AvNeil SS: Broken Promises ~ Part 7 | Page 21 (21-01-2018)

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#121

You are so good writer . i love your writing style . Avni at least accepts she is hurt unlike in show and we could see our very own Neil Khanna here. How is gonna break the news that she is paralyzed . This is gonna be more heartbreaking and painful than this update .

Avni is such a pure soul . How worst she must have felt when she learnt Juhi lied . Wish Avni has temporary paralysis .

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Okay! Reading three chapters in a go is fun. I am absolutely loving the way this story has been handled. Such an apt description to each and everything. No dragging of plots, no unnecessary inclusions, yet such a descriptive writeup. Amazing job done there.

You mater emotions. That's for sure. His pain was evident in his actions, his vulnerability. The scene where he finally accuses Juhi of having endangered his Avni's life was the highlight. No excuses accepted, she had put his Avni in danger. For no matter what reason but she did.

Him being guilty was right. I would have disagreed if he had only blamed Juhi. Because nonetheless he was somewhere responsible, intentionally or not, doesn't matter.

Avni and Neil's conversation was heartwarming. No doubt I fall for this couple so bad. And for your writing too.

Now I am anxious to know how this medical condition would be delt with. How would this impact their relationship? Will ut or will it not?

Thanks for writing and sharing :)