AvNeil SS: Broken Promises ~ Part 7 | Page 21 (21-01-2018)

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: taarey25
amazing

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: -shenz-
This gotta be one of the most engaging stories I have read since a long time now. Predictions fail, the moment I expected Avni to be on the floor, she was not.

But what I love the most about this story is the way the emotions are portrayed. Apt. The way Neil's emotions play out in this part is absolutely stunning. As though I am watching scene unfold right in front of my eyes. His guilt, his fear and most of all, the panic was delt marvelously.

Can I just say, I loved DD here. He hardly had any presence in the chapter but the way he screamed 'Bhabhi' was all that I needed from him. His concern was well played there.

I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter now. Looking forward for Neil's outburst on Juhi, though he is consumed by fear as of now, but I still can't wait to read that part.

Thanks :)

That's a huge compliment. Thank you so much for your kind words! :)

DD is a sweetheart. <3

The next part is updated. And you can see Neil's outburst on Juhi there. Hope I didn't disappoint you. Do let me know your views. 😊

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Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#94

Well done neil.superb update.but its too short.😒pls continue soon.

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: avneil2
Well done neil.superb update.but its too short.😒pls continue soon.

I know. And I'm sorry about that. But I may update the next part today itself. 😉 So don't worry! Just wait for some more time. I wanted to break it into two parts. This part was dedicated to Neil screwing Juhi. 😛

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Posted: 7 years ago

#96

Wonderful as always! But I thought it was too short...itni waiting ke baad I wanted to just keep reading! Please jaldi update Karo! Cant wait for the next part! I hope Neil yells at juhi in the show too once the whole paternity reveal happens!

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Anu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#97

Wow...his reaction is pretty strong but wondering how avni will be when she awakens ; esp with tht news coming her way... terrific job

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srinithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#98

Dil khush kiya !_This Juhi woman deserves his backlash . I don't have any hope from show . Waiting what will be Avni's reaction after she gains conscience .

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rinku95

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Posted: 7 years ago

#99

Superb
Finally Neil sent juhi away
Continue soon

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: neeraja91
Wonderful as always! But I thought it was too short...itni waiting ke baad I wanted to just keep reading! Please jaldi update Karo! Cant wait for the next part! I hope Neil yells at juhi in the show too once the whole paternity reveal happens!

Thanks dear! :)

This is just first half of today's update. Another update is coming your way in some time. 😉