LOL

Well dear, the thing is I don't post it from home.
I write on my way to work in my phone and send a mail to myself and then check it or complete it and post it! Ouf
The small daily procedure with this HK
And along with writing I need to talk with someone so so important that I stop writing when I talk u see!😳 ahm ahm yes thats is important... I understand my deary 😉

Well I will do my best dear!
See you in few minutes

oh my god you do it from phone...

No deary take your time...

sumi is unsatiable when it comes to your stories but always practical!!!

I know work home ask me...

take your time deary!!!

loads of love

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#317

Part 38 (Previous part : Part 37 )

Back in her city after hours of flight, she made her way towards the Editor's room "Edy!"

"Yes!" the lady said as she extended her hand, asking Chakor to take a seat.

As she sat "So what did you think?" she asked referring to all the work she sent through mail and her friend before she reached her city.

"It's a thoughtful, mature" getting up from her seat, she continued "well-written story" hearing these, the young lady's face shone bright even if sadness was written all over her eyes "That will never see the light of day!" the Editor finished making Chakor to frown as she also got up.

"What?"

"It is a puff piece, Miss. Lal" she said with a straight face "Pure schmaltz. Not our brand!"

"But it's honest and it's the truth!" the young reporter said what her writings mean for her.

"You were at ground zero! You had the adoption papers in your hands!" walking around the table, and sat on it as she continued "You really blew it big time Miss."

"But this is who he is! And this is what really happened!" with seriousness.

"I really don't care!" Edy said putting the report papers on the table and folding her hands over her chest, with attitude, few more words flew "In the meantime, I need you to jump back on the copy desk. Moh's article needs a polish!"

Taking her papers "You know what? Find someone else to do your mop jobs!" Chakor said it strongly as she turned on her heels.

"Excuse me?" shocked of the small gift she got from her employee.

"I'm done!" she said without facing her as she made her way out of the room, to her table.

Closing her laptop, pulling the box from under her table, she got her things inside it.

"So what are you gonna do now?" Adi asked as she was standing on the side of Chakor's table.

"Time to focus on my own work!" she said as she put her laptop in its bag and closed it.

"That's what I have been saying all along!" Tina said as she sat on the now empty table of her friend's.

"I'm gonna start with a blog!" Adi nodded his head listening to his dear friend "About King Suraj, the real story!" she said with a confident look.

"You are my hero, Sunshine!" Adi side hugged his friend.

Days started to pass with the King taking his power, and getting to know his subjects' needs while she on the other side, did the work she planned to do in her world.

And the only common thought that crossed both their heart and mind constantly was the happy moments they spent together.

***

People covered in their sweater, enjoyed the different music that was presented inside the restaurant.

"Happy almost New Year, everybody!" Chakor's father wished happily as he served cool drinks to his lovely daughter and her friends who were seated in one corner of the restaurant.

"Happy almost New Year!" they all wished in return as they clinked their glasses with a happy smile in all the faces expect one who looked like not so natural.

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Thank you buddies for reading!

Did you enjoyed it!

Sorry for making it short as I have few meetings to attend today!

See you all tomorrow with another interesting part!

Next part : Part 39

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: sumsukor

oh my god you do it from phone...

No deary take your time...

sumi is unsatiable when it comes to your stories but always practical!!!

I know work home ask me...

take your time deary!!!

loads of love

@blue Thank god you got it

Well I got used to type like that as I do the same when I get some ideas LOL

No worries ;-)

For now I'm not yet married and already all filled with work, don't know how it will be in future. Ouf

Thank you for understanding dear!

Love you!