AvNeil SS: A Series of Fortunately Unfortunate Incidents!Surprise Pg20 - Page 17

Originally posted by: docritu99

For part 6 and 7.

Omg The journey ended! Already.!
Abhi abhi toh shuru hui thi.! It was short & sweet!
Anyway it was so considerate of Neil to not indulge Avni much into the perks of his stardom.!
Good that u mentioned. He would always consider Avni's welfare first!


Also awww, my babies. They are missing each other so much.! How cute.!!
I could totally imagine Neela's reaction to find he rdaughter in wrongdoings.! Poor women must be horrified.! Yep! She fainted coz of that!😆
Futile Warning 😆 , indeed.! 😆😆 Parental advice is like a disclaimer that no one pays heed too!!😆

What the story ended.! This journey ended!
It felt incomplete.! Because we are not privy to what happens next in their lives!
But I am glad that AvNeil finally found each other.!

Originally posted by: docritu99

Omg.!!!
The last part had my Heart.! Awww...😳
U completely stole tje show with it. Thanks!😃
I wonder how it wasnt planned. It really wasn't!

Avni will always be Avni.! I loved the way she cursed DD.! Haha.! She is a True Person at Heart.! Yes she is!

Loved everything about this chap.! Thank you!
Awww Neil got a kick too from our lady don. 😆 Of course! He deserved it!😆
Bechara Neil.!

Thoroughly enjoyed the story.!
Do write more for us.!
Will be waiting.!