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Neil,Avni the entire family and all the police officers were standing near Vidyut's body.The commissioner came in the forensics to confirm.The Khanna family was looking disturbed why not would they be.The last few months had been disastrous.At the distance was the girl who had caused all this to happen.

Commisioner-Neil Vidyut is dead and all the allegations against you have been removed.You have been reinstated to the job.

Neil-Sir I would need time to get back to job.My family is badly scared,this time I would have to keep their priority.But sir what about Juhi and her daughter Mishti.

Commisisoner-Look Neil I think it would be at best if we let Mishti go with Miss Juhi otherwise some trouble can happen you know.But it would be better if we warn Juhi to never to set a feet in Mumbai again otherwise we would be liable to arrest her.

Neil-Ok sir.Jai Hind.

The Khannas felt relieved seeing Neil getting his job back and Avni beeing their bahu and not Juhi.Bebe was really glad seeing her tillu and bahu together.She felt sorry for her decision.She felt sorry to Avni.But Avni being mature had forgiven her even before she could ask.

Neil (relieved)-All is clear guys.

Bebe-Chalo accha hua.Par Neil hum isss Juhi ka kya karege.

Neil-Bebe she and Mishti have to go.And Juhi is to never foot in Mumbai again,but Mishti can come to meet us for sure.

Avni (relieved)-So all good.It's good actually because...

Avni was mid sentence when she collapsed right into Neil's arms,everyone was panicking.Neil took Avni up while Shweta,Bebe and Neela followed and Prakash was waiting for Doctor.

Neil (Panicking)-Avni,Avni,utho na kya hua tumhe,Avni get up.

Neela (sprinkling water)-Avni baccha utho

Sweta (worriedly)Avni ko kya ho gaya hai uth kyu nahi rahi hai.Ye sab us us Juhi ka kiya dhara hai...

Bebe (worriedly)Madam Madona use kos kar kya fayda.Neil tu shant ho ja Doctor aate hoge abhi.

Nei (Panicky)-Kaise shant rahu Bebe aisa kabhi nahi hua hai.

Prakash-Neil Doctor aa gaye hai.

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Doctor-Mr Khanna it is clear case of too much stress.Jab tak situation mei unki zarrorat thi she was fine but when she heard that everything was fine her body gave up and the stress started to take over and as a result she fainted.

Neil-But Doctor uske saath pehle aisa kabhi nahi hua.She had rough childhood and adulthood.She lived much stressful life than this.

Neela-Yes doctor.Neil bilkul sahi keh raha ha.

Bebe-Doctor sahab Avni thik to ho jayegi na.

Doctor-Ji bilkul ho jayege.Mr Neil jo app keh rahe unke baare aur unke stress levels ke bare mei woh bilkul sahi hai.She had stress for so many years that she has finally given up,her body her tolerance of strees has given up.She is on bedrest for 7 days.Does she has any other issues ??

Neela-Migrane hai doctor.

Doctor-Ok if she has migrane headache toh unhe unki regular painkiller dei dijye ga.

Neil-Ok doctor.Come I will leave you.

Sweta,Bebe and Prakash-No !!!

Sweta-Neil you stays with Avni we all will go.And if you needs anything call us.

Neela-I will leave Neil.Just make her call me when she wakes up.

Neil-Don't worry Neela maa I am with her.

Neil didnt understand how he could not understand this condition of his wife.He knew allthis was taking toll on her but he didnt think this much.Just when he was thinking about Avni somebody knocked on the door and it was not the person whose face he wanted to see.

Juhi (Slowly)-Ne..Neil

Neil (Angrily)-What do you want.You have almost spoiled everything...

Juhi-Neil me and Mishti are leaving.I am sorry that because of me Avni is in this state.

Neil (Angrily)Don't you dare take My Wife's name from your dirty mouth.I so regret ever falling in love with you or whatever it was.GET THE HELL OUT OF MY HOUSE AND MY LIFE.

It turned out that Juhi had been two-timing while they were in college.She had relations with Vidhyut as a result of which was Mishti but Juhi did not want to use a man's name who all did was illegal work so she had tried to propose me and get married to me but the lucke part was that I had to go to London.While Neil was thinking about all these things he felt a grip on his hand.

Neil (Smiling and kissing her hand)-Hey wifey !!

Avni (smiling)-Hi Neil.What happened to me !!

Neil (explaining)-Well you fainted from too much of stress.You are on one week bedrest.

Avni(confused)-But I never feel stressful Neil.Not even during the time I was fighting the battle of my life,not even during my revenge never have i felt stressful.

Neil (assuring her)-It's like the doctor said Avni,you didnt feel streess but it took your whole body down.But no more compromises with your health.You are my responsibility.Enough drama in our life.My complete attention is on you now.

Bebe (laughing)-Oye if you do everything than what will we do.

Sweta-Yes, what will we does.

Bebe-Oye madam madona tu kabhi to english mat bol.Ya kabhi to kaam kar.

Pre-cap-Bebe-Neil I think tum dono kuch time ke liye tum dono ke aprtment mei shift ho jayo.

Neil-Par kyu !!!

Bebe-Kyuki tum dono ko jo shanti milni chaiye woh nahi milti hai yaha.


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Neil was sitting besides Avni while she was sleeping.Neil had been thinking a lot throughout the day maybe Avni needed a break and a vacation.He decided to see through the places and book a place with hotels and everything connecting with his vacation dates.But before he could think more Sweta put hand on his shoulder.

Sweta-I knows you are worrieds about her...

Neil (exhausted)-What do I do Mom ?? Bringing Juhi into our life was my idea and there was plus one with her and that was Vidhyut along with Mishti.It brought too much on her.I never thought that I would see Avni Ayesha down with stress.

Sweta (calming him down)-Tillu woh jaldi thik ho jayege.Chinta mat kar.Jitna dhyan woh tera rakhti hai utna ab tujhe bhi rakhna hai okies.Now goes Bebe is calling yous.Mei yaha Avni ke saath bethi hu.

Neil goes down to meet Bebe who has been in great thoughts ever since Avni fainted.Maybe there was never been enough time for Avni and Neil.It is always drama and drama for them.First their marraige,then Avni's identity then Neil in hospital and than ever since Juhi and her troubles.Bebe had been thinking about this for too long and today she had talked about this with Sweta as well as Prakash and they both agreed with her.For the first time she felt that Sweta was trying to be good mother to Avni as well.She had been prod of Sweta these few weeks.

Neil (trying to distract her)-Bebe !! Where are you lost ?

Bebe-Kuch nahi puttar Avni aur tere baare me soch rahi thi.Kasi hai woh ?

Neil-She is ok.She is sleeping.Bebe aapko kuch baat karni thi.

Bebe-Ha Neil maine,Sweta aur Prakash ne decide kiya hai ki you and Avni will shift to your old house again.

Neil (angrily)-Bebe no !! and plus Avni will never agree.

Bebe-Neil tu shant ho ja.beta.Hum logo ka ye kehne ka matlab nahi hai.You both need each other right now and that too alone without any intrusion or drama.Avni has enough drama for lifetime and you too.Juhi ke jaane ke baad tu kitna akela ho gaya tha.Uske jaane ke baad kitne saal tum uski yaado mei rahe aur aab Juhi ki wajah se Avni ko itna sehna pada.You both need some time without stress.Baad ka baadme dekh lege.

Neil-Ok fine I got your point I will talk to Avni.

Bebe-Ok

Neil and Avni were sitting in their bedroom at the night.Neil had already talked to Avni about their going back to the house and she was ready.They were sorting their things out when Sweta bought her dinner upstairs.

Sweta (putting the tray down)-Chalo Avni.Tumhara dinner aa gaya he !!

Avni-No Mom please mujhe bilkul bhook nahi hai.Especially aise soup ke liye.I hate it.

Neil (taking the bowl in his hand)-Well you should have thought about not eating the soup thing before taking all this kind of stress !!

Sweta-Oye tu meri bahu ko daat raha hai.Tu jaa is kamre se bahar ja Tillu.Mei khillay gi use.

Neil-Mom mai use daat nahi raha hu.Ok you know what ? Mai use khila du ga.

Avni (angrily)-Mai kha lugi !!

Neil (taking the bowl and feeding her)-Avni please sorry !!

Neil was feeding Avni while he completely understood the point of bebe.They needed time for each other with each other needed to know each other.Neil looked at Avni and smiled at her which was returned by her.

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Neil-I will make coffee for us.


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