Neil-Avni-Neela OS: The Abyss of Pain

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Himani128

@Himani128

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Ashiii😊. Perfect one

Loved it.just loved it🤗

Does this have continuation? Then pls continue.

BTW if IAM not asking more can I have one os on the same but avni should bajofy both Neil and neela.

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

No words..
This was simply excellent ❤️

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

I yearn to see something similar to this .Beautiful and heartbreaking is the words 💔

I want Avni to be hollowed out in show too . Till now only Neil is the one who affects her .I am excited to know how she reacts after hearing the truth . When we get to watch it I am surely gonna remember this 😉

Everyone's emotion was on spot 👏👏 I dunno whom I had to cry for . While watching past week episodes I felt that Neela while trying to protect her forgot that it would open her past wounds .

Ali the munchkin 😳

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Perfect... I wish they play this out in actual in the serial. Thank you for amazing writing.

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840837

Suspended

Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful! Please write a sequel.

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome Ashi. superb I loved it.

But it's so painful😭 please write a sequel.

Bacho Ko milado.😳

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Zara_Imam

@Zara_Imam

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

It was simply "Beautiful". Hats off to u🤗

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Kmhcrazyfan

@Kmhcrazyfan

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

Excellent os

Totally emotional one

Loved it to the core

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Fagune09

@Fagune09

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#10

Beautifully written!!!

I would love to see something like this on the show, both Neela ma & Neil need to know that in trying to protect Avni they have actually broken her.

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