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Posted: 7 years ago
maithu
thats really good

Chakor just giving her shot at Edy... I liked it ... she stands for her principles...

and both lost in the thoughts of each other... waiting waiting

now who is the black sheep in the party!!!! dont tell one of the evils...

waiting for the update
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

So Sukor are busy in their own life
Chakor left her job & now working as blogger😊
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear
Taking their responsibilities yup! Busy ;-)
Next part in few minutes
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Interesting update

Chakor was right to quit, her editor only wanted scandals and gossip.
Hope that once Suraj gets settled he goes looking for her.
Eagerly waiting for next.

Thanks Mai
Glad you find it interesting
Agree dear! She did it right this time
Hope too that he goes ;-)
Soon soon with next part
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sumsukor

maithu

thats really good

Chakor just giving her shot at Edy... I liked it ... she stands for her principles...

and both lost in the thoughts of each other... waiting waiting

now who is the black sheep in the party!!!! dont tell one of the evils...

waiting for the update

Thanks a lot Sumi
Glad you liked the shot of Chakor ;-)
Hahahaha dear!All evils have went away!
See you soon Sumi
Thank you once again
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 39 (Previous part : Part 38 )

"Bhu!" Adi with a face of a kid "Your dishes are the best after my mother's!" As he was sitting opposite to Chakor with her father who was standing on the side with a happy smile which reached his eyes.
Both the woman around the table agreed with a 'Yeah' and nothing more.
"I figure that there is a lot more to celebrate as my baby girl is back in town!" The old man said, side hugging his daughter.
"And here is something else to celebrate too!" Tina announced as she pulled out her cellophane and touched few things as a screen flashed showing the picture of the Prince oups King of Canamaris along with the title 'A King For Real' and she added "Your article has broke 20K likes!"
"Hey! That's terrific!" Her father with proud visible in his eyes.
"Papa! It's really not that many!" She said bending her head as flashed of the past moments with him flashed in front of her.
"What are you talking Sunshine? You only posted it three days ago!" He said trying to make her understand that it is a big thing.
"This thing is going to catch fire!" Her other friend added.
"And until you become rich and famous, you will always get a job here, with your Papa!" Her dad in a joking way which made her chuckle.
"I know!" She hugged her dad while still sitting in front of her friends.
With a thudding sound on the metal part of the glass combined wall, the quarto turned to find three men there making Chakor friends' to smile wide.

"Hey!" Tina as she waved from inside and the three men waved back.
"Those would be our dates!" Ado said as he got up.
"Alright then!" The old man started "You guys go and have fun! Huh?" He finished looking at his daughter and left from there to carry on his work.
"So who is the third guy?" Chakor asked as she got up along with her friend.
"Just thus hottie named Mike!" Ado replied.
"Not any setup!" The other lady added.
"I'm not coming out guys!" Chakor said with giving nothing with her expression.
"Seriously?" Tina "You are going to stay at home on a New Year's Eve?"
"I just wanna help Papa do some cleaning and then do some writings!" She sincerely said even if it is not the only reason for not going out.
"How about we check you back later Sunshine!"
"May be drag you out for after parties!" With a wink.
"Not gonna happen!" She said it simply with a plastered smile.
"Are you sure you are gonna be okay Sunshine?" She was questioned with a side hug from her friend.
She just nodded her head in reply and then hugged Tina "Have fun!"
"Okay!" Both replied in sync as the exited the restaurant.
"Oh my god! I can't wait to hit up the new club this night!" Tina screamed from outside as her friends disappeared from there along with their dates.

Chakor wearing her uniform, picked the plates one by one and got it to the cleaning area.
Then went back to their table and collected the glasses.
Her father in the mean tine turned on the channel in the TV for the New Year Celebration where a music concert was showed with the crowd cheering, whistling and dancing.
Man in the TV announced "Less than five mins till we ring in this New Year, Ladies and Gentlemen!" And a round of cheers not only echoed in the television but inside the restaurant too as Chakor's father arranged few drinks for his regular clients.
"That means it's time to pour the champagne!" taking a bottle from the counter and facing the small crowd of people there, he asked "Who wants champagne?"
And few people screamed "We need! We need!"
"You are the best Bhu!" someone said and others hummed as clinking of glasses echoed that place with Chakor's father enjoying his customer's happiness.
Hearing the cheers and screams, Chakor who was standing near the table and cleaning it, turned to see the happy face of her father and automatically a smile formed reaching her eyes this time.
And suddenly a thudding sound of a small stone hitting the metal part, outside of their restaurant took her attention as she turned back to the glass windows and stilled in her place with what she saw there, outside of the restaurant.
The king, king of Canamaris, standing alone in the road with a happy smile as he looked at her shocked face.

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Thank you buddies for reading.
Hope you all liked it!
See you tomorrow with my next special part!



Next part : Part 40



- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update👏
Chakor's blog about Suraj is hit😊
I think Chakor is missing Suraj that's why she skipped going to club😉
Suraj is back, waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing update👏

Chakor's blog about Suraj is hit😊
I think Chakor is missing Suraj that's why she skipped going to club😉
Suraj is back, waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!
Happy you find it interesting
Yup! It is indeed a hit Heee
Hahahaha you got the point dear
Next part will be on time, may be even before!
Thank you once again!
See you!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome maithu
So Chakor is helping her father.
Bhuvan is kind and caring.
Chakor isn't in the mood to party, but soon this will change 😉.
Suraj never disappoints, he came to get the queen of his heart.

Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
very nice Maithu
so nice that Chakor is so matured to be beside Bhuvan in the restaurant

her heart is not with her but still her mind is helping her father... and blog is hit (ha ha naturally anything about my dude has to be a hit na)

but on a serious note just loved the maturity of Chakor

and what I read lastthe KING is there there

for his queen aaawwwh party time...

Wait lemme get my glass🥳

will wait for your next
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Awesome maithu

So Chakor is helping her father.
Bhuvan is kind and caring.
Chakor isn't in the mood to party, but soon this will change 😉.
Suraj never disappoints, he came to get the queen of his heart.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thanks Mai
Happy you liked this part too
Yup! She is with her father in his business
Agree the mood is going to soon change
Thank you once again
See u soon in few minutes

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