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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 5

Once pammi left to get us some drinks which I need verymuch for now and again I felt all eyes glaring me and change in eshwar well brijeshwar voice

Brij:jaan pyari hai toh jao yeha she aur haan meri biwi she kehkar jaana tumhara kaam hogaya hai..

Maan:toh aap land ..

Brij:uss mahi koh kehna shares lane koh phir land..

Maan:par..

Even before maan uttered anything ,brij changed his face to a pleasant smiling one and again the eyes those were glaring engaged themselves in their talk making me confuse that's when I found pammi was coming to adi whether he need coffe r tea...once she was back in kitchen everything changed and brij was back in threating mode...I had an inkling feeling that what ever this brij actually was he is hiding this thing from pammi,I didn't hear what he was speaking while my mind was running in ways to made him agree ,I weighed my options I finally decided to stay in this house,if I want geet in my life I had to play safe.

Brij:chup chap nikal jaa

That's the only words I heared before he change his words and asking about my family,with a smile,I don't need to see I am very much sure pammi was here so he changed his expressions more quick than chameleon putting it to shame..he was continuously eying me to get out of his house..well he expectes too much from me didn't he!!?

Pammi:aap khana khakar jayiyega..

Even before brij replied I replied hurriedly

Maan:yeha acchi hotel kaha hai..

As expected by me pammi questioned while... h brij frowned at me..

Pammi:hotel kyun!?

Maan;meri brij ji she bath hogayi,unhone kaha meri kaam ek hafte mein hojayega ..toh tab tak muje yehi rehna hai..abh jis kaam khey liye aaya hoon who poori karke hi jaoonga naa

I replied looking directly at brij making him fume,I smirked now his weak point was in my hand..and as expected both by me and brij pammi replied

Pammi:arey hotel kyun...aap yehi raho,itna bada ghar hai aap hotel mein kyun rahoge..kyun eshwar hai naa

Brij just nodded faking a smile,I patted myself mentally at my acting and I was escorted by adi who was pammi brother to a room on first floor..as soon as we entered adi started with his questioning which was out of concedrn ,I can find it in his words..

Adi:tumhe patah hai naa tum kya karrahe ho..

Maan:hmm

Adi:kyun apni jaan par khel rahe ho chale jao...tumhe yeha kuch nahi milega

Maan:yeha she chalagaya toh bhi kuch nahi milega

With a look at me he left from there leaving me alone in thia room,rest of the day I didn't had much surprises so I went to sleep to rest my mind and body ,I exactly don't have any plan to get that land back but ojne thing I was sure brij cannot harm me with pammi in picture,mayb in this week even I can get pammi to help me in this matter,thinking I slept unaware what awaited me tmrw..

I was sleeping peacefully when my door was knocked continuously I frowned and slowly opened my eyes it took me a minute to get where I am and again the knock made me realise I had to open the door,so I gotup towards the door,once I opened a soft body crashed in me making me to step back,and next second I knew it belongs to geet,GEET..what was she doing here and why!?even before I form my words she replied..

Geet:maan aap teek ho naa!?unn lohgo neh aap koh kuch..

Maan:mein teek hoon geet,par tum yeha..

Geet:maan who...who ..log..

Mahi:brij hume yeha lehkar aaya...uss she lagtha hai maine tumhe yeha bheyja..issi liye hume kidnap kiya aadi rath koh..

I and geet both parted... Se stood a lit bit away seeing him...

Maan:aap neh toh muje yeha bheyja sir..aur aap police koh cal nahi karsakthey they..

Mahi smirked:kiya tha..par police neh kha brij aisa kabhie nahi karsakthey..woh bohoth acche aur bhalle insaan hai..

Maan frowned at the cmnt but mahi cleared it was what anybody and everybody who knew him will tell about him,its their fear which speaks ..maan knew why because brij don't want pammi knew about him,this guy really loves his family.geet moved closer to maan seeing brij coming,and now maan weakness was infront of brij just like his.

Brij:toh aap khi safar mein koi pareshani nahi hui hogi naa he asked sarcastically

Mahi:safar ya kidnap..

Brij moved closely to mahi to threaten him but a voice caught his attention making him back

Pammi:eshwar,aap khi phone..and she stopped her words looking the unknown people infront she questioned brij with eye language

Brij:yeh meri dost mahi hai pammi,bohoth dur she aaye hai aur bohoth dur jaana bi hai toh yeha rukenge ek hafte,uss khey badh mein khudh inhe bhej dhoonga.aur haan maan mahi aur inki beti koh bhi wahi jaana hai jaha aap jaaqrahe hai..toh yeh batana sath javoge ya akele...ek hafte khey badh

Brij replied eyeing mahi and geet and left taking pammi with him.it was a clear threat for them to leave asap,if they intended to stay then he will have his ways with them.

WILL SURELY GO WITH GEET,WELL I CANT SAY SAME WITH MAHI,I thought to myself

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Posted: 7 years ago
All 3 in Brij's cave now
Maan thought he will use Brij's weakness Pammi for his work but now Maan's weakness Geet is also in hands of Brij

Thanks for PM

Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fantastic Chapter

Maan thought to use Brij weakness to his advantage but now
even Geet is there who is Maan's weakness
gosh and Geet's father he is one cunning person
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update didu
Liked it !!
Maan being a good observer understood Brij's change in demeanor whilst pammi's presence and absence. Maan thought to use Brij's weakness Pammi for his work but alas his fate had it's own plans. Now Maan's weakness Geet is in Brij's hands along with Mohi. Maaneet and mohi are in Brij's place.
Thanks for updating !
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update! well written! oh no Brij has Geet! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
oh no abb kya hoga?

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Originally posted by: swapna.p

Nice update.

Continue soon..

in a bit dear
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welcome😊
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thanks😊
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Fantastic Chapter

Maan thought to use Brij weakness to his advantage but now
even Geet is there who is Maan's weakness
gosh and Geet's father he is one cunning person

yes..he is😕

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