Neil-Avni-Neela OS: The Abyss of Pain

iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: vijaya138
Ashiii😊. Perfect one

Loved it.just loved it🤗

Does this have continuation? Then pls continue.

BTW if IAM not asking more can I have one os on the same but avni should bajofy both Neil and neela.

Thanks dear! 😳

This was supposed to be a one shot. But since there are quite a few requests for a sequel, I'll try to write one. But I have three of my stories to update before that. I'll definitely continue this one if I get time.

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sushfiza

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Mind blowing piece of writing

Perfect portrayal of emotion

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Shaiksafia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

It's beautifully written yaar quite painful 😭

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Amazing.!
I am speechless.!
The pain and agony from everyone's POV were explained so well.!

Well done.!

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OmNaMaSteOm

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Arey yaar sequel, trequel sab banta hain

Why cant they show this on the show, makes so much more sense.

Especially the first response you got, bajofy Neil and Neela for what they did.

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Simi1711
No words..
This was simply excellent ❤️

Thanks dear! 😊

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: AgnesFan
I yearn to see something similar to this .Beautiful and heartbreaking is the words 💔
I want Avni to be hollowed out in show too . Till now only Neil is the one who affects her .I am excited to know how she reacts after hearing the truth . When we get to watch it I am surely gonna remember this 😉
Everyone's emotion was on spot 👏👏 I dunno whom I had to cry for . While watching past week episodes I felt that Neela while trying to protect her forgot that it would open her past wounds .
Ali the munchkin 😳

Thank you so much for the appreciation! It means a lot. 😳

I'm disappointed with the recent OLVs with AvNeil in the prison. I can't see the angst I wanted to see there. I so wish that the CVs would handle this track cautiously. Because if they does, it's going to be one of the most beautiful tracks in the serial. I'm a goner for angst. I just love to see intense stuff.

Ali is a sweetheart! ❤️ I'm happy that he was there for Avni when she needed him the most. He's the true friend that everyone needs in their life.

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

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