Rooh ka Raabta- A vanwaas conflict....Ch 31 18/05/18

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A new FF. Please Read and feel free to give suggestions. Here the characters are same as in the show...ie,
  • Shivaay singh oberoi-the great wall of Oberoi family...who considered naam khoon khandaan...etc as important stuffs in an individuals life...but it was changed by the entry of a girl ...yes its Annika...
  • OMKARA SINGH OBEROI(my favorite):the calm and artistic one among obros...loves his family than anything...(should i say more u guys know it na......gauri is on the way ha...)
  • RUDRA SINGH OBEROI(cry baby):the most smart among the obros...loves his brothers and dumbbells
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  • GAURI SHARMA: omkara's girl...chirpy one ...from small town named barrielly...desi ladki...she lives with hr mom...(g was adopted by hr mom...om met hr at barrielly...same...coz of kali...rikara marriage...hr entry as chullbull...om realises his mistakes ...still some problems between themdont worry ill clear it)
  • ANNIKA :shivaays wife...have an emotional flash back...same as in the show...(every thing same from the show...saahil...pinkis hatred...chutki...shivikas divorse...reunion ...phir se shadi nd all...)
The story will be starting with shivika's marriage...rikara's misunderstanding...and rudy's story...and initial chapters will be on rikara shivika nd rudy...(cz first rikara's misundrstandingz should be cleared...so i will be giving little more preference to rikara story than shivika coz there are lots of problems between them...and i can only start vanwas track aftr clearing it...)

A/N : This story is written by a friend on wattpad and she has told me to update it for her on India Forums.. Guys i am not plagiarizing this story. So please comment down below if you would like me to update further..

Do give this wonderful story a read..My friend is working hard for this story with me giving her some ideas here there.. The plot is solely hers

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CHAPTER 1
Om upset with gouri for what happened at his art exibition...shivaay misses annika as she has gone to meet saahil...bhavya reveals the truth that she was 4 years elder than Rudra
  • The tej-swethlana issue is solved and swethlaana is out of Om but she is still trying to destroy the oberois
At OM,
shivay :(on phone)...haan yaar tume bohot miss kar rahe hai...aur saahil kaise hai??sab teek ho na??ha...baad mein phone karta hu...bye...apna khayal rakna...phone rakhta hun main...( yes dear i missed you so much and how is sahil..you both take care will talk later)
rudy: teasingly says haye ...haye ...apne hone wale ,ho chuki biwi ki yaad aa rahi hai kya...how cute...bhaiyya aap hamare sath bhi thoda time spent karoge plz... ( oh brother please talk to us also.. y are you only missing our Sister inlaw)
dadi:beta annika ki phone aaya tha kya...?aur saahil kaisa hai?? ( son, did you speak to anika.. And how is sahil)
shivay:dadi voh theek hai aur kal vo dono aa jaenge...)grand ma they both are fine, will come tomorrow)
. dadi:rab da lakh lakh sukar hai...aur iska matlab kal se shadi ki baaki functions shuru hone vale hai ...haina??? ( thank god for that..So that means we can finally start the wedding functions from tomorrow)
shivay:dadi kal se nahi parso se rakhte hain...aur rudy baaki sab log kaha hai...? ( no dadi lets keep them from day after tomorrow and rudy where is everyone else)
rudy:voh mamma papa toh wedding ke preparations mein phase hue hai...aur chote papa toh office gaya hai...phir hamare love couples hai na voh apni kamre mein honge...aajkal o kuch jyada romantic hogya hai ( brother mom dad are busy for wedding decoration while uncle has to office; The love couple must be busy in their room anyhow these days Omkara has been in a romantic mood)

SHUT UP RUDY!!!!(om aagya...) Om said
om: koi gouri ko dhekha kya...??voh toh apni kamre mein bhi nahi hai...(has anyone seen Gauri..she sint there in the room as well)
shiv:voh kaha jayegi...yahi kahi hogi...tum tension mat lo om... ( dont worry om; she must be here somewhere)
om:mujhe kyu tension...voh...to...basss...( no no y will i worry, it was just)
shivay:aise kaise om...i know ...that u guys are having many problems ...phir phi kal exibition mein jo kuch bhi hua ...voh sab ki zimmedaar mein hoon ...mein ne he gauri se kaha tha vaha jane keliye...aur...( no just om; i understand that you guys are having lots of misunderstandings right now but i still would like to say that whatever happened yesterday was all because of me.. I was the one to send gauri for the exhibition)
om:shivaay...that's fine...actually i couldnt controll myself when i saw those media people making fun of her...i knew all these things would happen if i take her there...iseliye mein use nahi lejana chahta dha...( I didn't want to take her there for i knew all this would happen)
shivay:om tu janta hai na ki she dosent have good education...aur voh uski galti nahi hai...socho om ...kitna bura laga hoga gauri ko ...kal tum usse bahut nazar hokar batein kari thi...u were behaving so rude to her... ( om you are aware of gaurs's education and you know it very well that its not her fault but still you were very rude to her yesterday)

om:janta hun yaar shivaay par mein kya karuu...tu he btaa...i have to talk to her...have to apologise to her... On the other side gauri has decided to leave OM ...thinking that she doesn't deserve om and she cannot make him happy ...so she desided to go back to barreilly...she packed her bags and left for railway station... om started searching for gouri in OM...(are om she left from there...jaake doondo use...)
He entered the room searching for her...he couldn't find her...but he found something else...on the table...(yes its lettr)it was a letter and along with that her mangal sutra was kept on the top

om was hell shoked reading the letter... The Letter
omkara ji, hum jaa rahe hain ...hum aapko aur pareshan nahi karna chahte ...aap tension mat lejeiye hum barreilly jaa rahe hain apni maa ke paas...aur kabhi vaapas nahi aayegi aapki jindagi mein...aapko yaad hai jab pichle baar hum ghar chodkar jaane wale the...tab aapne hume jane nahi diya tha aur dekho ab kaisa raita phail gaya hai...mujhe he samajhna chahiye tha ki hum aapke layak the he nahi kabhi ...phir bhi humne yahan rukne ka phesla liya...ye sochkar ki aap aaj ya kal hume apni patni ka darja degi...par hum galat nikle...hum toh ek unpad aur desi chirayya hai...aur aap ...aap tot kient padhe likte hain vo bhi videsh se...hum kabhi ek nahi ho sakte...isliye hum ja rahe hainn...aap khush rehna humesha... gauri (Omkaraji, i am leaving because i don't want to further annoy you..You please don't worry i am going back to my mother's place in barreily and i will never come back in you life. You remember you had stopped me from leaving the last time now see what mess we are in right now.. But i should have understood it that time only that you and i don't belong together but still i decided to stay back thinking that you might accept me as your wife someday but i was wrong. I know we have a lot of differences like i am uneducated whereas you are highly educated and even have studied abroad but now i am leaving..you please take care

gauri)
Om pov yeh aise kaise kar sakte hai. raise jaa skate hai muse...apne omkaraji ko chodke...manta hun ki meri galti hai...par itni badi saza...nhn gauri aise nhn jaa sakti muje chaod ke tum...main tumble nhn jaane dunga ( i agree it was my fault but how can you leave me and go gauri.. Please don'tgive me such a big punishment ... no i won't let you go away from me)

He also notices that not even a single dress of hers was left in the cupboard (nothing was left exept the lettr nd mangalsutra) SHe took everything as if she never existed. om runs with the letter to shivaay... meanwhile ... rudy pov.. bhavya mujhse chaar saal badi hai...???toh kya hua.main usse bohot pyar karta hu.aap hame bahu kuch sikhaya hai...kal mujhe samajh mein aaya ki paise kya cheez hai aur ye bhi ki,use kamana utna aasan nahi hai...agar tum mere liye itna kuch kar sakti ho toh main bhi tumahre liye kar sakta hai...dekhna bhavya jaise tumne mujhe ek task di vaise mein bhi ek task deta hu tumhe...within 1 month i'll make u realise that age is not a big deal between us and u will come to me...ye mera vada hai ...khud se...

( what?? bhavya is elder to me by 4 years but still i love her a lot.. she has taught me a lot of things.. it was because of her that i now understand the importance of money and how difficult it is to earn money..If she can do the for me then even i can do something that makes her happy..Bhavya like you had given me a task to earn money even i will give you a task to make you realize that the age difference between us isn't a very big deal...i will make you realize this in a month...its my promise). bhavya pov hum jante hai rudy ki aap hamse bahut pyar karte hai lekin ... humne apni jindagi mein bahut kuch khoya hai...humari maa..paa...aur choti behen ...all these happend only because i was a cop...and i had enimity with sultan...so i dont wanna put the whole family who loves me lot ...into danger...sirf isiliye hum aapse door re rahe hain...hum jaante hai ki age is not a big deal between us...but its only a stupid reason for me to stay away from u...( rudy i know that you love me a lot but i have a lost a lot in my life just because i am a cop and i have enmity with the goon named sultan.. and just because of me i don't want the family who loves and adores me to fall into trouble so i am giving you this age difference reason to stay away from you).


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CHAPTER 2

recap: gauri left OM...bhavya to stay away from rudy...annika informs shivaay that she will be back soon with sahil...

so lets start...

Om: shivay...shivay...yeh dekho... ( shivay see)

shivay: yaar om tumhe kya hua...tum toh bahut tensed lag rahe ho...kya baat hai btao? ( What happened om.. you look very tensed..tell me if there is a problem)

om: shivvay...sab kuch khatam hogya...( Shivay everything is over)

shivaay: yeh tum kya keh rahe ho om??sab kuch khatam matlab??? Tum please mujhe saaf saaf batao ki aakhir hua kya hai.. ( Om what are you speaking..please be clear in what you wanna say).

om handsover the letter to shivay...and says kuch nhn bacha shivay.. wo apna saara samaan legye sirf yeh magalsutra hai.. Aisa lagta hai maano wo kabhi thi he nhn yahaan..( Shivay none of her belongings except the mangalsura are there.. She has erased all signs of her existence from this place)

shivay: om yeh sab kya ho raha hai...tumne phirse gauri ke sath jhagda toh nahi kiya na aur use itna bada faisla kaise le liya? ( Om what is happening.. Did you fight with Gauri again and tell me how did she manage to take such a step)

om (denying): nahi shivay...maine kuch nahi kiya...infact main toh usse maafi mangne gaya tha...par...par sab ulta ho gya hai..ab main kya karun shivay...kahaan dhoondu use..kaise dhoondo..kuch samjh nhn aa raha hai ( No shivay I didn't do anything..Moreover I went in to apologize to her but see everything has gone wrong.. I don't know where and how to find her now)...

rudy ( came from outside): kya ??chulbul bhabhi ghar chodkar chali gyi...par kyun???

Getting no response he continues;

O aap bade he raakshas nikle...kya kiya aapne meri bhabhi ke sath...agar unhe kuch bhi hua na toh ek jhaap mein divaar se sat ... ( what?? Chulbul bhabi has left the house; O you have proved to be a very big demon.. what have you done now tell me... I will not spare you incase anything happens to my SIL..I will slap you to the wall)

om: SHUT UP RUDY !!!! use kuch nahi hoga!...mere rehte main use kuch nhn hone dunga...yeh mera waada hai...shivay ...rudy...main jaa raha hu...use dhoondhne ...( Nothing will happen to her rudy.. I wont let anything happen till I am alive..i am going to hunt for her now)

omkara starts to move out when shivay and rudy call him out he stops and turns around

om: kya hua guys ( what happened guys)

Shivay/Rudra: ruko! Hum bhi challenge gauri/chulbul bhabhi ko dhoondhne (wait! We will accompany you to find Gauri/Chulbul bhabhi)

Om: but guys tum log kyun...mera matlab hai main dhoond lunga usse khud( Guys why do you wanna come.. I can manage)

rudy: kyu nahi O...infact hame toh pata hai voh kaha...( Y not O Infact we are already aware of here whereabouts)

shivaay( shouts) : RUDY!!!! And then rudy realizes what he did

Om( shocked): kya?? tum logon ko pta hai...?? ( what?? Do you guys already know)

Shivru ( covering up and denying): nahi hum darasal yeh kehne wale the ki hume nahi pata hai...nahi pata hai hume...aur tum jake use dhoondho...hume ek urgent kaam hai...bye...chalte hain...update dena...ha ok...bye...( No actually we wanted to say that we don't know where she is so you go and find her while we go and complete our works..Ok bye)

om pov:

ajeeb baat hai inn dono ko hua kya hai...yeh log aise behave kyu kar rahe hai...leave it...abhi mujhe gauri ko dhoondhna hai... wo zaada zaroori hai

and om left to find his gauri ( This is weird.. don't know what has happened to these two..Let it go I need to find gauri right now Its more imp)

shivay: RUDY!!PAAGAL HOGAYA KYA!!!?? ( are you mad)

rudy: kyun? maine kya kiya...??main toh bas... ( Y what have i done)

shivay :haan...kya haan? tum toh bass sare plans ki tai tai phiss karne wali the...i mean barbaad karne wale the...( what Y?? you were just about to ruin everything now)

rudy: sorry bhaiiyya...mere mooh se voh nikal gaya...( I am sorry it was just a slip)

Then shivay and rudra remember wat they did

flash back

gauri(on phone): ji...ab unki tabiyat kaisi hai...ji...hum abhi aate hai...(cuts the phone)arree...arre sankar ji...ye kaise haalat mein daal diya hai aapne apni iss chiraiyya ko... ek taraf humari maa ki tabiyat theek nahi hai...aur doosri taraf omkara ji aur humare beech ki dooriyan hai jo badte he ja rahi hain...par hume abhi barreilly jana hoga..(thinking) omkaraji yaha kahi dikhte nahi hai...unse bina kahe hum kaise ja sakte hai...hey sankar ji. Aap he kuch madat kijiye ab ( How is she feeling now. Yes I will come now.. Oh lord what situation have you put your dear child birdie in.. One side there is my mother who isn't well while on the other hand the misunderstanding between my and omkaraji are increasing everyday.. But right now I will have to go to see my mother.. But where is omkaraji..i cant find him anywhere and I cant leave without informing him..Lord please me what should I do now)

shivru: gauri/bhabi kya hua...kiska phone tha jo tum/aap bahut pareshan lag rahi ho... ( what happened whose phone was it that you look so tensed)

gauri: ji bade bhaiyya/rudy bhaiya ...voh darasal maa ki tabiyat achanak se bigad gayi hai...aur voh hume dekna chahte hai...omkara ji abhi yaha nahi hai aur unka phone bhi nahi lag raha hai...toh kya aap pleej unse kah denge yeh baat...( Brothers actually my mom's health has worsened suddenly so she wants to see me right away..But since omkara ji isn't here and is not picking up his phone can you please inform him the same)...

shivay: kyu nahi...tum jao gauri...om se hum baat kar lenge...tum jaane ki tyaari karo...mein taxi bulata hu... ( y not gauri... you go we will inform om..Go and pack your stuff while we call the taxi for you)

gauri: ji bade bhaiyye ...thanku.. ( ok thanks bro)

(gauri left...but then rudy noticed that her mangalsutra was lying on the table...she forgot to wear it since she was in a hurry)

rudy( shouting): arre...bhabhi ...bhabhi...rukiye...ye aapka mangalsutra...arre chale gayi.. ( SIL stop you left your mangalsutra behind)

shivay: rudy ruko hume ek kaam karna hai...tum ek paper leke aao letter likhna hai...( rudy wait we have to do something go and get a piece of paper we have to write a letter)

rudy: bhaiyya please ab aap yeh mat kehna ki aap phirse annika bhabhi keliye chitti likhne wale hai...( bro please don't tell me that you are again going to write a letter for anika bhabhi)

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shivay: SHUT UP RUDY!!!

yeh letter toh hai par annika keliye nahi ...om keliye... ( even though it's a letter but for om and not for anika)

rudy: OH MY MATA!!! gauri bhabhi chali gayi aur ...aaap O keliye love letter likne vale ho ...kaise bhai hai aap...chhii...chhii...( Gauri bhabhi has just left and you are writing a love letter for om..what kind of a bro are you..Yuk!)

shivay: tum chup raho rudy ( keep quiet rudy)

yeh letter toh om keliye hai par gauri ki taraf se...kal jo bhi exhibition par hua na...usme om ke bhi galti hai...he insulted gauri...isiliye use saza bhi milni he chaheye hai... ( this is a letter for Om but from Gauri... whatever happened in the exhibition yesterday was om's fault as well he insulted gauri so he should be punished too)

rudy: aap kya karne ja raha hai bhaiya...?? ( what are you going to do bro?)

shivay: rudy tum ek kaaam karo...u just shift gauri's dresses to prinkus room...gauri ka koi bhi saaman om ke kamre mein nahi hona chahiye... ( rudy you please shift gauri's stuff to priyanks's room.. None of gauri's things should be found in om's room)

rudy: bhaiyya ...aap o aur gauri bhabhi ki divorce ke baare mein baate kar rahe hai kya??? ( bro are talking about O and gauri bhabhi's divorce)

shivay: nahi rudy hum ab om ko ye dikhayenge ki gauri uski vajah se ghar chodke chali gayi hai..and om will start to feel guilty for what he did ...aur fer finally uski yehi guilt pyaar main badal jaaegi. ( No rudy we will show om that gauri has left the house because of him; then he will be guilty and slowly this guilt will change into love)

rudy: bhaiyya...ekdum khidkithod idea hai...i mean superb idea hai...mein bhabhi ka samaan prinku ki room mein shift karta hu...aur aap letter likhna start karo...( Bro this is a fab idea.. I will shift bhabhi's stuff to priyanka's room and you start working on the letter)

shivay: ab toh tum gaye om...hahaahhaaa...( now you are gone OM_)

shivru hifi and start to execute their plan...

flash back ends

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om: yeh gauri bhi na...ye sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi...manta hun main ki galti meri hai...par ab kahan jaake dhoondu use main...bhavya ki help leta hu... ( I agree it was my mistake but gauri shouldn't have done this. Now where will I search for her.. Let me take bhavya's help)

meanwhile in OM

shivay: bechara om.. ab tak usne poora mumbai chaan liya hoga gauri ke liye...haha...( poor om would have searched the whole Mumbai for gauri by now)

rudy: ha bhaiyya...agar galti ki hai toh saza bhi milne chahiye na...( yes bhaiya there should be punishment for a mistake)

shivay: vaise rudy...hume humare plan ke bare main bhavya ko bhi bta dena chaheye ( rudy we should inform bhavya about this plan as well)

rudy : par kyu bhaiyya...( but y bro)

shivay: stupid...socho...bhavya ek cop hai aur agar om gauri ko dhoondh nahi paya to pakka voh bhavya ki help lega... ( stupid because bhavya is a cop so omkara will definitely ask her for help incase he isn't able to find gauri)

rudy : ha...bhaiyya... yeh baat toh sach hai...hume jaldi karna hoga ...agar o ne uski help humse pehle maang li toh humare plan...( yes bro that is true!! We should hurry up so that O doesn't ruin our plan by asking bhavya for help before we reach and tell her).

(they ran to bhavya...)

at the same time om took out his phone to call bhavya...

shivru: bhavya hume tumse kuch baat karni hai...( bhavya we need to talk to you)

(bhavya's phone rings)

bhavya: ji ...bhaiyya...ek second...hamara phone...( yes bro; one sec- my phone)

shivay: haan koi baat nahi tum phone utho...( yes nothing to worry; you can receive the call)

bhavya on phone: hello...kaun hai...??haan...om bhaiyya...aap...kya hua...?? ( yes who is it..OH om bhaiya you..tell me what happened)

shivru: KYA OM?? bhavya cut the call...cut it...( what om is on the line bhavya cut the call)

bhavya: par kyu...( but y)

finally rudy grabbed the phone from bhavya and cut the phone...

bhavya: arre ye kya kiya aapne...omkara bhaiyya kuch imp baat keh rahe the...infact voh bahut pareshan lag rahe the...( what have you done? Omkara bro was saying something important infact he was sounding very tensed)

shivru: thoda pareshan hone do na usse...( its o let him be a little tensed)

bhavya: ye aap log kaise baatein kar rahe hai...??( what are you guys talking)

shivru tell her about their plan...

bhavya: ji...toh...yahi baat hai...hum bhi aap ki madad karenge...hamare om bhaiyya aur gauri bhabhi ki bhalai keliye haina...( oh so that's thE matter fine I will also help you guys since its for my omkara bro and gauri bhabhi)

shivay :thank u bhavya...ab tumeh ek kaam karna hoga ( thanks bhavya now you will have to do one thing)

bhavya: kya kaam bhaiyya...aaap boliye...( yes tell me bro)

shivay: voh...tum ab om ko call karo...aur voh jo bhi tumse kehte hai na voh tum humse kaho...theek hai...( call om and tell us whatever he says)

Bhavya: ji...good idea... ( okay...that's good)

bhavya took her phone and called om

om: hello..ha bhavya...i need your help...voh kya hai na ki gauri ghar chodke chali gai...and I have searched whole mumbai...but...( hey bhavya actually gauri has left the house and I have searched everywhere but)

bhavya: ji...aap btaiye hume kya karna hai bhaiyya...?? ( yes bhaiya tell me what do I have to do)

om: bhavya tum please zara gauri ka phone number track karke bataogi ki ab voh kaha hai...( can you please tack her number nd let me know her whereabouts)

bhavya: ji bhaiyya...hum karenge...aaap tention mat lo...( okay bro I will do it..please don't worry)

she cuts the call...

shivru: toh yeh baat hai...( so this is the matter)

rudy: ek idea hai...bhavya tum na kuch suicide point ka naam kaho o se...and make him more tensed...( bhavya say a suicide point name as the location to make him more tensed)

bhavya: nahi rudy...yeh kuch jyada hojayega...( no rudy this will be too much)

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shivay: nahi bhavya...he should know the value a women...he should realize the pain of loosing gauri atleast for some time...

rudy: tum chinta mat karo bhavya.. hum bhi o ko follow karenge...( don't worry bhavya we will follow O)

bhavya( reluctantly): theek hai...ab hum om bhaiyya ko phone karte hai...( okay then I will Om bro now)


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Originally posted by: chils

Awesome dear

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Thank you so much...I am glad you liked it!!😊
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Thank you for reading. I have just updated the part 2.. Do give it a read.😊
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Shivru are monsters but let it be
This plan made om to realize his feelings for gauri happy that in real gauri not gone
Awesome dear
Wait for upcoming next😳
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Originally posted by: sara1990

Great plan by ShivRu...


Thanks!! I agree..Om needs to realize his feelings for gauri
keep reading😊
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Originally posted by: chils

Shivru are monsters but let it be

This plan made om to realize his feelings for gauri happy that in real gauri not gone
Awesome dear
Wait for upcoming next😳


Thank you! but shiver being monsters is justified for omkara has been taking their little sister for granted..
Keep reading...Will update soon😊
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CHAPTER 3

recap: gauri left to barrielly...om getting tensed...shivru playing prank on om saying that gauri left OM because of him...om seeks bhavyas help...bhavya and shivru plan to say om that gauri's phone was last tracked on the suicide cliff...

bhavya on phone: ji...om bhaiyya...humne gauri bhabhi ka number track kiya hai...aur...voh...abb...bhaiiyyya...( yes om bro I have tracked gauri's number and...she..is...)

om: bhavya kya baat hai..??tum saaf saaf batao please...mujhe bohot tension hora hai...please batao..bhavya... ( Bhavya whats the matter tell me clearly please... I am really tensed)

bhavya: bhaiyya aap tension mat lena ...bhabhi ko kuch nahi hone wale hai ha...voh theek hongi... ( bro don't be tensed SIL would be fine...)

om: bhavya...tum please ye batao ki meri gauri ab kahan hai... ( bhavya please tell me where is my gauri)

bhavya :(thinking) meri gauri...haahaha...nice change...its working...(to om)voh..bhaiyya humne bhabhi ka number track kiya hai aur voh suicide cliff mein dikha raha hai...par ab toh signal bhi nahi mil raha unke phone ki... ( My gauri...Nice change...the plan is working... Bro actually the tracker showed the location at a suicide cliff but now there is signal to track further)

om: (shocked) WHAT??SUICIDE CLIFF???OH MY GOD!!!!bhavya i will call u later...bye...

(thinking)gauri...tum vaha kyun gai...its such a dangerous place...ab tume kya problem hai...tum suicide kyun karna chahti ho??? mujhe itni badi saza mat do yaar.please...mujse door mat jao...mein jee nahi paungi please waapas aajao gauri...( Y did you go to such a place gauri...Its so dangerous..Y do you want to attempt suicide?? Y do you want punish me by going away from me.. Please don't do this gauri..I wont be able to stay without you)

IN OM

bhavya: chalo...hamara yeh kaam toh hogaya...ab hume aage kya karna hai...( pheww! Finally I have completed this task now what do we have to do further)

rudy: hume?? Aage hume kya karna hai...jo karna hai voh o karenge...ab voh rote hue vaapas aayenge...aur ye kahenge ki gauri bhabhi suicide kar rahi hai...hahah...bahut maza aayega.. ( we?? What do we have to further?? O will do what he has to now...He will come home crying and will say gauri is attempting suicide..it will be so much fun)

shivay: nahi rudy...we will have to go there...OMKARA SINGH OBEROI HAI VOH.!!!! we can't predict what he is gonna do...so lets move...

bhavya: yes you'r right bhaiyya ...hume bhi vaha jana hoga...chalo chalte hai...( yes bro we should laso go there and see...let's move )

they stepped into the car and started their journey to the suicide cliff...

MEAN WHILE IN BARREILLY

gauri: ramu kaka...maa kaisi hai...??dactar saheb ne kya kaha ...??? ( how is mom uncle?? What did doctor say)

RK: ji beti ...voh...unki haalaat toh bigadti he jaa rahi hai ...( dear her health is deteriorating)

gauri : KAA???agar maa ko kuch hua toh???ham kaise jiyege...??sankar ji...humari maa ki tabiyath theek kardo...pleej...unke ilaava koi nhn hai humara iss duniya main.( what?? How will I live without my mom?? Please lord heal my mother...I have nobody in this world except my mom)

rk: tum fikar mat karo beta...theek hojayengi tumahri maa...bhagwaan pe bharosa rakho...vaise damaad ji kaha hai??voh tumhari sath nahi aaye ka?? ( don't worry dear...Your mother will be alright...have faith in lord...BDW where is SIL...did he not come with you??)

gauri: ji. Kaaka...voh...o...oomka..ra ji...haaa...haaa...unhe na ...ek bohot badi meeting thi aaj...isiliye voh nahi aa paaye...( Uncle actually he had an important meeting so he couldn't accompany me)

rk: ok beta...apna kyal rakhna...ab mein jara hu...( Ok dear take care...Now I will take your leave)

gauri: ji kaka... ( ok uncle)

(thinking) arre sankar ji ...hame maaf karna phir se jhoot bolna pada hame ...par hume nahi lagta ki omkara ji yaha aate humare saath...voh nafrat karte hai hamse...( Oh lord please forgive me for I had to lie again..but I had no option because I don't think he would have come here with me...He hates me)

omkara reached the cliff...

om: GAURI!!!!!KAHA HO TUM!!???HUM BAAT KAR SAKTE HAI...WE CAN SOLVE IT ...TUM VAAPAS AAAJJJAAAOOO...PLEASE GAURI???( Gauri where are you?? We can talk please we can solve it...Come back )

thinking...kaha gai ye ladki...ab kaise dhoondo usse...kahi usne suicide toh nahi kar liya??oh my god...( Where is this girl? Now how do I find her What if she already attempted suicide)

om runs to the cliff with his teary eyes ...

om: GAURI!!! TUM EISE KAISE KAR SAKTI Ho...MUJHE CHODKE EISE KAISE JAA SAKTE HAI...VAAPAS AAO...OR ELSE I TOO WILL JUMP AS U DID...IM NOT JOKING ( gauri how can you do this how can leave me like this..Please come back)

shivruvya were watching all this...

bhavya: thank god ki ham yaha aagaye...agar omkara bhaiya ne sach mein jump kar diya toh!!!! ( Thank god we came here...What if omkara bro jumped )

shiv: i think its time to reveal the truth...chalo bahut hogaya... ( It's time we should tell him)

agar humne use nahi roka toh voh sach mein kood jayega...(the trio laughed) ( He would jump if we don't stop him right now)

rudy: OO...MERE O...!! chalo ghar chalte hai...(he moves towards om)... ( O...come let's go home)

om: (with teary eyes.)...rudy...voh chali gai yaar...tumhari chulbul bhabhi chali gai...hum sab ko chod kar chali gai...ab mein kya karu...meri gauri ...voh toh chali gai...( rudy she went leaving us all..Your chulbul SIL left leaving us...what will I do now)

rudy: aawww...MERI GAURI...???kab se...??hahaha...shivru hifi... ( when did she become your gauri)

om: tum log has kyu rahe ho...gauri chali gai aur tum log hasss... ( y are you guys laughing...my gauri left and you two are fooling around)

shiv: dekho om...aisa kuch nahi hua hai...ye sab humara plan tha...we just wanted to make u realise the importance of gauri in your life...AND WE WONN!!YEEE... ( look om nothing of this sort has happened.. This was all our plan so that you realize her value)

om ( shocked, angry,happy): what.????...plan tha... paagal ho gaye kya tum log ...shitt i was about jump ...tum log eise ghatiya mazzaak kaise kar sakte ho...meri jaan chali gayi thi... ( are you guys crazy??? How can you plan such stupid things I was just about to jump...I almost lost my life thinking gauri jumped)

shivru: sorry yaaar...and they move ahead to hug omkara

om: par ab gauri kahan hai...??is she fine...??? ( but where is gauri now)

shivru explain everything to him...

om: thank god ki voh teek hai...itni choti baat thi aur tum log bhi na...shivay...rudy tum logon ko toh mein baad mein dekhta hoon..aur bhavya tum bhi inn logon ki madad kar rahi thi...( Thank god she is fine... You guys exacurated the matter so much...I will see you two later but bhavya you?? I didn't you to team up with these guys)

bhavya's phone rings...

bhavya on phone: hello ...ha...gauri bhabhi...aap kaise hai...aunty ji ...wo theek hain kya??? ( hi gauri SIL... how are you... how is your mother)

om: gauri???? bhavya...tum ek kaam karo speaker mein dalo phone ko.. ( gauri??? Bhavya please put the phone on speaker)

bhavya: (she noded yes and puts the phone on speaker mode) ha boliye bhabhi...vaha sab tteek hai na...aunty ji kaisi hai... ( yes bhabhi say..is everything fine there...is your mother fine)

gauri: (crying ) kuch theek nahi hai bhavya...maa ki haalat din badin aur din bhigadti jaa rahi hai...(she cries) ( nothing is fine bhavya...Mom's health is deteriorating day by day)

bhavya: bhabhi...aap royie mat sab theek ho jayega...( SIL don't cry everything is going to be alright)

gauri: bhavya...voh maa keh rahi hain ki voh humse aur omkara ji se kuch baat karna chahti hai...hum omkara ji ko phone kar rahe hain par voh phone attend nahi kar rahe...lagta hai voh hamse baat bhi karna nahi chahte...itna nafrat karte hai voh hamse... ( Bhavya actually mom wants to talk to me and omkaraji..I have been calling him but he is not receiving my calls..Looks like he doesn't even want to speak to me now. He hates me this much)

om:(to himself) meine toh phone gaadi mein chod diya tha...aur gauri aisa kuch nahi hai...do u think that ill do like that...??? ( I left my phone in the car and gauri there is nothing like that)

bhavya: bhabhi...om bhaiyya abhi hamare sath hai...mein unhe phone deti hu...aap baat kijiye... ( SIL om bro is with us right ow...I will give him the phone so speak to him)

gauri: ji...jaldi do bhavya... ( ok...fast bhavya).

om: hello gauri...im soo sorry...

mujhe maaf... ( I am sorry forgive me)

gauri: voh sab chodiye ...hamari maa ki haalat abhi theek nahi hai...aur voh chahta hai ki ... ( leave all that...Right now my mom's condition isne stable and she wants)

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om: haa...gauri main jaaanta hoon...ill come...( yes I know)

gauri: ji thanku ...

om: suno gauri mujhe tumse kuch baaat...(but by then gauri cuts the phone) lagta hai ki voh mujhse ab bhi naaraz hai...chalo shivaay ghar chalte hai...aur jaldi taiyyar hokar mujhe barreillly bhi jaana hai... ( Listen gaurii I want to speak to you but by then she hangs up...I think she is still miffed.. let's leave shivay..i need to get ready and leave for bariyelli)

ruvya: ha ...bhaiyya ham bhi chalte hai aapke sath... ( yes bro we will come with you too)

om: haa chalo...ab ghar chalte hai...( ok let's go home now)

IN BARREILLY...

Gauri's mother to ramu kaka: ji...mujhe nahi lagta ki damaad ji ke aane tak hum zinda rahenge...mera vakt aagya hai...ab mere paas jyada vakt nahi hai...aap hamari ek madad karege kya?? ...pleej...( I don't think I can make it till son in law come...I feel like this is it for me...Can you please help me??)

rk: haa...karenge...aap bata dejiye... ( yes I will do...tell me)

IN OM

om: chalo rudy ham nikal te hai...( come rudy let's leave)

rudy: ha chalo...par shivay bhaiyya keh rahe the ki voh bhi hamare sath aana chahte hai...( yes come; but shivay bro said he also wanted to join us)

om : so lets talk to him...cmmon ...

om to shiv: shivay..tum hamare sath barreilly aa rahe ho kya..?? ( are you coming with us)

shivaay: ha...i wanted to come...par...abhi abhi annika ka phone aaya tha...aur voh keh rahe thi ki...voh sahil ko lekar aaj he aanevali hai...toh i will go and pick them...tum ek kaam karo...tum rudy aur bhavya ek sath barreilly jao...mein annika ke sath aaunga...and om ...sab teek ho jayega...dont get so tensed...bhai... ( actually anika just called and informed me that she and sahil are reaching today soo I would have to go and pick them up.. But you guys start while I follow with anika)

om: theek hai shivaay...toh hum chalte hai.. we are getting late... ( ok then we will leave)

And they left...

after some time...

dadi: aarreey... meri annika... aagai...saahil tum kaise ho beta? ( My child anika!! Finally you came and how are you sahill)

sahil: ab mein theek hu dadi...par baki sab log kaha hai...??gauri bhabhi aur meri jatadhari jeeju kaha gai????? ( I am fine grandma but where are other people?? Where is gauri sister and her long haired husband)

annika: ha dadi...voh log ghar mein nahi hai kya...??rudy aur bhavya bhi nahi dikh rahe?? ( yes grandma; are they not home; I cant even see rudra and bhavya anywhere)

shiv: annika tum jaldi fresh ho jao...hame bhi kahi jana hai ... ( anika you also freshen up...we need to go somewhere)

I'll tell u every thing...

he explains every thing to annika...

annika: bechari gauri...kya kya ho raha hai uske sath...pta nahi kyun uski sath he hamesha eise hota hai...ek toh pehle he om gauri ko apni beevi nhn maanta hai...aur upar se uski maa ki haalat...agar use kuch hua toh ...bechari gauri... ( poor gauri...Don't know y all this is happening only with her... On one side om doesn't consider gauri as his wife an now her mother has fallen sick...what will gauri go through if something happens)

shiv: nahi annika...om ab badal gaya hai ( om has changed now)...and things are going to get solved soon... aaahhh...annika we don't have much time...we have leave now...

annika : haa shivaay mein abhi aati hoon...bas das minute dejiye mujhe...( yes shivay just give me 10 mins)

they too start their journey to barreilly...




finally done with this chapter...Please drop in your comments if you like it...Please leave suggestions if you don't like anything about either the plot or the way we are writing it..


thanks for reading

love

Lubna and Aayushi!

Edited by aayushi1 - 7 years ago

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