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Posted: 7 years ago
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CONGS FOR NEW STORY
nice pro
geet get ready to marry just for his father
she listen her father's talk he just want geet to marry for money
geet left her home
she went to meet maan
but she get another shock knowing maan is already engaged
she left from KM heartbroken
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Posted: 7 years ago
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superb concept
update was superb feeling sad for geet
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Posted: 7 years ago
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NOTE

HELLO EVERYONE
HAPPY NEW YEAR


Guys i know i have been such a gayab nm really sorry for that. was busy with my internship so couldnot manage to come n give an update.
But i promise that i ll give an update of this on 3rd jan 2018 for sure n will be regular from now onwards. so please wait for a day more n i ll surely update it.
Thanku everyone for all ur likes n comments it meant a lott to me.
And all those people who read it n didn't bothered about clicking a like or leaving a coment its my request to all of u guys to please like n coment on the updates n don't be silent.
Thank You

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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks for the note! Np shall wait! all the best with your internship! Happy New Year!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part-2

Geet walked out of Khurana mansion all lost in her thoughts just wondering about the fact that how easy it is for someone to claim that they love but the truth is far from reality. Today not only maan but her father also disappointed her, let her down. The pain of their betrayal was numbing her every sense. It felt as if there was nothing left in her life. She kept walking ahead thinking about her father, n maan and all those fake promises that the two did only to break her heart and now she is left with nothing in her hand with no one by her side...

Geet didn't realised that for how long she kept walking . she was numb lost n broken when she felt as if someone called her but then smirked at her kismet thinking who will call her now as there is no one left in her life when once again she felt the same n turned to see maan calling her name n running towards her. She was shocked and before she could react all she heard was a screech sound of tyre and all she could manage to say was Maan. The last thing she heard before falling unconscious on ground was a scream "Geet.

Maan stood rooted there seeing geet lying on the ground in the pool of blood. That moment he felt as if he lost everything, was he soo late to come that god snatched her from him. Noo god can't be soo cruel to him. Maan ran towards geet with all his might and kept her head on his lap. Maan kept patting her face trying to get her back but there she was laid all lifeless in his arms. maan screamed for help from the people there, in 30 mins they were rushing her to the hospital.maan sat there holding her hand throughout. Just waiting for that one smile from her that was enough to brighten up his life. " please geet, please don't do this to me. I know that I have hurt u ,I have lied to you but please don't hurt me like this. Please don't punish me like this Geet. Tum jo chahe sazaa de do but please aise mat karo. Don't leave me and go. Please geet. "

Its been 3 hours now Geet was there in OT n maan sat there regretting the moment when he let geet walk out of KM. maan remembered what happened after geet went from their his parents, his fianc n there parents all were standing their blaming him for being disloyal. His parents were very clear about the fact that in no way they were gonna let this marriage break as this was a question of there reputation and his mere love had no value in their eyes infront of there business. Maan hearing all this was once again loosing his hope ,when he decided to once talk to his soo called fianc and make her understand that this wedding is gonna give her nothing because he will never be able to love her .

Ria I know whatever is happening is very hurtful for u too but Ria try to understand my point off view for once. This marriage will give you nothing. Tum khurana khandan ki bahu toh ban jaogi ,duniya k samne meri biwi b ban jaogi but will you be happy in this loveless relationship, where your own husband will not be able to accept you ever, will not be able to love you ever. Please Ria for once think about it. Do you want to spend rest of your life in a loveless marriage or want to give another chance to your life and find someone who ll love you the way you deserve.Please once think about it once please Ria. He was almost pleading her to be a lil sensible when her reply shocked him.

"Maan it will not be a loveless marriage as I love you what if you don't love me slowly u ll forget about that girl,what was her name yeah Geet and will start loving me. Waise b maan life doesn't go with love its money which is needed to spend a good life and our marriage will make us more prosperous with the merger of Khurana Empire n malhotra Indutries. Don't act like a fool maan and be practicle. Maan was shocked beyond limits listening to her " You call it as love Ria, no you can't love me because love can never be soo selfish. You are only thinking about your happiness and not mine. Did you for once thought about me, my feelings, my love. No u didn't coz u don't love me. Had you loved me truly you would have never agreed for this. And you don't love me Ria u love my name ,my khurana surname. You love the power n success that is attached to my name not me.

Maan behave how can u talk to her like this. She is gonna be the future daughter in law of our family. And don't forget that the surname that you are talking about is ours , its because you are my son.

Yes you are right dad I have this surname because you are my father and I have not forgotten it but I guess u are soo blinded in getting successful that u are keeping ur son's happiness at stake. I feel pity on my self dad that I am ur son. Looking at my self today I feel as if I am kept for sale like a commodity n u are ready to trade me to the person who ll give you the highest price. Today I feel soo small dad standing in this big house. I pitty my self. Saying this maan started to walk off from there when his dadima came towards him. Maan what are you doing beta where are you going beta. I am going dadima to the person whom I love. I can't love in a place where people don't value my feelings. I am going dadima.

Yash.. dadima tried speaking to maans father. When he said..if today you decide to go against us then remember that u ll loose all the powers related to your surname maan. I don't need your power dad nor do my love needs ur surname. Saying this maan walked off from there.

Maan came out of his thoughts when the doctor came out of the OT. Maan rushed towards him to know about geet

Mr. Khurana we can't say anything Geet is very critical, by the time you brought her in she has already lost a lot of blood and her injury is also very deep. We can only say something once she gets back her conscious, next 48 hours are gonna be very critical. And saying this the doctor walked off while maan stood their shocked n numb.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
I knew it, i so hoped and felt Maan wouldn't have cheated her... so glad he didn't. But still surprised why he hid his engagemnt to Geet.
Very emotional ud. I had almost forgotten the frst chapter and had to go back & read tht frst.
Wondering what happens to Geet, waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice part.. Maan not betray her..Maan left his house & family name for Geet.. I hope Geet open eyes..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks for the pm! heart wrenching update! well written! Glad Maan did not betray Geet! Oh no Geet met in an accident and is in a serious condition! Liked that Maan left his family for Geet! Hate his dad! he is using Maan to forge business ties! Hope Geet recovers soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh no!! Geet just lost it!!
Well she was broken so deeply :(
Couldn't maan stop this alliance before?. He didn't try what he did today.. both of maaneet parents are so selfish.. -_- good that both left them -_-
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I read first pt again bz I forgotten Maan didn't cheated hr but he hide truth of his engagement
before he could explain hr she met an accident
Maan confront his family and his fiance but they want money business non
value his feeling so he left his mansion Geet is critical

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