MAAN GEET SS MY TWISTED FATE COMPLETED - Page 16

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Maan being a good observer understood Brij's change in demeanor whilst pammi's presence and absence. Maan thought to use Brij's weakness Pammi for his work but alas his fate had it's own plans. Now Maan's weakness Geet is in Brij's hands along with Mohi. Maaneet and mohi are in Brij's place.

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Part 6

It was two days I am staying in brij house,I got to know lot about him,he was not a bad guy but yes he did have a weakness for money mayb in his greed to become rich he occupied mahi land,if he was bad he wouldn't help the people who came yday in need of money to save their only child,he gave them the money without second word and I was quite schoked seeing this side of him,from adi what I got was he loves his sister to bits,and she was carrier oriented so she cant settle in hoshiyarpur and brij cant move to delhi leaving his world here...so he was searching ways to secure his sister stay at delhi,well I am actually impressed with brij he did trapped mahi well,if mahi got shares brij sister life was settled,if not then brij got the land for himself if anyone knew mahi ,they knew him how greedy he was so to get his land he will surely find and brought the shares like he kept on nagging me.

On one side I am knowing Brij well on other side mahi was burning in rage..Well I didn't left a single chance to romance my geet Infront of mahi..Making his blood boil..He can't do anything except fake smiles before others,while all he kept thinking was how to murder me..Geet was being paranoid of something,she kept fearing of loosing me,but I am sure I can win her,today I decided to tell Brij why actually I am here and that mahi was not my uncle and all ,geet is not my frnd but love of my life,mayb he can help me ,he was not that mean actually..So I decided to confide in him,so I was searching him in whole house while adi informed me some people too were waiting for Brij from past 15 min but he was no where to b seen,and his men were clueless about him...I watched them panicking and discussing where he could b..As he had many rivals,it mayb harm to go alone ,I was kept praying not to add anything more to my prblms when like a lightning I remembered him going with yash an hour ago..I saw them both from terrace as they were moving from back gate...I quickened my steps to back lawn which was almost deserted ,I kept on moving to find them ,the more I move the more I felt suspicious...why Yash and Brij had to come here alone...what ever Brij does he will do before others daringly...not like a thief in deserted places...with few more steps I heared someone moaning in pain and with out making noice I followed only to find Brij was tied to a tree and was surrounded by 3-4 men,while Yash was ready to stab him...

My hero instinct kicked in making me fight with them...well they r just goons but I am trained in marshal arts being Tai chi my fav8 I overpowered them with in few minutes and yash jumped on me like a wounded lion ,well a kick and two more punches he was blocked out,I quickly freed Brij who was on the verge of passing out and tried to take him home but he resisted to get in..

Maan: u have to rest..

Brij: yeah,but pammi..She can't bear looking at me like this...

Maan: but..

Brij: few minutes maan..Just bring water,I am alright,and ask adi to bring change of clothes,it will hide my wounds..

I quickly ran to get the things and adi followed me ,we both helped Brij in changing now he was OK just little tired..

Adi: kab tak yeh sab chalegaa jiju,AAP koh di she bolna padega..

Brij: AUR WHO muje chod DHEYGI..

Adi: jiju..

Brij: tum USS khi Bhai ho adi..TUMHE patah hai USS she kitni nafrat hai inn sab she...yash TOH muje Badla Lene aaya that..Woh 6 mahine pehle humne ek ladke koh maara kyun khi who humari gav KHI ladki khey sath zabardasti KHI...yash USS KAH Bhai tha...Humari waje she USS khi Bhai KHI pher chaligayi...ussi KAH badla leene...

Adi: AUR yeh sab kab tak chalegaa jiju...

Brij: jab tak mein zinda hoon...mujhse hi yeh sab katam hoga...issi liye Maine bachey BHI NAHI socha..SAB kuch mujhse katam hoga...bas tum ho pammi khey liye AUR MERI behen BHI Khush rahe kuch AUR NAHI chahiye muje...

He looked at me with gratitude and said he had a priceless gift for me..I know mayb Brij was ready to give that land...which I can throw at mahi and get my geet,we all waited for few more minutes and when Brij was feeling slightly reveal from pain we started to home,hmm Brij home,while my heart was jumping in joy as with in 3 days I am going to win the challenge...and I can't wait to see mahi face.i kept grinning while day making both mahi and geet wonder,while geet was happy with me...needless to say it irked mahi...I was waiting for Brij to call me soon enough adi came to take me...but I feel he was a bit off.. Something was Missing with the way he called me...I moved with him wondering what it willb,but the sight that awaited was more confusing...mahi was grinning ear to ear,while geet was throwing draggers at me...she was happy a few moments before right!!!...then what exactly happened that she was on the verge of cry..I was still looking between mahi ,geet and adi who was behaving idly that I missed Brij who came towards me and escorted to seat beside a girl...a new face,I had never seen her before...but Brij removed my confusion.

Brij: maan yeh MERI behen Sasha...mein jaantha hoon Toda jaldi hai par maan tum SAB kuch jaanthey ho...iss liye...

I was confused what and why Brij was talking but his next set of words made me numb...

Brij: Maine mahi she tmhari bare mein poocha...unhone SAB kuch bataya kaise tumhare Papa guzar Gaye..Kaise tum APNI parivaar khey liyemehnath karrahe ho...aur muje Laga MERI Sasha koh Tumse accha ladka NAHI milsaktha...tum USS she shadi KAHRO...aur shadi she pehle mein TUMHE who lland dhey donga his khey liyetun yeha aaye...

Mahi neh toh tumhare maa she bhi bath Karvaya mahi she... AUR WHO bi raazi hai ... Aaj she doh din baad tumhare AUR Sasha KHI shadi hai...asp KHI parivaar BHI aarahe hai..Mahi neh khudh SAB koh bhulaya MERI Taraf she..Woh kya hai naa mein inn koh NAHI jaantha AUR tumne khudh KAHA mahi tumhare uncle hai...toh wahi bath kahre teek hai naa...muje TOH Toda shak hua kahi tun geet she pya vyar TOH NAHI..Par mahi neh SAB batadiya muje...abh SAB teek hai aaj mein bohoth Khush hoon...

I looked around to see mahi giving me a wicked smile ,geet face red with anger while adi watched me with anger!!! Anger but why...and my eyes landed on the girl with whom my marriage was fixed she too was in schok seems like ,she looked at me with rage...woah wait rage but why !!!all this marriage fiasco which was being played now was screened by mahi...I got it very clearly how he would have manipulate Brij in favour of me getting smell of Brij cooking about me and his darling sister...he even called my family here and what lies he fed to them I am still unaware as my family knew I love geet and why I am here..What was the reason that mahi include my family ,he knew well they support me,,, then!!!?...if I opposed Brij he may target them...was this the reason mahi called them here..Oh no my weakness was now in their hands...I had to play safe..As challenge I had to win both geet and land...now owing to my misery I had to out smart brij...In my thoughts I was still looking at Sasha which gave a wrong message...brij thought I need few minutes with my to b bride...so he pushed us in a room to TALK...I reluctantly went inside while looking at geet who was tearing the tissue to million pieces ...i know she was gladly imagining me as tissue only if she got a chance she will tear me apart..I chuckled at my imagination looking at her ,she took entire wrong meaning and bryste into tears before leaving from there...

I looked at the girl who was looking at me with red eyes..Somebody should tell her I was already taken...I cceared my throat to talk but she ...

Ssha: so..U want to marry me!?

I looked confused..When did I even said that..Why all in my life r ready to draw thuer own conclusions..Even before I reply she shooted another

Sasha: look I am not ready ,so u have to tell my brother that u r not interested in me...

Maan: no...I shouted

Sasha: so..U want to marry me...

Maan: no,it's not that...look I want to b in your brother good books...I need to get something from him... ... . to get my love...

Sasha: hoo love problem...

I just nodded unable to dwell in details...

Sasha: the girl who was ready to kill u was the one...

I again nodded ,

Maan:tum mana kardoh... Tumhara bhai hai...

Sasha: nahi... won nahi maanenge.. ... par mere paaz plan hai...

She smirked and stood up giving a look she was about to go out when geet entered with tray...I looked confused why geet was serving but her glare cleared my confusion..My misty was spying on me...possesive mishty..But my trace and smile both broke with Sasha words who rather shouted...

Sasha: Bhai...I am ready to marry maan day after tmrw...she said looking shyly at geet...

And next second I shreiked when something hot fell on me...uff it's te tea r coffee my misty brought...she dropped unknowingly(knowingly) on me hearing Sasha words...itna gussa misty MERI bath TOH sunlethi...ek MERI sareer Jala Rahi hai AUR ek MERI zindagi Jala neh KHI taiyaari karrahi hai

UFF MY FATE...WHAT EXACTLY IS HAPPENING WITH ME...,.!!!!!!!!!

PART 7

I kept knocking the door but geet didn't budge to open finally giving up I was about to move from there,when my eyes landed on lonely figure near the well..It was past midnight and someone was walking towards well in the backyard...on looking for some more moments I finally found it was adi..But what was he doing there...at this tym..Confused I decided to talk to him..He was behaving a bit odd with me from the moment Brij decided my MARRIAGE without my consent...well he was not to b blamed that stupid mahi said I am ready for MARRIAGE...so all this nonsense started my thoughts broke seeing adi ready to jump in well...I was schoked and about to shout when all of a sudden he was grabbed by someone...i was even more schoked seeing Sasha slapping adi...

Sasha: jaan dhey neh KHI himmath hai..Par MERI Bhai she bath karne khi himmath nahi hai..Hai naa

Adi: tumne shadi khey liye haan kyun kaha...

Sasha: AUR kya Karthi...naa bolthi...taaki Bhai kal kisi aur koh lehaaye...abh tum TOH mooh kolne she rahe...

Adi: TOH KYA TUM sach mein shadi kahroge uss she...

Sasha:shadi Karne tak agar who zinda raha TOH..!!! Tab sochenge...

Adi: Sasha's

Sasha: kya!!AUR kya kahroon..Tum NAHI bologe...mein NAHI bolsakthi...abh agar shadi khi mandap she dhula gayab hai toh...kisi koh toh dhula banna hai naa..

Adi: Tum pagal hogayi ho Sasha..Tum maan koh maroge...

Sasha: mein nahi...chuhe maarne wali dawa maardheygi USS she..Bada aaya mujhse shadi Karne...

And a gasp behind me brought me out of schok ,schok of hearing my own murder plan with chuha maarne wali dawai...on turning I find geet who was equally schoked...while adi was still looking at Sasha with his open mouth but the person who schoked us was as cool as cucumber...i gritted my teeth

Maan: Tum muje maroge...muje maan Singh khurana koh who BHI chuha KHI dawai she...

Sasha:who dawai koh patah nahi hai naa ..KHI Tum maan ho ha chuha..Bas maardhey thi hai AUR mera raasta Saaf...

Maan gritted his teeth: dohno Bhai behen MERI JAAN KHI peechey pade hai: kyun naa who dawaA mein TUMHE AUR tumhare pyare Bhai koh khikadhoon ..MERI aur geet khi raasta kya saari problems hi katam hojayega MERI...

Sasha and maan were ready to strangle each other necks but adi and geet pulled them apart...while maan calmed down a bit Sasha was glaring adi to stop her...

Adi: SSS..Sasha..Yeh gussa Karne KAH WAQT NAHI ..Kuch Socho..

Maan: Sochne khey liye dimag hona chahiye...ISS khey pass KAHA...

Sasha was about to punch maan when geet came in between, stopping them both...

Geet: maan plz...stop it,hum SAB koh sath milkar sochna hai...maan

All decided to think on possible options

geet:maan hume land KHI papers chahiye...

Sasha: bhai neh kahar shadi she pehle hi milega USS she...

Adi: maan shadi khey mandap tak NAHI pouncha chahiye...

Maan: jab muje papers milenge..Mein CHALA jaoonga geet AUR MERI family koh lehkar...

All looked at him with amazement making maan frown...

Maan: kya!!!??

Adi: maan yehi TOH raasta hai...shadi she pehle hi TUMHE jiju papers dhenge,Tum bas inn koh lehke chale Jaana...baki mein aur Sasha manage Karlenge...

Maan doubted a bit: par Brij mere peechey laggaya TOH...

Ssha: Bhai koh mein Samhalongi..Tum bas yeha she ayab hojao.

Maan glared at her but agreed,if this was the only option he is ready...

Maan: OK then...its decided jis moment muje papers muje milenge mein ,geet AUR MERI family yeha she dur...humari problem BHI katam..Bas ek AUR din ...

I said looking at geet lovingly who smiled ,after discussing some more things we parted to have a sleep Thinking all was under control,even though I doubted a bit about my twisting fate.. how come Everything solved so easily...but i shrugged and concentrated on our escape with my family...thinking of beautiful future I drifted into sleep...only to b wakened by Brij shouting...not only me ,geet even adi and Sasha were too confused cum schoked hearing his roar...I fastened my steps and others followed me..On reaching I saw about 50-70 men standing there with every type of swords...for a moment it fascinating but next moment I frowned how can they stand with sword what about pammi,but next second my eyes widened registering pammi went to some temple to offer her praying for Sasha MARRIAGE as it's ritual in their Amily..She was about to return today evening after that MARRIAGE rituals were about to start...my thought again broker with Brij taking my name with anger...the thought that ran in my mind was WHAT NOW!!??

BRIJ just shoved a mobile in my hand which played the video of me ...just me saying "jis moment muje papers muje milenge mein ,geet AUR MERI family yeha she dur...humari problem BHI katam..Bas ek AUR din ...I don't need to know who recorded it and showed to Brij that leech mahi...

Brij: tumne sirf muje NAHI maan..Tumhare uncle koh BHI dhoka Diya agar geet she pyar tha TOH shadi khey liye haan kyun kaha...

Maine haan kab kaha...uss mahi neh kaha AUR AAP neh maanliya...dhoka...koun kis koh dhey raha hai...i thought to myself..I dare not open my mouth ...I hhad nothing to prove my innocence...

Brij: AUR geet Tum..Pyar kiya toh apni papa Koh bolsakthi thi...pyar karna galat NAHI hai..Par haan USS she chupa KAR dhoka dheyna bohoth galath hai...

I and geet both looked at Sasha and she too got the message...i thought to intervene I couldn't stand someone blaming my geet...

Maan: Brij MERI bath...

Brij: NAHI AUR jhoot NAHI..He snapped at me..But a took a step closer towards him...

Even before I speak two of his trusted men lunged at me,I punched them but the count of men kept on increasing adi too was fighting with his own men to save me..But they were more in number..Geet and Sasha both were pleading Brij to ask them stop...but Brij heared nothing..He kept looking at me with rage...it didn't took them to cage me and adi...one man throwed his sword at Brij ...which he took and dangerously moved close to slash my neck...

I opened my eyes...only to find the sword a millimetre away ...i looked at geet who was still pleading mahi and Brij ,she was held by mahi...I smiled Thinking this was my last moment but...

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Dev: maan...

BRIJ stopped his sword and looked at dev,Meera and avantika...he dropped his sword making maan breath in relief...geet forcefully freed herself and ran towards maan,in her way she just pushed Brij...dev and avantika too came to him...while dev was still fearing avantika hugged maan to feel her child was safe...she was still checking if maan was fine...

Brij: AAP...maan AAP KAH beta hai...

Avantika looked at Brij and just nodded,she didn't kew why he was asking ,when Sasha joined Brij and folded hands Infront of maan and his mom...making others confuse..

Sasha: I am sry maan,I am sry aunty...meri waje she app khi Pati KAH accident hua..Muje bachatheh who khudh...

she gulped thinking how she was in a hurry crossing the busy road but came before ranjit khurana car...who was returning from temple with avantika..Both came out to check Sasha was fine..Who stood in the middle of road...not knowing her surroundings she asked sry and was about to move when ranjit noticed a truck coming her way,he tried to push her but by loosing his balance he himself got hurt ,the truck crushed his feet even before some one register another car passed making him more injured...avantika lost her consious seeing him ..But Sasha who was also injured with the push took them to nearest hospital..And called Brij ,.While Sasha who got minor injuries was getting treated ,avantika called dev they shifted ranjit who was asked by doctors to shift for his further treatment...they couldn't meet that day... ... sasha blamed herself for the accident while brij was always thankful for the pwrson who savwd his sister... And today seeing her they knew her husband was no more...

Sasha: plz Bhai...maan KHI koi galathi NAHI hai...muje bacha they inn khi Papa KHI jaan gayi..MERI waje she inn khi jaan ..NAHI Bhai..Plz..

Sasha narrated why maan was here and geet added her part how her father played with her life..Maan was here to save her...adi too confessed his love for Sasha..Giving schoks after schok to Brij...

He just went in and got the papers handed to Maan

BRIJ: I am sry maan..

Maan: NAHI AAP KHI galathi NAHI hai...yeh SAB TOH kisi aur KHI galathi hai..He eyed mahi with a smirk...

Maan holding geet hand went to mahi and gave him papers rather throwed at him and turned to Brij..

Maan: humari construction company hai Brij..Agar AAP koh teek page TOH MEIN Sasha AUR adi koh MERI company mein deserved post dheyna chahtha hoon...

Brij looked at adi and Sasha getting their nod he agreed to Maan..

Maan: abh Hume chalna chahiye pammi ji KHI aame she pehle..Agar unhone yeh sab dhek liya toh.

brij averted his eyes unable to face maan

Maan ,geet and his family were about to leave when Brij : arey aap KAHA jaas rahe hai!!??

All confused and turned to look at him only to find Brij was holding mahi

BRIJ: kal shadi TOH hogi NAHI...par AAP yehi rukenge Hume katirdari TOH Karne dhijiye...he smiled meaningfully at mahi and wicked at maan..Who smiled wickedly...He left taking his geet and family safe...

When pammi returned in the evening she was both schoked and elated knowing her brother and sister in law were in love,on asking about maan..Brij said his land problem was solved so he went from here wishing them to attend Sasha marriage ,while mahi wilb staying with them until MARRIAGE as Brij close frnd...he loves to help him in arrangements...for a month Brij had his ways with mahi ,who always draw pleasure from other miseries...