My First Story : Love by chance #2 Part 17 on pg 118 May 14 - Page 23

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyanka7080

Fantastic update dear
loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: smilesusmita

Lovely update
Continue soon


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvashree

Awesome update ...IshRa are coming closer...raman was concerned ...Raman told her that he will drop her home but she denied... .Raman protected her from bad boys...

He was angry on her and shouted on her...Raman consoled her ...waiting for next update di...thanks for pm...


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Muskan193

Lovely update dear
Filled with ishra
Loved it a lott
Raman offered her to drop her
But madam was telling to go alone
Some boys tried to misbahave with her
Thank god raman was there
He scolds her
And she cried
Kovely she was so cute
Andcraman too felt her cute
Loved last scenece
Update soon dear
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Love
Anju


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Lovely updt

Equation is changing between ishra
Ishita is liking his behaviour while raman is also very sweet and caring
He saved her and even dropped her home
Updt soon


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Divanru

Lovely sweet update .

Ishita was waiting for taxi .
Raman offered her lift but she denied and he left .
But he was not feeling good leaving her alone .
He again went to check her and find that two boys were bothering her .
He beat them and chased them away .
Loved their cute nok jhok .
Waiting for next.
Update soon


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: pyara12

Lovely update harshu

They made plan nd both left the place
Raman told he will drop her but ishu didn't listen so raman went
But he was not sure abt her so went back to check on her only to see two guys looking at her
They got into the bus in which she got into raman also took the same bus he punched one guy nd warned the other
He was very angry and scolded ishu she cried but he apologised later
Thanks for pm
Update soon


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: PremPBSB

Part 12

Lovely update...
Raman thought to spent time with ishita but she is worried about her amma & mihika as she lie to them. Raman insisted to drop ishita back knowing it won't be safe to let her alone but she deny it saying she can look after herself. Raman annoyed with ishita attitude he try to left her but worried think about her safety. Raman angry see the guy oagling ishita she safe her from their lusty eye ishita reliase raman is angry with her. Poor ishita such a baby she cry as could not take raman word while he feel bad see her teary. Raman said sorry & ishita back to her jkr avartar😆so cute. ..thank u for pm & update..sorry for late reply


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Amreen99

Lovely update...

Ishra made plan to unite Mimi...
Raman agreed with Ishita's plan...
Raman do care for Ishita...
Loved ishra little nok jhok...they are really so cute..
Ishita is really jkr...kisi ni sunti...
Raman offered her lift but ishu denied saying she can Manage...
She is aaj ki ladki...bahut attitude Hai jkr main..
Raman felt bad that he left her alone...he went again to pick her..
He saw how some boys were lusting over her..boys were following her in bus...raman got angry
Raman protected Ishita he scared that boys..
Loved ishra moments...pyaar ki shuruwat ho gyi Hai...
He scolded Ishita for being ziddi...
Loved how Ishita started crying hearing his scolding...
Raman console her..he dropped Ishita home..he cares for her a lot...
Do updt next part soonish harshu di.. waiting...
Thnx for pm


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Posted: 7 years ago

Hlw frnds m back with an update I hope you all remember me & my stories.. 😉

This update is dedicated to:"lovelydivan aka sithara,Amreen99 aka amu,KP_Ishra aka priya, Nithya83 aka nithya di" I hope you all liked it.. 😛

Merry Christmas all of you



Part -13


Raman - yrr jhalli Bina argue kiye tera kaam nhi chlta naa ab jaa warna mai yahi khadha rahunga..

Ishita - ok I m going ...saying she went to her house and thought " ye Mr lrll itna bhi bura nhi hai "thinking she smiles & other side he was thinking" ye jhalli bhi naa bahut cute hai itni bhi buri nhi hai " & went from there..

Ishita reached at door & pressed the doorbell amma opened the door & asked" ayyo ishu tum kidhar thi yeah koi time hai ghr aane ka...she was still asking when appa came from behind "offo madhu first let her come inside then u can start ur question answer session...

Amma(glared)- vishwa jyada mat bolo who is stopping her ?saying she gave her way & ishita came inside..

Appa - ishu go & fresh n up ..which she nodded and before she can go amma stooped her..

Amma - ishu wait meri baat ka jawab do phr kahi Jana..

Ishita (st)- ayyo murugan now what can I do? If I lied to Amma that I m with my friends toh unka koi bharosha nahi kya pata call kr de meri sari frnds ko par agr sach bola to kahi baat or bigadh na jaye save me murugan plz save me ..


Amma - bolo ishu ..

Ishita- amma wo...she was saying meanwhile doorbell rang..i


Amma - ab kon aaya u wait here m coming now..ishita nodded & said thank you to murugan who saved her..

Amma opened the door there a delivery boy was standing..

DB- good evening mam ye madhvi iyer ji ka ghr hai?

Amma - ji mai hi hu boliye kya kaam hai..

DB- wo actually mam ur daughter ms.ishita iyer hamari shop pe aayi thi apki favorite sweet" Kalakand"lene bt actually usko ready hone mein bahut time lag gya so wo chli aayi toh hm hi delivery karne aa gye..

Listening this amma became so overwhelmed meanwhile appa & ishu too came there..

Appa - kon hai madhu itni der laga rhi ho..

Amma(overwhelmed)- see vishwa ye mere liye kya laya hai nahi nahi not he bt my ishu saying she cupped her face "ishu kanna tumne mujhe btaya kyu nahi ki tum isliye late ho gyi thi.."

"Kis baat ke liye amma " she asked with puzzled look..

Amma - see vishwa ab bhi ye nhi bta rhi..

Appa looked toward ishita with questioning eyes while ishita was also clueless ..

Amma - leave it mai hi bta deti hu see this (she forward that packet) ye abhi mujhe wo ladka dekr gya jiski shop pe ishu gayi thi meri favourite sweet " Kalakand"lene bt bhut time lg rha tha toh ye aa gyi bt wo DB abhi dekr gya..

Appa - arey ishu tum kyun nhi bta rhi thi pehle ..


Ishita (st) -kya btati appa when myself don't know about it..

Amma - tell me na ishu why are you silent?

Ishita - actually amma wo kaafi time lg rha tha so mai aise hi chli aayi or jb layi hi nahi so btaya bhi nahi..

Appa - ohh chlo koi nhi madhu jara mujhe bhi ek piece milega .

Amma - sure vishwa u go m coming saying she went towards kitchen..

Appa - let's go kanna..

Ishita - u go appa m coming after closing the door which appa nodded & went from there while ishita went out of house to see that DB bt he already went from there"oh shit wo DB kahan gya or ye sb kisne kiya ..she was saying when her phn start ringing she take the call "hello"

Raman - hii jhalli..

Ishita (smiles)- hii Mr.LLRL..

Raman - so kaise thi sweets..

Ishita - so that's ur plan..

Raman - of course jhalli warna or kon tujhe bachayega ..

Ishita - hahaha very funny..said with attitude

Raman - oye tu mujhse attitude dikha rhi hai ek to tujhe tere amma se bachaya thank you toh bola nahi bhaav dikha rahi hai..

Ishita - toh who told you to do this?

Raman - haww jhalli how mean yrr jaa mujhe tujhse baat hi nahi karna..


Ishita (laughs)- oye dramebaaz bs ho gya thank you so much for saving me from my amma's wrath now happy..


Raman (smiles)- super happy waise tune abhi tak change nahi kiya..


Ishita(surprised)- how do you know? Kahi tumne CCTV to nhi lgaya yahan..

Raman (laughs)- haan Rkb CCTV ..

Ishita - what?


Raman - arey jhalli turn ho..

Ishita turned & saw him standing on the other side of road ..

Raman (waved his hand)- dikha mai..

Ishita - hmm bt tum gye nahi..

Raman - ja hi rha tha ki mujhe Teri amma ki yaad aa gyi to ruk gya..saying he start laughing..


Ishita - achha..

Raman (teased)- or kya nahi toh kya Teri yaad aayegi..

Ishita- ok ab rakhti hu..

Raman - chl bye or haan tc..

Ishita - hmm u too or remember plan"J"..

Raman - yes jhalli..

Ishita-hmm good bye saying both hung the call..


Ishita closed her door & went inside her room where mihika was sleeping she sat besides her & saw dried tears on her face which she wiped & said"don't worry akka very soon everything will be alright "saying she kissed her temple and went inside washroom for fresh n up..

After some time she came & woke mihika ..

Ishita - akka wake up..

Mihika - arey ishu tu aa gyi..

Ishita - hmm now come amma dinner ke liye bula rahi hai..

Mihika - ishu tu ja mera bilkul mann nhi hai .

Ishita - ok agr aap nhi khaoge to mai bhi nhi khaungi..

Mihika - ye kya baat hui plz na baby ..

Ishita - koi nhi apka baby aaj bhookha so jayega apki wajah se bt u know I m sooo hungry bt apko kya..said with cute pout..


Mihika (smiles)- okk baba chl mai apni baby ko bhooki nhi rakungi..

Ishita - yay u r the best akka in this whole universe saying she hugged her then both went & had their dinner..

On the other side same scenario between raman & mihir..

Next day
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IshRa was talking on phn..


Ishita - r u ready Mr LLRL..

Raman - hmm jhalli ..


Ishita - so start..

Raman - ok bt don't disconnect the call..

Ishita - ok main Bluetooth lgaya hai..

Raman - maine bhi so let's go..saying both went to their siblings..

Mihika was reading a novel while mihir was doing some work on his laptop..

IshRa(loudly)- akka/bhai ..


MiMi - what raman /ishu why are you shouting?

Raman - bhai news hi aise hai ki kya btau..

Ishita - akka baat hi kuch aise hai..

Mihir - tell me what's the matter?

Raman - you know bhai abhi mujhe pata chla ki mihika bhabhi ka rishta pakka ho gya..listening this mihir was so shocked


Mihika - tell me aise kya baat hai..

Ishita - you know akka aj maine jiju ko kisi or ladki ke sath dekha or wo unki gf hai dono bhut khush hokr baatein kr rhe the..listening this mihika was so shocked too


IshRa were so happy seeing their expression ..

MiMI- are you sure?

IshRa- 100% akka/bhai..

Mihika - good mihir yahan mai tumhari wajah se kisi se baat nhi kr rhi ri rhi hu or tum apni nayi gf ke sath maze kr rhe ho fyn with me ishu amma kaha h..


Ishita - Hall mein akka bt why are you asking?

Mihika (went toward amma)- amma

Amma - han kanna kya hua..

Mihika - amma Jo reddy 's ka rishta aaya tha na use haan bol do..

Amma - what are you saying kanna ?

Mihika - yes amma mai yahi chahti hu bs ..saying she went from there a shocked amma & ishu..

Mihir - wah yahan abhi hmare break up ko time bhi nhi hua ta ye kahun ki break up hua hi nahi or she said yes to marriage proposal not bad mihku now I will say yes to that malhotra's daughter..

IshRa slapped there heads with their hands..

Raman - jhalli yahan toh plan ulta padh gya ..

Ishita - same here Mr.LLRL.


Raman - so now ..

Ishita - let's meet tomorrow at 3pm at coffee shop..

Raman - ok done ..saying both hung the call..


That's all for now frnds I hope you all liked it so hit like button do comments also..

Love
Harshita

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