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Posted: 7 years ago
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I am not sure where I left off

I will begin with this chapter since its been so long

All for time pass as I like to say


Discordant Stories

"Will she live here now?" Nihar mumbled almost inaudibly

Neel nodded confidently

And then looked away just when he realized Nihar didnt want Suvechha living with them.
Amma was in the living room with Aadhya working on a puzzle

Suvi was putting away Aadhya's clothes in the room Neel said was going to be hers

The house was so quiet you could almost hear a pin drop

Suvi cleared her throat to make a sound

Umm.. mmm still no other sound

She missed her IP Extension apartment and Tai and her loud blare of television

Amma peeked

"Kya khayengi raat ko beta?" she asked with a gentle smile

"Kuch bhi kha lene ka" she smiled warmly

"To phir theek hai hum karhi aur baingan ki subzi bana lenge" Amma smiled back

Aadhya too stood in the doorway looking intently

"Aai mee ithe jhopato?" she asked worrying

Suvi blushed not knowing how to break the news

"Arey yeh kamra to hamara aur aapka hai" "Hum aapko khoob saari pariyon ki kahaniyan sunayenge"Amma hugged her and picked her up as Aadhya burst out crying

Neel rushed down the hallway

"Kya hua Amma?"

"Arey kuch bhi nahi, aap itna kyon ghabra gaye?" she was smiling

Aadhya slid down Amma's hold and ran to her mother's


"Aaai malaa tujhya barobar jhopavachyaaahe"

Suvi patted and caressed her back lovingly

"Aapalyasathi aneka katha"

"Aaai nakko... nakko" Aadhya sobbed

"Chaliye inko kya pasand hai hum banayen" Amma was still hopeful

"Sheera" Suvi said softly

"Woh to bohoth aasan hai" Amma smiled

Neel watched the interaction the grim look of concern was not lost on Amma

"Aap Nihar ko dekhen, hum inko dekh lenge" Amma whispered

Nihar walked by and stood staring

"Why is she crying?" he asked

"Umm.. isko tumse story sun ne ka hey" Suvi smiled slowly

"I dont know Marathi stories" Nihar said primly

"She can understand English" Neel supplied

Nihar was not happy to hear that

He turned and walked away

He sensed his father trying to force the young girl on him

"Jao beta" Amma whispered

"Nihaar" Neel sprinted

"I know what you are doing" Nihar accused with big fat tears in his eyes

"Nihaar!!!" Neel looked distraught, hugging him

"She was only my school friend... now she is not" he refused to say she was his step sister now

"She cant still be your friend" Neel offered hugging him tight

"NO SHE CANT... NOT WHEN YOU MARRY HER MOTHER" he was frustrated and speechless all at the same time

he pulled away from his Dad's grip hitting a window, and stopping

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nisha, thank you so much.
I love these characters.

I feel for each of them.

Eagerly waiting for them to have a Happy Life together.

I can feel for each of them. Be it Suvi, Neel, Nihar, Amma, Aadhya, Misra's.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Even if the melody is not heard and the notes are discordant just now, it feels like a homecoming to hear Suvi's Marathi, the children's concerns and amma's soothing words like a balm.
Thanks Nisha !!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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An ID update on a quick peep. 😊 Great. A bit tight couple of days . Will read up soon. Just keeping writing . The choice of picking up a story should be only yours. Yeah , we people will keep pestering here and there, now and then and try cornering you... ha ha...as you hv given us that choice to pester you . So I will .

Thank you so much for getting bk to that writing space of yours .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks you guys
This is a welcome break from the craziness of the real world

Hope all is well with everyone
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Thanks you guys

This is a welcome break from the craziness of the real world

Hope all is well with everyone


Glad to have u back and writing 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amma's grim look of concern... if I look at at this way, is amma's presence going to make it a little difficult for Suvi to break thru nihar's defiance, I feel , may be it will because Nihar will try to stick to one source of comfort contact which is his grandmom. It's also tough for amma to go to Mumbai , another way we look at it , as nihar could clam up and get into a shell here. She has to delicately balance the handling of both her grandchildren . It's all her wisdom that's got to make the play here .

Marathi here felt so good as was sosy's Tamil 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Discordant stories for the Title. How very apt. 😊
You are back with a bang Nisha. Congrats on the new thread 4 for ID. Keep stitching new threads. We love the needle craft in offer for us with the varieties of yarns you weave , the versatility on show here as regards to 0ur Discordant stories
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Thanks you guys

This is a welcome break from the craziness of the real world

Hope all is well with everyone



Welcome back Nisha! Your MIA sprint had all of us concerned. It's so good to see you back. Happy 2018 to u and all my frens on this forum! Whichever story u pick to continue wld b treat for us anyways. Thank u again for this update.

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