Ode to Shiv- 5 - edited

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Posted: 7 years ago
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A feather light touch,
is a memory of me-
that awakens
your eyes,
heavy with sleep;
that beckons
your love,
lost in a fog;
and leads you away from
long winding paths
of mistaken identities.

A gentle breeze
is a memory of me-
that gently touches your skin
once drenched in my love;
that softly blows away the
debris of thoughts
and scattered resolutions.
and directs you to
the forsaken path
of the love we shared.


A ray of sunlight-
memories of me;
that lighten your heart,
filled with darkness,
A glass of clear water -
memories of me;
that refreshes your soul.
A heavy burden-
memories of you
that stay in my stubborn heart,
merciless,
cruel,
impatient for salvation,
or one tender look,
or perhaps one soft whisper of love.



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beagle boy beautiful and meaningful as always.
Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Shiv's feelings for Sharanya. that is what he says to her always.
beautiful as always

keep coming
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ode to Shiv-5



Her love, as cruel as it was sweet
His pain, as sharp as bitter truth
Her betrayal, as violent as a raging tempest
His love, sweet as a melody from a flute.

Her lies, blindingly bright
His truth, buried out of sight
Her eyes, unseeing and cold
His death, a secret untold.






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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully written 👍🏼 expresses Shiv's feelings so well.

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