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Posted: 7 years ago
Please try and update this story
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Awesome story ... Just now completed reading all the parts ... Very well written ... Soo maan is the person who doesnt believe in love ... He believe on money and thinks that money is everything ... Maans dadi played cupid and made maaneet married but maan insulted geet 😭 But slowly maan is changing .. In his ego he is not accepting that he has already fallen for geet ..waiting for next part 😃 Update soon
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Originally posted by: Roopa_1

Awesome story ... Just now completed reading all the parts ... Very well written ... Soo maan is the person who doesnt believe in love ... He believe on money and thinks that money is everything ... Maans dadi played cupid and made maaneet married but maan insulted geet 😭 But slowly maan is changing .. In his ego he is not accepting that he has already fallen for geet ..waiting for next part 😃 Update soon

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wishing you will update this as well! thanks
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Part 13 -


Switzerland... for Geet not less than dream land ..She always desired to visit such places although never thought it will ever happen..but to her luck or bad luck it did happen , bad luck because she didn't want to come with that egoistic monster ..who literary forced her to come with him ...

" I'm not going " a stubborn Geet tried last time to convince Maan who in other zone arranging file for his trip ...

" Maan please try to understand.. I can't ditch Yash's sister marriage.. he will feel bad " again no answer from Maan ..

what he will say when he is unaware why he doing this ? why he forcing her to come ? even he doesn't know ... yes her silence was bothering him then that mystery man whom she refused to talk all only making him more restless ..' she is planning to go away ' only this thing now running in his mind ..for him she only wanting more chance to meet that man which he can't allow ..' What if that man wants to harm Geet ? ' he closed his file. in anger then looked at her impatient face but still don't know how to answer her question ..

Seeing no reaction from him , frustrated Geet throw his file on bed

" Stop it ..kya hai yeh ? kya kar rahe ho ap..kyun kar rahe ho..Honeymoon ! Ky soch rahe tthe ap ? how could you say something like this ? how could to let Dadima's expectation grow for our relation ? ". ' and mine too ' she couldn't add but silently plead before him not to do that to her . She is already broken she can't break more ..it was hard enough to accept his rejection now this will again build her expectation which have no future or happy ending then why he doing this ...

" Is it that bad to be alone with me ? " to her all question he asked this , making her more confused ..

He composed quickly after realising what he said .. " You don't want to go right fine I won't force you but with one condition.. ".

" What condition ?" she glared his business attitude face but still desperate to stop this trip ...

" Tell me who was that man ? and why you went to meet him ? "

" Ya Allah why are you still stuck to that ? ..aur waise bhi aapko kyun farak partha hai ...woh kaun tha ? kya rishta hai meri uske sath ?Maan stop this childish beh.."

" Rishta ? great yesterday he was your friend abb rishta bhi ban gaya ... ".

He glared her furiously , want to hunt that man down at any cost

" baatao kaun tha woh ? kya rishta hair tumhara uske sath ? do you even know how badly Dadima will be hurt if she come to know this ? what if he comes here ? do you even realise what will be the consequence ? " he was coming too closer to her she has no choice but to go behind ...

" you are talking nonsense .. you have no right to talk to me like this and I have no mood to give you explanation " bringing Dadima in every topic is making her more angry , she was about to go but Maan's angry voice stop her

" May be you forget I'm your husband which give me right ... ".

She shocked for a moment because this is the first time he acknowledge their relation or claimed him to be her better half ...

" only a unwanted wif...".

" cut the crap " he stop her in mid " forced , wanted , unwanted whatever it is ..the truth is you are my wife and I have right on you till we stay in this relation ..your mere thought won't change it ..remember that "

he was ready to go washroom for cool down his anger but stop at Geet question him same ..." husband - right all just for you ..is it same for me ? Do I have right ? ..you doubting me then what about you? ... you can openly roaming with your girlfriend.. inviting her at home is all allowed ..because you are a man ..."

" She is not my girlfriend " with this statement he went without giving her chance to say something

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' She is not my girlfriend ' his words still bothering her ..she is happy too but scared more ..what if Maan broke up with Zeenat because of her ..she would never be with a man whose heart will be with his lover and body with his wife ..its against her principal.. her mother brought her better not to face the same fate ..

may be she is foolish , silly but she still loves him , deep down wants his togetherness . She knows can happily move on with him if he really got over his past but she can't compromise with damaged soul which can never love her a bit ...

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Maan looked at Geet who seem lost but he is tensed thinking if she thinking someone else ? ' damn what's wrong with you ? why do you care ? ..of course I care she is my wife.. my reputation is attach with her . What if media bring out something that will harm my business not to forget Dadima too .she still not well '

He run a hand over his face in frustration.. now his excuse sounding lame to himself but he not know what to say or do ..he just want her to tell him everything .. He wants a normal relation with her as friend and it is also a reason to bring her here ..but he can clearly see its not working at all ..for two days they are here but she didn't bother to talk openly ..he fought he will take her out ..make her comfortable but it also not happening.. as even weather become his enemy ..because if heavily snowfall they can't even go to street forget about outing ..he doesn't realise when he dose off on sofa thinking about her ..

it was pitch dark when he open his eyes ..he rubbed his shoulder which paining little as he slept wrongly for long .. He went to bed to sleep properly but stop noticing its empty ...

" Geet ..Geet " he called her for sometime but no answer ..he knocked washroom door then walked in but its empty too ..he checked his watch its showing 11.40 ..quiet late for her ..as he knows she always sleep early to wake up for Fajir (morning prayer) ..' where did she go at this hour ?' he thought worriedly even her cell phone switched off..after ten minutes when she still not back his face become white like ghost as it finally strike him ..his wife left him
Edited by Keepdreaming - 7 years ago
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mujhe pmlist yaad nehi ..
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Edited by Keepdreaming - 7 years ago
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Oh I am happiest to know geet left maan...
Good he deserves this...
Reputation!?Media!?Aur kya bahane hai...
Iss khi akal iss khi gf khi dress jaisa disgusting and empty hai...
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update
is really geet left maan?


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Awesome update dear, omg geet left maan, hope she is fine

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