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Posted: 7 years ago
Emotional update.
Vivaan should've been more sensitive, he's concerned for both Suraj and Chakor but that doesn't excuse his harsh words.
Chakor's pregnancy is shocking, how will Chakor deal with it? and what will Suraj do now to protect Chakor and her baby?

Eagerly waiting for next.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Emotional update.

Vivaan should've been more sensitive, he's concerned for both Suraj and Chakor but that doesn't excuse his harsh words.
Chakor's pregnancy is shocking, how will Chakor deal with it? and what will Suraj do now to protect Chakor and her baby?

Eagerly waiting for next.



Thank u sorry for my late reply. But I'm back with an update 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi after reading ur comments I decided to give u a faster update.

Recap; she is pregnant from Vicky. Suraj never touched her.

Chakor was still unconscious lying on the bed. Ajay; Oh my Gosh. Vivaan; damn it this is not gud. Ajay - This innocent soul had to suffer so much now this. ?Y how is this possible? -.

Riya just fall back on the couch. U know Suraj really loves her n now this. Ajay; it's heart breaking. Vivaan shook his head. This pregnancy can creat many problems for her. Ajay n Riya; don't say this.

The door gets open. Suraj comes in with a shopper full of fruits. He puts the shopper down n went to the bedroom without giving the others a look or a word.

Suraj walks into his bedroom all stood up n followed him. Suraj sat besides Chakor holding her hand in his. Chakor felt his closeness n smiled.

Suraj caresses her head n was playing with her hairs. She woke up relaxed looking at Suraj who was besides her made her happy. She sat on the bed n hugged him tight. Suraj too hugged her back n kisses her head.

Ajay coughed. We r still here. Chakor looked at them n her gaze fall on Vivaan. She clutches her hands in Suraj shirt. Suraj consoles her. Sshh Chakor nothing will happen. Do u know what? Chakor shook her head. What?? Suraj; I'm going to buy u more clothes. Chakor claps. Ajay n Riya breath in relief but Vivaan shook his head.

Vivaan; Suraj do u even know what u r saying? U r ready to take the responsibility of her n Vicky Singhanias child? Suraj was quiet. Ajay was thinking... Wait we have a prove an incontrovertible prove. Suraj stood up but not to hug but warn Ajay. We r not going to use this unborn child to prove anything. Ajay; But with his DNA we... Riya; Suraj stop!. Chakor stood up. Stop!. She too held him back.

Suraj stopped looking at the concern face of Chakor. He hold her hand. R u hungry?. Chakor smiled. Haan. Suraj; Do u want to see what I bought for u?. Chakor made big eyes. Haan. Suraj pushed Ajay n took Chakor with him to the living room. He picks the shopper with the fruits n showed her.

Chakor . That Mango she took it n bite on it. Suraj loves her n all her ways he took the Mango n hold his hand in front of her mouth so shr could spit it out. She did.

Suraj made her sit. U see this... He showed on the mango it is a peel of the fruit like skin. We can't eat it we have to peel off it. Ok? Chakor nod all were sitting on the couch. Sukor on one side n opposite of then were the three sitting.

Suraj gave her a slide of the Mango. Chakor eat the half n the other half she gave Suraj... well she feeds him.

Riya was happy to see thr bonding n understanding between them. Ajay; Chakor won't u feed ur bro? Chakor nod. She took the mango from Suraj n starts to peel off the reat n cut the mango in slices. She placed it on a plate. Chakor smiles . All were looking at her with open mouth.

Chakor; eat. she pushed the plate to them. She sat on Suraj lap. Story... She asked for a story. Suraj was confused. Ajay; with full mouth. I have a story. All looked at him. Chakor; Haan??? Ajay nod. Haan Riya n my love story. Riya; excuse me there is no love story u idiot. Chakor pout. She looks at Suraj. Suraj changed her pout face into a smile. He was tickling her. Tell her story he said dried to them.

Ajay; Ok. Chakor. Riya n me we were in the past a lovr couple. Once I was shot by a goon n she was my nurse. Riya; hmm. Ajay; She was so careing I couldn't forget her one day I come to the hospital n saw her with him. Suraj; hmm. Chakor interwine her hand with Suraj. She was leaning on his chest. Boom Boom she was listening to his heartbeat.

Ajay; further. Well I thought they might had something going on. Riya; Do u know that u spoiled my reputation with ur act. I really liked u. But u ruined it. Ajay stood up n followed her. Vivaan; how many times a man has to apologies to a woman? Suraj; gud question. N the best part if this story was? Chakor; No couple!.

Vivaan was thinking - She is giving us only correct answers. She was scared but in these couple of months she opens herself. She even do housework there is something she is hiding... -. Suraj felt the same. There is a change in her behaviour.

Chakor looks at them. Ajay comes back. She is not coming. Chakor; say sorry. Ajay; I did but she is not listening. Chakor; ohh. Vivaan; Chakor what is 4+4? Chakor didn't answer him but she showed Suraj 4 fingers. Suraj hold her close to his chest. He was again checking on her head injury. Vivaan too stood up.

Ajay was confused... What's going on? Riya was crying but soon she collect herself n comes out. Riya; What r u doing?. Suraj looked up. U remember the head injury? Riya nod. Yes it was quite old. Suraj; but not that old.

Chakor looked at the round all were looking at her. She hide her face bcz she felt uncomfortable.

Suraj made her sit properly. Chakor could u give me ur full name. She shook her head. No they told me not to tell anyone. Vivaan comes near. I read a story a girl was found death in the river her name was Chakoriya Laal she had a disease autism. Chakor; U know my name. Ajay stood up now I know y I couldn't find her in the missing database.

Vivaan; Chakor I'm sorry but I have to ask u more questions. Chakor; No. Suraj hold her her tight from back that gave her support. U have to answer his questions or he will send u back to ur parents they must be missing u.

Chakor shook her head. I don't want to leave u. Vivaan; Ok. U remember what had happen to u? Chakor shiver. She closed her eyes n nod. Rape... Ajay; ... Suraj stopped him. Chakor did u suppressed the incident. Chakor nod. I don't want to remember. Riya; wait she has a photographic memory her autism is less strong. Suraj n Vivaan nod. They had all read the news as Chakoriya was well hidden no onw had seen her face before.

Ajay; Now it all makes sense. They all looked at him. Ajay; Wow so many questioning eyes. Ok U don't trust me that I understood it. Chakor very intelligent Even I read it . She went missing a deathbody with her DNA was found n she was declared as death. But she just got lost or did someone kidnapped u? Well she was in a shock being an autistic she never trust strangers n she made friendship with Suraj bcz he has a golden heart? She only let him check n her head injury must be from the time she vanished that is y we thought it's an old one. Chakor clapped. Ajay; I have more I'm a gud cop. Now the reason y u didn't let us check u in the MRT it would have remind u of the car... Chakor nod with tears. Suraj hold her very tight. Riya; hmm U understood it. Ajay; Thank u.

Vivaan stroke Chakors head. She felt his hand n turns. Vivaan; U hate
psychologists u met many n many misunderstood u. Chakor nod. Vivaan; Including me. Chakor nod again.

Suraj; We have to inform her family. Abt everything. Ajay smirks. Have u gone mad?. She is death for them her parents died years ago her uncle n aunt were our suspects but we had no prove. Chakor shiver hearing abt her uncle n aunt. Suraj; Ok then u will just stay with me. Chakor hugs him. Suraj; We have to be very careful u can't play anymore... Chakor; Ok... She said it with a pout n sadness. Riya; Suraj the baby?. Chakor; looks at her. Baby...?.

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sorry for any confusion but I tried my best to clear everything


Please Do Not Copy my Story
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update👏
So Chakor is autistic😲
She seems scared of her aunt & uncle
Loved how Suraj took care of her, he has also taken the responsibility of the baby😊
Looks like Riya & Ajay will patch up
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

So Chakor is autistic😲
She seems scared of her aunt & uncle
Loved how Suraj took care of her, he has also taken the responsibility of the baby😊
Looks like Riya & Ajay will patch up
Waiting for next



Thank u. Well ya let see what will happen to Ajay n Riya
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb yr...waiting 4 next update plzzz update soon...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

Superb yr...waiting 4 next update plzzz update soon...😳



Thabk u dear. I'm trying my best.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update.
Chakor's identity is now known. It seems her uncle and aunt are evil.
Loved protective Suraj, he's taking good care of Chakor.
Poor Chakor, the pregnancy news will shock her.
Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Interesting update.

Chakor's identity is now known. It seems her uncle and aunt are evil.
Loved protective Suraj, he's taking good care of Chakor.
Poor Chakor, the pregnancy news will shock her.
Eagerly waiting for next.



Thank u. Yes her anut n uncle r evil
I will try to update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
I like that you write about sensitive things such as mental disorders and after rape pregnancies.
I must admit that at beginning I wasn't sure how the story will be going and I was a little confused about my opinion on it. But liking it very much.

Also, I read most of your story's on wattpad and I'm liking your way of writing.
Please if you can share more of your storys here, our forum needs more story's and writers.

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