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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update, Maan is not clear about his feelings... He is falling for her but both are unaware of it. gotta see his possessive side ... waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maan-ki-jaan

nice update, Maan is not clear about his feelings... He is falling for her but both are unaware of it. gotta see his possessive side ... waiting for next


thnx for reading
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

<font color="#660099" size="3">Fabulous Chapter </font>

<font color="#660099" size="3">Geet still thinking that Zeenat is Maan's girlfriend but he is the one that needs to clear </font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">everything about Zeenat to Geet how is Geet to know what he truly feels </font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">while his care and concern for Geet he is now making excuses that its only because media and his image his business </font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">seems like Geet has left but why would she just walk away she has always loved Maan </font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">eagerly waiting for next chapter </font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">and yes indeed you can still send me PM's for this story </font>


yup he need to tell her fully about him and zeenat
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: priyasree




<font size="2" color="#009900">Awesome n wonderful update</font>


thnx for reading
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sagorika93

finally one update ...after a long time !!
superb update ...
maan is confusing geet with his emotions ...
he need to talk to her clearly .
where did geet go ?
but it's true ...it would be better if she leave him alone for some days or some time ...at least he will be clear what he want and how will he win her trust & love again .
waiting for next...


sorry for being late
now trying to be regular with this
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: T.Peru

Nice update

Did Geet left Maan
Now what will happen
Thanks for PM
Update soon


thnx for reading
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Roopa_1

omg... uu have updated this.. Woww thank you...😳

I love this story
So abhi bhi maan apna ego status mahin chod raha hain.. Usko toh apne pe padi hain... Kitna jealous hain banda lekin geet ke saamne attitude dikha raha hain .. Geet even questioned him abt the trip ... So ab yaad aagaya janaab ko ki geet uski biwi hain😆I am loving this restlessness maan .. He is still stick to that person whom geet had met .. Koun tha voh ? So they finally went to switzerland .. Geet ne apna moun vrat shuru kiya and bichara maan trying to take time for geet atleast as a frnd .. Geet still thinks that maan loves zeenat ... She is not expecting anything from maan because now she understood that expectations hurt .. Maan really has to talk with geet by leaving his ego aside .. Hamesha apne ego ko bhoost kar raha hain yeh kehke ki geet ki fikar sirf dadima ke liye hain .. Now geet kaha gayi ? Geet chod ke nahin jaa sakthi lekin maan ko shock lag gayi ... Ab apna ego ko chod na chahiyeh maan singh khurana ..😆
Awesome story... I am soo loving this.. Update soon.. And robot one alsoo😳


glad that you like this story
hmm maan and his never ending ego its natural as he never fall in love so first he is confused frustrated with himself and her too
now thinking what should geet do to make him suffer more
thnx for reading
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Nice update dear

Liked it!!
Maan was forcing Geet to accompany him apropos to Geet's demeanor and her meet with the stranger whose identity Geet didn't bother to reveal. He was feeling jealous that the stranger stole Geet's attention. Maan is using his dadima, media, his reputation as an excuse to make Geet accept his words and demands. Loved Geet's riposte and threw his exact words on his face without mincing. He still couldn't acknowledge his feelings for Geet and wants to hide his feelings by giving some lame excuses!!
Geet was happy that Zeenat isn't Maan's GF but doesn't want to raise her hopes and expectations from him owing to his past conduct towards her at the same time she doesn't want to play gooseberry between Maan and Zeenat. Can understand Geet's prespective. Where has Geet gone !? Sure that she wouldn't have left owing to dadima. Guess to stroll and breathe some fresh air.
Thanks for the pm!
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Thnx for understanding geet ..she doesn't want a relation where there will be no chance of love that's all
thnx for reading
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Posted: 7 years ago
but I promised someone
so I can't break my promise
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Posted: 7 years ago


Part 14 -


Geet said Good night to the elderly couple Mr and Mrs Jaiswal ..she meet them just tonight . Both here to their first honeymoon at their sixties , whole life both were busy bringing up their children, now its their time to enjoy . So their children planned world tour for them .

Geet went awed hearing their journey.. He was a small government officer and she was from rich family still they fall in love not just that they run away from home to make their own nest ..their struggle, their pain , their happiness the more Geet heard the more she wanting this kind love for herself .

She keep looking at them small longing smile on her lips .." can me and Maan become like this ? " she come out of her silly thoughts and looked at her watch

" ya Allah bara bajne wale hai ..itne der ho gaye " she literary rushed to their suite , but as soon as she entered she welcomed by Maan ..

he pulled her in his arms and with a blink of eyes she felt her lips taken roughly by him ...

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Maan was dying in every second . He doesn't know what to do , where to search her ? ..he felt so helpless just like he felt in his childhood when his mother gone without telling him ..

he hate this feelings of helplessness ..hate to be scared ..After his Mother gone he vowed himself not to weak again , never to let someone enter in his life to a extent point when that could make him weak ..but to his unknown his rejected wife did manage to do that ..She manage to break his shell


" How could she do it ? How could she leave me ? " He was fuming now but all his anger gone when he heard the sound of door and Geet came in..

without thinking anything he pulled her to hug and then kissed her forgetting all .. Geet was shocked for sometime ,tried to get out from his grip but he didn't free her .. He hold her more closer even if it possible, after sometime she also gave in as couldnt control her feelings ..

" Don't leave me ever " he requested or say ordered her , placing his forehead to hers .. both still lost in their previous moment .. She opened her eyes slowly and looked at him who still eyes closed .. There is pain look in his face ..as if he was dying every moment ..

' mistake...my first kiss from him and he thinking it as only mistake '

She was having a urge to tell at him for playing with her but she controlled somehow .. she pushed him hard and just then Maan realised what he did .. His eyes gone wide in shock ..

" um _I'm sor "

" don't you dare tell at me or blame this on me ..you started it first . I can understand May be I'm not that beautiful but still I'm a girl so it's natural and same goes to me too . I'm staying with you in this room for 2 days so I just distracted nothing much . "

she said it in one go before Maan could say anything but not in right mind to realise what she saying ..she just wanted to save her heart from rejection of kiss ..She give a run to washroom but Maan's angry voice stop her track ..

" Don't think too high of yourself, and you are right I also distracted nothing much " he replied with her same words , feeling angry on himself and her too ..' she think me just an distraction how dare she ..no matter what we did marry ..im not some bloody distraction '

" and where were you ? Is it time to come back ? Look Geet we are not in India . You can't be careless and roam around without telling me . So next time if you want to run away do tell me in advance so that i won't be worried thinking bad things got it "

but Geet didn't answer and shut the washroom door there Maan shooting dagger at her direction ..but her words then her silent both making him angry . He finally realised it's better when she doesn't talk at least he doesn't have to hear her awful word ..

" Damn this girl is making me crazy "

He went to bed thinking his previous action . ' why did I kissed ? '

" This is not right ..no this can't happen "

Geet keep chanting it in her mind ..she looked herself in mirror ..her lips are still red proving of their kiss . She touched softly feeling some strange sensation in her body ..first touch of her Maan , she doesn't regret it but she is hurt by his words ..

' how long I have to bear this ? Why he doing this ? one time coming so close next moment throwing me back from cloud .. ' the more she trying to guard her heart the more he is pulling her towards him..
Edited by Keepdreaming - 7 years ago

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