Sukor - My Life belongs to U (part 9) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Awesome update.

Soon Vicky and Suraj will clash.
Loved Sukor scene when Chakor was looking for Suraj after leaving the party. Chakor can never forget his touch and Suraj would never leave her.
So finally Sukor realized their feelings, awesome scene.

Eagerly waiting for next.



Thank u n ya u r right after a few chapter thrte will be a war
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Liked this update, especially that part after Chakor vanished from party, in one second I thought maybe Vicki will notice that and don't let her go, but everything was very beautiful.
Enjoyed reading it. Waiting for the next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Krupy

Liked this update, especially that part after Chakor vanished from party, in one second I thought maybe Vicki will notice that and don't let her go, but everything was very beautiful.

Enjoyed reading it. Waiting for the next.



Thank u haan but he was busy with his guest we don't need kabab main haadi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Hi

Recap; Sukor went to the party Suraj was "kicked out" after Singhania slapped him. But as promised he wanted for her return. Chakor felt bad as her colleagues have insulted him. Chakor asked him to stay...

Suraj was awake waiting for her to open her eyes n see his face...

Chakor woke up in the arms of her loved one...

Chakor smiles at him with her red cheeks loved filled eyes. She had messy hairs...

Suraj was happy he saw her reddish cheek the last night was his first night with a woman...

Seeing at her behaviour it was her first night too...

Chakor was feeling uncomfortable Suraj felt her strange behaviour he turns n gave her time to adjust herself.

Chakor tips on his shoulder he turns n saw her again in her eyes.

Chakor comes closer to him. She lift his hand n turned she pulls his arms his chest collidated with her back. Suraj likes her much his chin was on her shoulder the beard was tickling but Chakor liked it...

Suraj was kissing her neck...

Chakor was loving it... Suraj do u like me?

Suraj was confused. Chakor... he kiss her neck. I Love U...

Chakor; ok tell me abt u...
Suraj; abt me what do u want to know?.
Chakor; u belong to me n I belong to u. Ur story is ur past to build a future I need to know...

Suraj turns he was lying on his back. Chakor pout but she turns n lies over his chest.

Chakor; tell me...

Suraj was caressing her back. His rough hands were tickling her back.

Chakor; Suraj... plz...

Suraj; Hmm My story is very simple. I was 6 years old my parents died I was left alone living a life on the streets of Mumbai. I don't remember how my parents looked but I still remember the love I received from them. One day I was very hungry but no one was ready to feed me I stole food n got caught. I was beaten badly but I survived.

Chakor felt sad for him.

Suraj; there was a man he is known as Singhania the father of Vicky Singhania...

Chakor was kissing his chest. Suraj he is nice not like his father.

Suraj; u can't trust always what u see sometimes it is just a facade.

Chakor thought abt his words... She kisses his chest again. Further plz.

Suraj; hmm Singhania took me to his place. He feeds me n paid me for a job. I should steal for him. I did... soon I grow I'm not educated but I dreamt to learn but couldn't. I grow n I met a teenager...

Chakor; one of ur friends???

Suraj removes the strands of her hair n plug them behind her ear. Chakor smiles.

Suraj; Vivaan... He was 17 years old when I met him. He is very intelligent his parents did everything to give him a gud education. But he never was accepted for a college seat... His parents died they wanted to use the insurence money for him... but the insurance company didn't pay for him as it was a suicide case... U know he was near a bridge when I come... I saw him many times how he was reading having dreams... he lived here in the colony... No one come to his help I took him in...

Chakor; sometimes the life plays bad with us.

Suraj; hmn I met Ajay after Vivaan...
He was having a tough life too u know Aryan is his little bro. Ajay is older than me but he respect my words. I was having a fight with some goons if another gang. Aryan was one of them his brother doesn't knew abt it. Ajay was a common man doing a small job but Aryan always wanted more. Aryan tried to hit someone of our man's but unfortunately he got hit n that too very badly. His leader left him there to die. I couldn't... He lift hik brought him to the hospital n pay for his treat.

Ajay founds out what had happened to Aryan. He was looking for me as he thought I have done it. I didn't care as I was busy in fighting with Aryans leader. When Ajay found me he was shocked seeing me beating up the man he tried to stop me then I got to know who he is I told him the whole story. Ajay took a gun but I stopped him...

Suraj; don't u want to say something?

Chakor; Aryan n Ajay r brothers? Suraj; haan.. by name not blood Aryan is an orphan like me. But Ajay took him in n treat him more like a brother. Ajay was trying to be a gud man but time played bad with him too.

Chakor; haan bad comparing don't br angry with me.

Suraj; I'm not... Well Adi come to us.

Chakor; how??? She turns her face to him. Both shared an eyelock.

Suraj; Adi needed money for his sisters wedding being the local goon hr thought he can get some loan from me but I didn't that money I never had money...

Chakor; but u take money for protection right?

Suraj; did u ever saw me taking money??? He asked her directly looking in her eyes.

Chakor thought her hand was on his chest. No Suraj I never saw u taking money from anyone. But how is this possible?

Suraj; I consider them as my family. How can I harm my family. Singhania knows that this area is under my protection I used to live her with my parents. Those people know me recognise me... they gave me the house... the house belonged to my parents once...

Chakor; Suraj wait I don't understand under ur protection but Singhania...

Suraj; I worked for him but I was old enough to take my own decisions. He didn't liked my new friends. I told him I only will work with them. I paid myself out.

Chakor; but now u r working again with him. Y?

Suraj; for Adi... Adi was shocked he was helpless. He desperately needed the money. I took a loan from Singhania n now I'm again working for him... He knows abt Adi's sister I can risk anyones life just to protect my...

Chakor was admiring the man she fall in love with. Do u know what Ur life doesn't only belong to u! Ur life belongs to me... n a little bit to the others. But I really don't want to share u.

Suraj lifts her a bit n starts to kiss her...

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Hope it is not that confusing.
Hope u liked it

Please Do Not Copy my Story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Awww!
SuKor know each other 😛

Suraj is a goon & uneducated 😭 That breaks my heart 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Lovely flashback👏
Looks like Suraj is there to protect Chakor.

A goon with a good heart.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: malarmia

Awww!

SuKor know each other😛

Suraj is a goon & uneducated😭That breaks my heart😭



yeah a goon with a big hear. He has to work for Singhania to keep thr others save.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: malarmia

Lovely flashback👏

Looks like Suraj is there to protect Chakor.

A goon with a good heart.



yes absolutely right
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Aww this Suraj! He is such a sweetheart and goon in the same time. Loved flashbacks.
Great update. Keep it up.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Krupy

Aww this Suraj! He is such a sweetheart and goon in the same time. Loved flashbacks.

Great update. Keep it up.



Thank you haan u described it right!!!!

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