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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: aishu007
Nice update maithu..
Who was the lady at last..??
Update soon..
Thanks for the pm..

Thank you so much dear!

In few hours the lady will be revealed!

See you soon dear!

Keep on reading!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Part 11 (Previous part : Part 10 )

"Hello Lady Deepali!" Sultan went near the lady "Welcome! Welcome!" he said as he took her hand to kiss to greet her which she it away immediately "It's really a pleasant surprise to see you here!" he continued.

"I think you are fully out of your mind with your drinks!" she said pointing at the glass on his hand and went inside to greet others.

"Nice to meet you Highness!" she said before turning towards the Prince, showing her teeth "Hello Rishab!"

"Hello Deepali!" he goes near her to do a courtesy hug "Welcome!" he said and distanced himself while Miss. Rosella and Pakhi saw them with no interest.

"I have brought a small gift for you Highness!" she said as she opened the box she was holding.

"Oh! It wasn't needed!" Queen said.

"It is!" she said.

Pulling out a heart shaped shinning Christmas tree ornament which might be a silver plated, she turned towards Rishab.

"Oh! It's so beautiful!" Queen appreciated.

"Rishab!"

"Yes!" Rishab who was not all seeing what she was doing, gave his due attention to her.

"Can you please put this in its place?"

"Sure!" and he took it in one gest from her hand.

"Please take care of it!" she said passing a smile to him as his lips were pressed in a straight line.

Right at the moment he put, Sultan came near the group.

"Sorry to disturb!" facing Deepali "I have few things to discuss with her!" and he pulls her to a side by her hand against her will as she smiles in a way showing her hatred to his act.

"Why did you invite her?" Prince asked his mother as he saw the lady to be out of range.

"I thought you would be happy!" Queen replied.

Not knowing what to say to his mother he goes near his sister.

"This is my last year gift!" she says showing a beautiful doll to her tutor.

"It's really so beautiful!" touching it "Can't believe he did this!"

"Father is so talented!" Princess says with a sad tone as Rishab comes and sits by his sister.

"I know how it feels to loose someone close!" Miss. Rosella said smiling at her.

"Here is another gift I received one!" she said showing a mask "By the way, how do you celebrate your Christmas?" facing her tutor after passing a smile at her brother.

"Hmm! Me and my father decorate our Christmas tree, then bake cakes and cookies. Sign songs and finally watch a film that my mother liked." she said.

"How is life?" Sultan asked Deepali as they were standing not so far from everyone.

Not interested to reply him, she turns her head and spots Madhu "Who is she?" she questions as she sees the trio smile and laugh.

"Princess Pakhi's new tutor!" he said not interested of changing the subject.

"She has a weird taste for shoes I see!" Deepali commented seeing Madhu's sneakers.

***

And the next day started with Madhu taking notes.

"Lord Sultan is not at all seeing the royal family in a friendly way!" typing on her pc "Lady Deepali seems to wanting somethings but don't know what! May be Queen have called her to make the Prince accept his position. It seems like Prince is more than friendly with her!"

Removing her hand "Where is Prince in all this? What about him? His wish?"

"Hello!" Pakhi enters the room making Madhu to shut her laptop immediately.

"Ready for lessons?" she asks her student.

"I'm in a mood to do cookies!" is the reply she gets along with a happy smile.

Facing the little girl "I can't do that now! We have to study!"

"I want cookies!"

"If you want, I can ask to do someone to for?"

"We are doing it!"

"What if someone says something to Queen?"

Entering fully the room as the door closed automatically behind her "What if I say the real name to my Mother, Miss. Madhubala Malik?" with a smirk.

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Thank you buddies for reading!

Hope you all liked this part!

Let me know your thoughts!

Next part on Monday!

See you then!

I.E. A small discussion about the story if you want to participate, it's in the next post ( Let's Discuss )

Next part : Part 12

- Maithili

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Hello lovely people!

As you all know that week-end is coming!

So thought to have a small interactions with you all!

Not a big one but yes, you can post your thoughts here!

What is it?

Well! As you have read all the parts of HK until now, you might have few thoughts and ideas of how the story is going to go.

As I know how it will be, wanted to see what all you think.

What to do?

Nothing!

I mean you have to reply with just few words to the questions!

What will be the plus point of this?

Not a big thing!

Just small interactions during week-end!

Negative point?

Consummation of our time!

What are the questions?

Here it goes:

1) What is the next thing Miss. Rosella will break according to you? (Only one thing you can say!)

2) Will real Miss. Rosella enter the screen or not?

3) Why is Miss. Deepali is here? (One word is enough to say I think)

4) Do you think Pakhi will tell about Madhu to others? (Just yes or No if you don't want to detail!)

5) What can be the reason behind Rishab's hesitation to take the throne? (Any guess?)

That's all buddies!

It's your choice to select your way to answer!

See you all!

Advance Happy Pongal!

Advance Happy Sankranti!

- Maithili

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Maithu awesome update

Loved it

Sultan seems interested in Dips and she is interested in the Prince.

How does the Princess know about Madhu?

Waiting to know what happens next.

Happy Pongal / Sankranti everyone.

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merliah johanna

@madhumeandyou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

1) What is the next thing Miss. Rosella will break according to you? (Only one thing you can say!) Her identity? Or that gift given by dips?

2) Will real Miss. Rosella enter the screen or not? Probably not. Maybe later she might but i have a feeling she won't enter

3) Why is Miss. Deepali is here? (One word is enough to say I think) to get rishab mostly

4) Do you think Pakhi will tell about Madhu to others? (Just yes or No if you don't want to detail!) No she won't

5) What can be the reason behind Rishab's hesitation to take the throne? (Any guess?)

Don't know. Might be related to his father's death. Or there's a will or some agreement that he should marry dips after taking up throne? Something like that maybe

Awesome update . Loved it. Did guess it would be dipali. Dips is not fond of sultan. Even rishab doesn't give much genuine heed to her. But queen invited her for Prince? Dips is getting j on madhu. Princess knows about madhu's real identity. Maybe the princess knew it from beginning. I think that's why the princess liked her and didn't trouble her like she troubled her other tutors coz she's not her tutor at all. Waiting for next update. Thanks for the pm

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Maithu awesome update
Loved it
Sultan seems interested in Dips and she is interested in the Prince.
How does the Princess know about Madhu?
Waiting to know what happens next.
Happy Pongal / Sankranti everyone.

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you loved it!

Yup you r are right, I don't what dimension of interest we can name this! LOL

Soon you will know how Princess got to know about Madhu

Thank you for the wishes!

Hope you had a great weekend filled with sweets ;-)

See you soon!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: madhumeandyou

1) What is the next thing Miss. Rosella will break according to you? (Only one thing you can say!) Her identity? Or that gift given by dips?
2) Will real Miss. Rosella enter the screen or not? Probably not. Maybe later she might but i have a feeling she won't enter
3) Why is Miss. Deepali is here? (One word is enough to say I think) to get rishab mostly
4) Do you think Pakhi will tell about Madhu to others? (Just yes or No if you don't want to detail!) No she won't
5) What can be the reason behind Rishab's hesitation to take the throne? (Any guess?)
Don't know. Might be related to his father's death. Or there's a will or some agreement that he should marry dips after taking up throne? Something like that maybe

Awesome update . Loved it. Did guess it would be dipali. Dips is not fond of sultan. Even rishab doesn't give much genuine heed to her. But queen invited her for Prince? Dips is getting j on madhu. Princess knows about madhu's real identity. Maybe the princess knew it from beginning. I think that's why the princess liked her and didn't trouble her like she troubled her other tutors coz she's not her tutor at all. Waiting for next update. Thanks for the pm

Thank you so much for taking your time and replying dear!

Interesting views!

Happy you loved this part!

Hope it continues!

Soon you will know all the things that are bugging you!

See you soon!

Thank you once again!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17
Superb update

Thank you so much dear!

Keep on reading!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Hello!

Sorry for posting it today while I said I will be posting it yesterday!

Got busy with festival works and cinema with family! ;-)

Hope you all also enjoyed these few days of festivals!

Happy reading!

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Part 12 (Previous part : Part 11 )

"What?" Getting up "I didn't get you!" she said acting as if she didn't heard her student.

"I know you are Miss. Madhu and not Rosella!" Pakhi said coolly.

Stammering, Madhu asked "How?"

"Simple! I got access to your laptop!" She simply replied.

"Huh?" Madhu asked perplexed.

"Don't you remember that you opened it millions of times in front of me?" She replied in a way of forming question.

Palming her face "I think I need to pack my bags!" Tutor oups the reporter said as she went towards the door.

"No need!" A voice stopped her, the voice of Pakhi stopped her.

Turned to face the little girl with plenty of questions running in her head.

"We can have a deal!" Princess proposed.

"Deal?" She exclaimed.

"Yes!" Asking Madhu to enter the room and not stay there "You write truth about my brother and I will keep your identity as a secret!"

"Truth?"

"What you have seen is truth! I know you are here to know more about Rishab!"

"And the images he has of being a playboy and"

"You have seen him!" Pakhi interrupted "You know!" She continued with a smile seeing Madhu's face to turn a bit soft and no more agitated.

"Hmmm!"

"Deal?" Pakhi asked showing her hand for a handshake to lock the deal.

"Yes! Deal!" And they their hands.

"Then! Shall we move to make cookies?" Showing all her teeth.

***

"Is there enough space in your tummy for all the items we are going to make?" as they were in kitchen since 25 mins.

"Heee Yes!" Princess replied as she put the dough on the plate and rolled it.

"Then! Let's begin to cut!" With a wink as they started to cut cookies in different shapes "Can I know about Deepali and Rishab?"

As Pakhi turned with a questioning frown, her friend replied "To write the truth, I need to know what is really happening!"

"Well! Rishab liked Deepali a lot but something happened and they separated." putting aside the cookies as she pulled out another dough from a bowl.

"Hmm"

"Now that she is back to the palace, anything can happening!"

"I see that Sultan is interested in Deepali."

"Sultan envies whatever is Rishab's!"

"Oh!"

"Everyone does!"

"As you are Royal family!"

"But it was not like this when our father was here!" She said with an edge of sadness.

"Your father is still here!" Pointing at her heart, with a smile on her lips "In oven?" She asked showing the cookies they cut.

"Yesss!" Princess exclaimed happily.

***

The notes of piano was flowing in the room until the door opened, showing the Lady Deepali as Rishab stopped playing it.

"Sorry to disturb you Rishab!" peaking her head.

"No problem!"

And she enters fully and marches towards the Prince.

"Are you okay with my stay here for few days?" she questioned as she stood by his side.

"Yes! You can!" after a small pause "Can I know what lead you to come back here?" he asked.

"Your mother asked, so I came!" she said as she sat on the stool by his side "And also, I wanted to confess that" making him face her "That I can't forget you Rishab!"

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Thank you so much for reading this part!

Hope you all liked it!

See you this evening with Zarir!

Next part : Part 13

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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