IshRa Os : Mera Pyara Kaddu

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Hlw frnds I'm here with an Os on special demand of my sweet frnd "Sanjna55 aka Sanju" who asked me to write an Os for her who makes her smiles bcoz my previous Os "Hamari Adhuri Kahani" made her cry I know sanju that I took long time to fulfill ur wish sorry for that but u know naa writing an Os is really difficult for me but I tried it just for so hope u liked it..


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Mera Pyara Kaddu


Ishita was doing something on her laptop when her mother comes & said "ishu pack ur bags we have to leave tomorrow for Delhi" ..

Ishita - but maa where are we going ?

Ragini(her mother)- oh sorry beta I forget to tell you actually ur dad fixed ur marriage with his frnd's son so now we are going to meet them..

Ishita (shocked)- what ?but maa how can you guys fixed my marriage with a stranger that to without my consent..

Ragini- relax beta ..

Ishita - how can i relax maa?

Ragini - beta they are not strangers do you remember bhalla uncle? she asked..

Ishita (tries to think)- yeah wahi na Jo hamare neighbour the when I was in class 2nd or maybe 3rd...

Ragini - yup u got it wahi & u used to play with raman ..

Ishita - raman achha wo "Kaddu"..

Ragini- ishu ..saying she glared her
Ishita - sorry

Ragini - u should be ye koi tareeka hua kisi ko aise naam se bulane ka..

Ishita - bt maa what's my fault in it if he looks like a " Kaddu" saying she starts laughing uncontrollably..


Ragini - stop it ishu its not looks good to making fun of someone or waise bhi wo toh purani baat hai now he became so handsome & also well educated & u know you he is coming back from London after completing his masters..


Ishita - but phr bhi maa I'm not interested in this marriage saga u know naa..

Ragini - I don't want to listen anything u have to come with us at least mil toh lo than u can decides it..


Ishita - but maa ..she tries to interrupted bt her mother her mother went out saying to do her packing ..

Ishita (st)- baba ji kahan phansa diya apne mainu u know naa mujhe aise hi kisi se shaadi nhi krni bt who explain my parents about my feelings raj now plz come & take me with you ..saying she starts dreaming about her raj




[Here ishita is belongs from a Punjabi family]


In Delhi
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Mr bhalla was talking on phn with Mr arora(ishita's father)

Mr bhalla - ha bol yar how's ur plan? You all r coming naa..

Mr arora- yeah we are coming tu toh bas taiyari kar hamare aane ki..

Mr bhalla - that's great I'm so happy tu aa maine sari taiyari kr di hai..he said happily

Mr arora- or han listen one thing bhabhi ji se bol dena ki meri favorite make di roti or sarso ka saag bana ke rakhe ...

Mr bhalla (laughs) - yeah sure u know toshi ji aaj market specially ye sb banane ke ingredients lene gyi hai..

Mr arora- she knows me very well that's I love her so much.. said in teasing tone

Mr bhalla - oye don't try to flirt with my wife..

Mr arora (laughs)- kyu after all she is my bhabhi itna toh hak banta hai..like this they talks some more time then hung the call..

Next day arora's reaches Delhi & they dove towards bhalla mansion where bhalla 's welcomed them wholeheartedly ishita too touches their feet & takes blessing from them..

Ishita- pairi pauna uncle ji aunty ji ...saying she touched Mr bhalla's feet & he blessed her while toshi ji kissed her temple & hugged her saying "haye kinni Soni hain meri bachchi" in returns ishita gives her smiles

Mr bhalla interruptes saying"kya toshi ji baahar hi khada rakhogi "



Mrs bhalla smiles & called them inside..

Everyone settled on sofa & start chatting with each other meanwhile toshi ji served them snacks...

Toshi (to ishu)- or baat puttar Teri pdhati kaise chl rhi hai..

Ishita - aunty ji its awesome I had completed my MBA last month ..

Toshi - good good puttar or bta tere bare I mean to say like ur hobbies, likes,etc..

Ishita - ji i love to play bad minton u know mai state level champion rahi ..saying she raised her invisible collar...seeing them talking so freely trio was so happy (Mr bhalla & Mr & Mrs kapoor)

Mr bhalla - ok aap log fresh ho jao phr dinner krte hai (turn to toshi ji) aap inhe rooms dikha do ..which she nodded & take them to show their rooms..
All nodded & went with toshi ji she showed them their rooms ..

After some time all had their dinner with chit chat then settled on drawing room but ishita went to her room to take a short nap..

Toshi ji - I'm so happy to get a DIL like ishita she is just so sweet..

Ragini - ab Hume KB mila rhi ho hmare SIL se..

Toshi ji - actually he went to attend his frnd's marriage will be back in the morning.. Which ragini nodded

Mr bhalla - it's all right but did u ppl talked with ishu she is agree for this marriage or not..

Ragini - actually bhai Saab maine use bta diya hai ..

Mr bhalla - so that means she is not agree? ..he asked

Ragini - actually ryt now she is not agree but I think ek baar bachhe aaps mein mil le that will be nice..

Mr bhalla - ok but if they are not agree so no one will force them bcoz it's a life tym decision we can't pressurize them..

Mr arora - hmmm u r ryt omi..saying both men start while ladies went to their rooms..

Toshi ji - ragini listen don't take me wrong but I want to make ishu my DIL so I want that kisi bhi tarah ye rishta ho..

Ragini - tune toh mere mann ki baat keh di yaar even I wants the same..

Toshi - so decided we will make agree our children ..

Ragini - done..saying both hugged each other..

In night
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Toshi ji was sleeping peacefully when her phn starts ringing she picked the call "hlw kon hai? Ye h bhai koi tym hai phn karne ka.."

Raman - arey meri pyari maa mai hu apka beeba puttar..hearing his voice she wakes up immediately

Toshi - raman tu itni raat mein phn kiya everything is fyn na..she asked in concerns

Raman - ohho maa I'm all fyn tussi khud dekh lo..

Toshi - mtlb..

Raman - arey maa open the door I'm standing outside..

Toshi - ok OK just wait I'm coming.. Saying she went & opened the door & cupped his face & then hugged him




Toshi ji - haye mera puttar kaisa h tu ..

Raman - maa I'm all fyn apke samne hi toh hu all fit n fyn..

Toshi ji - ha bada fit hai inna dubla ho gya h tu thk se khata nhi hoga..

Raman - arey itni muskil se ye body bnayi hai..

Toshi ji- bada aya body bnane wala now u had come naa I'll feed u aloo paratha aid lots of butter..

Raman - pehle abhi kuch khilao maa I'm so hungry..

Toshi - tu fresh n up ho ja mai khana garam karri hu..which he nodded & went to change..

After sometimes he comes & settled on dinning table & Toshi ji served him palak paneer ,dal makhani,missi roti with raita..

Raman - wow maa itna kuch koi special day hai kya aaj..saying he start eating

Toshi ji - actually ghr mein kuch guests aaye hai..

Raman - kon maa..

Toshi ji - did u remember arora uncle & aunty in Ludhiana..

Raman - wahi na Jo hmare neighbour the when we used to live there..

Toshi - yeah u got it ryt..

Raman - but woh log yahan suddenly..

Toshi ji (St)- it's ryt time Mujhe isse ishu ke baare mein bta dena chahiye..

Raman - maa kaha kho gyi..

Toshi ji - actually puttar we fixed ur marriage with their daughter ishita..hearing this he starts coughing

Toshi ji made him drink water"aram se kha puttar".

Raman - I'm fyn maa..

Toshi - so u r ready naa for this marriage..

Raman - no maa mai us Chasmish se shaadi nhi kruga..

Toshi - puttar ye koi tareka nhi hai kisi ko bulane ka..

Raman - achha maine use chamish bulaya toh apko bura lg rha but when she used to call me Kaddu tb thk tha..

Toshi ji- arey puttar it's all past now she don't wears glasses u know puttar she became so beautiful..

Raman - but maa..he was saying but Toshi ji interrupted him"i don't want to listen anything here is her pic & u have to agree for this marriage "saying she went from there..

Same scenario was in ishita's room her mother also pressuring her &gave her raman's pic then went from there..

Both sees each other pics..

Raman - omg she is totally changed now ab toh " Chasmish "kafi beautiful ho gyi h..

Ishita - " Kaddu"is now became so handsome..

IshRa - but I don't marry with her/him..saying both packed their bags & decided to run from there..

Both sneakily come out of house so that no one will saw them but accidentally both banged with each other & fell on ground..

Raman - ahh can't u see..

Ishita - same to you..saying both saw each other & said"Kaddu/Chashmish..

Raman - hey what r doing here in this tym?

Ishita - if I'll ask you the same question then..

Raman - chasmish u never change always ask question on my question..

Ishita - han toh why will I change myself for anyone & that to for you "Kaddu"

Raman - hey don't call me by this irritating name..

Ishita - toh tu bhi mujhe us name se mt bula..


Raman - ok BTW where are you going at this tym?

Ishita became shattered with this question" if I'll ask u the same question then"

Raman - ehhh chasmish tu kitna irritate karti hai yrr har question pe dusra question puchhna jruri hai kya can't u give answer easily..

Ishita - first you tell ..

Raman- wo mai ..han mai to jogging karne ja rha after dinner ab tu bta..

Ishita - same here..

Raman - achha tell who went on jogging with bag..

Ishita - wo wo..saying she starts stammering but suddenly her eyes fell oh his bag..

Ishita - jaate hai na like you..

Raman (st)- she is very clever I think mujhe bta dena chahiye hmmm it will be nyc thinking he said "actually I'm running from my house"

Ishita - really ..which raman nodded

Ishita - wow same pinch you know mai bhi bhaag rahi but not from my but urs house..

Raman - but why ?then he said "mai hi pehle bata deta hu waise bhi tu phle mujhse hi puchhegi"

Ishita - intelligent haan..saying she laughs

Raman - but don't felt bad ok actually I don't want to marry with you that's why..saying he looks towards her

Ishita (starts laughing)- wow me too..

Raman - really

Ishita - yup

Raman - so problem solved let's go inside we will deny for this marriage together ..

Ishita - no they will not understand jis tarah maa is all behind me for agreeing this marriage I don't think ye achha idea hai..

Raman - I think you r ryt maa bhi maanegi so now..

Ishita - I'm going to Mumbai to meet my raj..

Raman - ohho so you love someone..

Ishita - hmmm..saying she blushed

Raman - ohho chasmish I can't believe u actually blushing achha tell me when you both met etc etc..

Ishita - oye kaddu we didn't met till now..

Raman - mtlb don't tell me that you ppl met through social media..

Ishita - nhi re

Raman - phr tu raj se kaise mili..

Ishita - one min tu raj ko nhi jaanta..

Raman - mai kyu jaanta hounga use..

Ishita - oye kaddu I'm talking about DDLJ 's raj aka srk I want my life partner like him..

Raman Starts laughing "omg u r really a mad I mean tu aise kahi jaa rhi thi"

Ishita - so I'm big enough to take care of myself or BTW one of my frnds lived in Mumbai..

Raman - ohk

Ishita - BTW you tell me about ur gf..

Raman - how do you know about my gf..hearing this ishita tongue tied

Ishita (after thinking)- arey I'm just guessing after all u r in London for such a long tym so definitely koi toh hogi..

Raman - yeah her name is soniya..

Ishita - oh so foreigner hai?

Raman - yeah but u know she learning Hindi for me..

Ishita - oh that's gud ok I should leave now..saying turned to go

Raman - listen chasmish I'm also going London so let's go together firstly I'll drop you Mumbai then I'll go from there..

Ishita - but why?

Raman - after all u r my frnd that to a girl & I can't leave you like this I want to meet ur frnd & see the place where are you going to leave it is safe or not for you..

Ishita - hey it's not needed you don't worry you go to ur soniya I'll manage..

Raman - don't argue with me now come nahi toh sb jaag jayenge..saying both headed from there

In the morning both mother's come to know about that IshRa went from there to escape from this marriage but both hides this truth from their husbands & decided to find them ..

On their side
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Raman was making face seeing him ishita said"it's not needed to made ur face like ur name "Kaddu"...

Raman - u just keep quiet bcoz of you I'm travelling from this bus Abhi tak flight se pahunch gye hote but no madam ko bus se Jana hai..

Ishita - arey yrr u r really boring bus se travel karna kitna achha hota hai we can get fresh air & can see the beautiful place in our journey & can click many pics which will be with us forever as beautiful memory..she was telling him with so happily seeing her like this a unknown smile crept on his face

Raman - you really enjoying it na .

Ishita - yup very much u know I always want to live a simple life like others ..

Raman - what do you mean?

Ishita - actually from my childhood my parents pampered me like hell they bought everything for which I desired but never let me enjoy my life as I want I mean I always want to travel in buses,train,want to eat roadside food,even I always want to go to watch movies with frnds but maa & papa 's overprotective nature caged me in home but that's not mean they don't love me they love me the most but seeing the crimes in society they became so protective but now I want to enjoy my life fully..

Raman can see the excitement in her eyes

Raman - ok ..like this they talked some more time then slept after sometimes they woke up hearing chors

IshRa- what happens?

Raman - let me see..saying he went to conductor & asked about this & then turned to ishita "ye bol rhe hai bus mein kuch kharabi aa gyi hai so Hume yahan se khud Jana hoga"..

Ishita - wow that means now we will walk..

Raman -u r excited like we are going on royal vehicle..

Ishita - arey so it's not less than that..

Raman - yrr now don't irritate its all happening bcoz of you na hi tu bus se travel karne ko kehti na hum yahan pe phanshte flight se toh kab ka pahuch chuke hote..

Ishita - ok fyn sorry but now we have to walk till then we don't get any lift so let's go saying both starts walking after half n hour they saw a car seeing it she asked them for lift which they agreed ..

She settled inside car their two boys already sitting Raman saw this & asked her to come out then he sat besides them & make her sat beside him seeing it she smiles

After sometimes they dropped IshRa on highway..

Boy - hey dude yahan se de tum dono ko khud Jana hoga bcoz we are going to different direction..saying they went from there

Raman - now

Ishita - now I want to eat something then we will go anywhere..

Raman - but yahan kya milega..

Ishita (pointed towards a dhaba)- see there a dhaba let's go..
Raman - Badi tez nazar hai Teri chal..saying both headed towards dhaba..

Raman- u order till then I'll talk to soniya..saying he went lil far from there & dialed soniya's number




Ishita calls the worker"praji " hearing this worker has reached to her

Worker - ji boliye

Ishita - ji aloo paratha hoga

Worker - hanji bilkul..

Ishita - great then take 2 aloo paratha with lots of butter & one big glass lassi..


Worker - ji or Saab ke liye..

Ishita - ohh let me ask him ..saying she called him from behind "raman" hearing her voice raman turned "yeah "


Ishita - tumhare liye kya order karu..

Raman - Jo apne liye kar rhi hai wahi kar de..

Ishita - ok ..saying she turned to worker & asked him him to take same order for him too

While hearing ishita's voice soniya said"raman baby whose voice was this?"

Raman - ohh it's chasmish oops sorry ishita's voice..

Soniya - you're with a girl..

Raman - yeah actually the matter is ..saying he narrates her everything..

Soniya - This means that you ran away from home because of not marrying that girl but now you are roaming with the same girl..


Raman - are you doubting on me? I told you clearly that after dropping her safely on her frnd's home I'll come to you ..

Soniya - ok ..saying she hung the call meanwhile ishita called him bcoz their order had come..

Raman - so kya order kiya?

Ishita - see..

Raman - omg itna butter kon khata hai?..

Ishita - arey yrr we are Punjabi & Punjabi can't eat aaloo paratha without butter...

Raman - yrr itni muskil se ye body Bnai hai now bcoz of this my all workout will be spoil..

Ishita - stop it yrr eat it..saying she put a bite in his mouth..

Raman - hmmm it's too tasty..

Ishita - see I told you..

Raman - waise I shocked bcoz today's girl was so worried about their figure but you..

Ishita - I'm not like others arey yrr bhagwan ne ek zindagi di hai use fully enjoy Karo .

Raman - but if ur would be don't like it then..

Ishita - who truly loves me so he love me the way I'm & who want to change me that means he never love my inner beauty but my outer appearance..saying she starts munching her paratha then start drinking lassi while raman mesmerizing with her more & thinks how soniya always ignore oily food even never let him to eat..

He was lost in his thoughts when ishita said"hey kaddu where are you lost?"

Raman - kahin nahi chasmish..she nodded & start sipping her lassi and called him "see kaddu meri muh pe bhi mooch(beard) ban gyi na" she is showing it like a excited kid

Raman - you know chasmish u didn't changed a bit ..said with a serene smile on his face

Ishita - why will I change myself when I love me like this only..

Raman- me too..he said without thinking when ishita sooks on him with confused face so he immediately changed the topic"chl ab already we are getting late"..saying he paid their bills when ishita said"hey kaddu kitna bill tha?"

Raman - 1000 but why are you asking?

Ishita take out 500 from her purse & forward toward him

Raman- hey what are doing?

Ishita - arey apne bill de rhi hu i don't like when someone paid my bill so take it..

Raman - are you mad? Mai tujhse paise lunga tujhe kya mai kanjoosh lgta hu jo bill nhi de skta..

Ishita - Ishita - arey yrr why are you getting angry unnecessary ?mera intension tujhe hurt karne ka nahi tha but plz try to understant my view too plzzz..after much argue finally raman take it the money bcoz she starts emotional drama..

Raman asked the dhaba owner about next bus & come to know that it will come in the morning so they check in nearest hotel ..

Raman - chasmish yahan ek hi room available hai ..

Ishita - ohh then..

Raman - tu room mein reh le mai kuch dekhta hu..

Ishita - arey tu na kaddu ka kaddu hi rahega arey yrr ek room hai toh kya we'll share it don't worry i'll not attack on you..saying she starts laughing

Raman - are you sure naa? I mean you will not feel uncomfortable naa..

Ishita (held his hand)- i have full trust you kaddu so don't worry now come i'm so tired..saying both headed towards their room

Ishita fell on bad"ahh finally i got bed now i'll sleep peacefully"

Raman - achha chasmish can I borrow ur lappy for sometime

Ishita immediately denies "nooo"

Raman - arey yrr mere tab ki battery khtm ho gyi bas kuch mails check karne hai plz..but she didn't agreed

Raman - aakir aisa kya hai isme ki maine tujhse bus mein bhi maanga but you didn't gave me even didn't let me touch

Ishita - nothing but just I don't like to share my things with anyone specially my lappy so sorry for that..they are still arguing when raman phn start ringing flashing soniya name he take it"hey soniya "

Soniya - hii baby so what are doing?

Raman - nothing you tell how r u?

Soniya - I'm fyn baby when are you coming back I'm missing u sooo much..

Raman - me too and I'll be there very soon..like they were still talking when ishita called him "kaddu "

Raman - yeah chasmish..

Ishita - I think I forget my bag on reception..

Raman - don't worry just call then they will take it..

Soniya - raman this girl is still with you & what she is calling you ?

Raman - arey I told you na about ishita & yeah we used to call each with nick make which had given by us "Kaddu & Chasmish"..

Soniya - that mean u both r staying together in one room?..she asked rudely

Raman - yeah actually there only one room is available so that's why ..

Soniya - I don't understand raman one side u don't want to marry that girl but runs with her even now you both are staying together that to in one room who knows that.. She was saying when raman interrupted her

Raman - just shut up soniya not a word against her..

Soniya - wohh great I'm saying about her but why its irking you ha?ohh why not after all you are equally involved in this u know what my frnds are ryt that never trust on an Indian boy they always cheats so listen clearly I broke up with you..


Raman - glad you urself said it even I don't want to spend my whole life with girl like you here I had run from from my house leaving my parents everything just for you & you don't had trust on me ..saying he hung the call & turned and shocked to see that ishita is standing behind him while her eyes filled with tears seeing this he cupped her face " hey chasmish why are crying ?"

Ishita - sorry kaddu bcoz me you had broke up with ur gf really sorry..saying she starts crying while he trying to console her

Raman - hey bachcha don't cry it's not happen bcoz of you so don't blame yourself.. saying he wiped her tears

Ishita - no it's all bcoz of me if I'm not here with you then she will not doubt on you..

Raman - achha tell me one things if we love someone truly so shall we doubt on their loyalty achhe ye baat AGR tu mujhse pyar karti toh tu Kya mujhpr shak karti..

Ishita- never mujhe tum par poora bharosha hai..saying both share a beautiful eye lock

Raman - so achha hua na ki mai aise ladki se Bach gya..

Ishita - hmm but now..

Raman - now I'll returns back to my parents but you don't worry i take all blame on me..saying he went out of room

After sometime he come back & saw that ishita had slept so he too sat on couch and starts thinking "in 24hrs my life had totally changed one side I'd broke up with soniya but I didn't feeling bad even I'm so relaxed (then he saw ishita face) kabhi nahi socha tha ki isse aise milunga I mean both of us runs from our house to saved from this marriage but destiny decided something different hum ek dusre se mile & now we are together I don't know why but I feel happy nearing her I love to fight with her& her smiles makes me happy ,her tears make me sad ,I wish we will be together forever like this I think I'm falling for her yes I m in love with my " Chasmish " I think I should propose her & tell her about my feeling yes i'll confess my feeling..

Raman - no raman she don't love you & you can't force her what will think that I'm taking advantage of this situation or waise bhi she is waiting for her raj jisme mai fit nahi baithta..thinking he went to take water when his eyes fell on her lappy & remembering her over protectiveness towards it provoke him to see it..

Raman - let see aisa kya hai isme Jo ye itni over protective hai..saying he take her lappy & went towards balcony &opened it "hey matarani plz forgive me I know its not ryt to take someone's thing without her permission but don't why I felt like to seeing it so plz maaf kar dena " saying he open it & shocks to see the wallpaper "it's their childhood pic"

Raman - yeh toh hum dono hai but why she set it as wallpaper & she had locked it ab password kya hoga ..saying he starts thinking& he types her name,her parents name & DOB then something clicked on his mind and he type & it got opened he get excited "ye
Ayy finally screen open mai bhi kitna bewkoof hu ye mujhe pehle hi sochna chahiye that if she set our pic on wallpaper so password bhi toh hmara naam hi hoga naa" Kaddu & Chasmish"..

Raman - now let me check what she has hiding from me & saying he start searching and find their so Many pics of their childhood suddenly his eyes fell on a folder which named it"MERA PYARA KADDU" he closed his eyes then again opened it to believe that what is he seeing its true or just dream"

Raman - ye mera name ka folder isme kya hoga saying he clicked on it but again its password prblm bt this tym his password was ryt & it opened it & starts reading..


MERA PYARA KADDU


Raman's reaction will be writes in brackets..


Hii lappy I'm ishita arora ur new friend I hope u love me like I do(reading this line a smile crept on his face & he says "she is so cute koi aise kaise itna cutely baat kar sakta hai wo bhi apne laptop se) listen now I'm class 9th so papa has gifted me you so from now I'll share my all secret with you & yaa it's only between us okay don't tell it to anyone ok you know till now I had a diary who is my best friend like you but it has a problem that it will be read by anyone but I will locked you forever so no one will open you..


Ok so I'll starting from my past which I had shared with my diary & now with you you know when I was in class 3rd one new family had came in front of my house to start they are Bhalla uncle & aunty you know they are so sweet but u know but that kaddu was always fights with me ohho I didn't tell you na that who is Kaddu actually kaddu is bhalla uncle & Aunty's son actually his name is Raman but he looks like a kaddu totally round golu molu saa you know we always used to fight over every lil things but one day he saved me from that idiot subbu who is trying to hurt me but kaddu punched him & saved me from that day we became frnds but yes we still fights sometime but we can't angry with each other more than 2hrs(raman too starts thinking about their childhood ,how both always play together, eat together ) when we are in class 6th we played Romeo & Juliet"everyone praising about us & saying that we look good together & u know from that day me too starts liking him ..she writes with blushing emoji (omg so she starts liking me from that play or I'm a idiot never understand when her behavior suddenly changed towards me) but he don't like me he had made a new friend her name is Shagun he always spends time with her & forgetting me ..she writes it with sad emoji (aww mera bachcha why u didn't tell me that u don't like her I'll never befriend with her)


Lappy when I was in class 6th kaddu & his family shifted from here actually omi uncle got promotion so they are shifting to Delhi you know that day I was so sad & was crying whole day but then somehow I prepared myself but after some days maa tell me that he is going to London for further studies but you know he didn't come to meet me before going just talk to me on phn & slowly-2 he forget me now no messages, no phone calls..

Finally I had completed my graduation but still I'm missing him but I had a secret to share you ...(yrr chasmish ek baar bolti toh but it's not ur fault it's mine who forget u bcoz of that so called new friends but what secret thinking he clicked on next page)

You know lappy I made a fake I'd I know it's not good but what to do I want to know about my kaddu everyday so its easy way & u know my I'd's name is "IshRa" ishita & raman ka mix version (Raman got excited reading it wow IshRa it's sound so perfect together IshRa omg I love it) my kaddu has became so handsome but I love him like that only golu molu(Raman is blushing hard)

Then he clicke on next page

Hii lappy today I'm so sad now I'm regretting to make fake I'd you know why bcoz if I'll not made it so today I can't get this news you know my Kaddu is not mine he became someone else he had posted a pic with a girl & caption it"My love" ..she writes with lots of crying emoji(Raman's eyes too became teary reading this"how much I hurt her kitna bura LGA hoga use)after this ishita writes after one week


Hii lappy I know u must be think that where was I in whole week? Actually I was crying whole week you know even I didn't had my food properly so fell I'll & admitted but now I'm all fyn(he became so angry on himself how could you do this Raman ? Bcoz of you she suffering a lot but u was all busy in ur new lifestyle) but now I had decided that I'll try to forget him & start fresh bcoz I can't see my parents worried about me ..


You know lappy I had watched DDLJ & want a person like raj who loves him so much but yeah I can't guaranteed that if i'll love him like that way bcoz "pyar toh maine kar liya hai sachha wala apne kaddu se " ..

Next page



Hey lappyyy u know what I m so happy today u know what the reason behind my this happiness guess karo yeah u r ryt "Kaddu" (She is such a cute baby bcoz she is the only one who can talk with this nonliving things & also thinks that it will give answer of her question)
You know today maa tell me that they fixed my marriage with my kaddu u know I m happily surprised just want to dance & screams but next moment when I remember that someone already present in his lyf so I immediately said no for this relationship jiske liye mai kab se wait kar rahi thi wo aaya bhi but I can't take it how unlucky I'm but what can I do? bcoz of my happiness I can't snatch his happiness.. (How much she love me that she leaving me for mine happiness ..saying he wiped his tears)

Lappy today I saw him infront of my eyes after many years you know I don't want to take off my eyes from him but I have to do it u know both of us runs from our marriage but different is it that he runs for his happiness & I run for his happiness but I m so happy that 24hrs I'll be with him it's enough for me..after this she didn't writes anything

Raman eyes is filled with tears after reading her feeling for him..

Raman - itna pyar tu apne andar chipaye thi kbhi toh bola hota but mai hi Buddhu hu Jo Teri aankon mein apne liye itna pyar nhi dekh paya but now you will not suffer ur kaddu will propose his chasmish & make you mine for ever.. Saying he closed her lappy & sat beside her and kissed on her temple lovingly like she recognized his touch so she stirred in sleep..


Next morning ishita woke up & looks around &called him bt when she didn't get any response she became afraid she hurriedly climb down from bed when she didn't get any response she became afraid she hurriedly climb down from bed when his eyes fell on a note which stick on the mirror & she starts reading it..

Good morning my chasmish I hope u had sound sleep & don't worry about me i know you'll definitely became tense when u didn't find me but I'm all fyn just preparing some surprise for you so without waisting tym get ready & yeah open the almirah ..reading this she immediately opened it & find a beautiful off should pink gown & also a note in it"wear it & come fast I'll be waiting for you..


Yours only yours
Kaddu

She becomes so happy & excited like a baby she immediately get ready wearing this beautiful gown with simple diamond stud she let her hair open & did a lil make up after getting satisfaction she open the door to go here already a waiter standing there & take her to Raman..

Waiter- mam this way..he point the area where raman was waiting for her

She stepped inside it's a beautiful garden which decorated with lots of candles & flowers

Ishita calls his name when rose petals starts raining on her she open her arms to feel it suddenly she hears his voice

Woh Dil ki baat Dil mein hi chupte rahe

Bin kahe bin bataye Hume chahte rahe

Hum anjaan unki chahat se apni duniya me gum rahe

Na jaan sake k unke lgte Kya hum hain

Na keh sake unse ke wahi to humare Sanam hain


(Thx akku baby for this perfect poem)

Raman comes in front of her she was surprised to see him in DDLJ's Raj attire

Raman - so how I'm looking?

Ishita - can't express my feeling but why are you in this attire & what's all this..she points towards decoration

Raman - tu itni toh buddu hai nhi kitni dikhane ki koshish kar rhi hai..

Ishita turns "I don't understand what are you trying to say?

Raman - ok mai clearly bolta hu ..saying he bend on his kness & holds her hand

Raman- sorry chasmish

Ishita (with confusion)- for what?

Raman - how much bad I'm ki tujhe itna hurt kiya apne jaye doston mein mai apni ish chasmish ko toh bhool hi gya but isme Teri bhi galti hai yaad hai bachpan mein kaise mujhse fight karti thi jb mai Teri baat nahi maanga tha but jb maarna chahiye tha tb nhi maara itna pyar chhupa ke rakha apne andar par ek baar bhi jaahir nhi kiya why u do this han?

Ishita eyes is teared up hearing" how can I? You never loved me & you forget me totally in ur new life even you made a gf so tell me how can I confess my feeling..

Raman - han you can't tell me but can share with that lappy..

Ishita - omg that means u checked my lappy & read all feeling which I share in it..

Raman - han toh achha hi hua na warna toh mujhe kbhi kuch pta hi nhi chlta..

Ishita - that means it's all bcoz of that only so u doing it as mercy on me..saying her eyes filled with unshed tears

Raman cupped her face & wiped it "no it's due to mercy but yes if I'm confessing my feeling so it's bcoz of ur lappy u know this 24hrs totally changed me & my life maine aajtk itna enjoy nhi kiya bcoz of you I had eat oily food,travel in bus then on road without any rules & regulations ur smile makes me happy & ur tears make me sad you know when I had broke up with Soniya I felt so relaxed & happy bcoz u r with me & I realized my feeling for you & want to propose you but dropped the idea bcoz I thought you'll think I'm taking advantage of this situation but glad that I opened ur lappy & come to know that how much you love me that u r leaving me for my happiness.. Both had tears in their eyes

Ishita - that means u really love me na kaddu..

Raman - of course I do chasmish I love you sooo much chasmish will you marry me she nodded happily & he make her wear a diamond ring both shared a serene eye lock ishita closed her eyes he smiles seeing this & captured her lips in his & starts kissing her slowly its not wild but a gentle one with pure love both parted due to need of air & hugged each other






In Delhi
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Mr bhalla- toshi ji raman KB ayega ?

Mr arora - ragini ishu achanak se apni frnd se Milne chli gyi & & I'm trying to call her but she is not taking..


Ragini to toshi ji- toshi I think now we have to tell them all truth which toshi ji nodded


Mr bhalla - arey boliye ap dono chhup kyu hai?

Toshi - wo actually.. She was saying when they heard "Him yahan hai" everyone turned & saw that IshRa is standing behind them

Mr arora - arey u both had come..

Ishita - yup papa..

Mr bhalla - but u both r together..

Raman - actually papa we just met in entrance..

Mr bhalla - ok come ..both comes inside then everyone settled both mother's were so tensed

Mr arora - bachcho we want talk with both of you..

Raman - yeah boliye..

Mr bhalla - actually we had fixed ur marriage bt don't worry we will not pressuring u it's all urs decision..

IshRa - we are ready..listening this both mother's was happily surprised

Mr bhalla - really koi jaldbazi nhi bhai u can take ur tym...

Ishita - nhi uncle Hume aap logo pe poora bharosha hai ap hmare liye achha hi sochenge..listening this everyone became do happy and finally IshRa got married in one week..


That's all for it I hope u all liked it so hit like button do comments also..


Love
Harshita
Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago
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Thanks for pm
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It was an awesome os
Loved it totally 👏 👏
Hats off yaar
U wrote it so beautifully
Ty 4 d pm too
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Nice os dear...
I just loved it.
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Wow harshii it's an mind blowing, awesome, superb ,beautiful, amazing Os..
Really I loved it totally..
U wrote it so brilliantly..
IshRa are childhood frnds..
Their parents also close frnds..
They fixed their marriage..
But ishra was not ready..
So they don't want it so runs from their house..
Bt banged with each other..
Omg yrr u & ur names..
Kaddu & Chasmish
You are really innovative..
So raman had an gf name soniya..
Bt glad they broke up..
Bt here it an amazing twist..
Ishita already loves him..
That lappy wala para was superb..
Just love ishu's talk with lappy..
Finally IshRa confessed..
They got married..
Wowww..
Why are you saying that u can't write Os..
You know u r an amazing writer who can writes anything..
So plz try to write more Os like..
Thx for pm..
Edited by Sunshine_DivAn - 7 years ago
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lovely Kaddu and Chashmish stroy...fun to see Ishita as a punjabi for a change
lovely story
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New concept and written wonderfully
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Nice one dii
Ishu always loved Raman
But he loved someone else
Finally they are together
Thnx for the pm
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Amazing os harshi.
Loved it.
Ishra r childhood friends n
Their parents fixed their marriage but both denied
As Raman loves someone else n she for his happiness..
Ishu's love for him was so pure n unconditional..
Finally he realised his feelings for her n her love for him n proposed her..
They got married..
Loved their cute nicknames..
Very beautifully written.
Enjoyed reading this.
Thanks for d pm dear:)

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