Arrange Marriage-..(Jai/Venella) Updated Pg 14

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Hermione Granger

@misspotter

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#111

this is awesome!!
I am falling in love with this!!

so finally the much awaited conversation happened..
let's see what is the effect of this "Trip" in their further life??

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bahubalifan

@bahubalifan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Laddoo !! 🤗

I am lagging behind 3 updates so this will be a long post pls bear with it !! 😆

Pg 10

Ooho hot-headed Jai 😲 and Vennella doing her duties of a wife was so well-written. I like how she's caring for him even though he was showing his grumpy side she didn't lose her cool and tried her best to make him feel better 👍🏼 he is such a baby when he is sick 😆

Pg 11

Oh dear she pushed him and that hurt his ego ! J is right he was there for her when she needed his comfort and he didn't ask her about that but V wasn't welcoming hmm can't blame her either don't know what was bugging her both are not at fault they have their own reasons for behaving the way they did.

Aaawww inspite their tiff he went running to her when he knew she wasn't well. J, you are the perfect husband material !! 👏 So caring !! Poor girl starved because he went away without having breakfast. Ooohh she loves him a lot !! 😳 Yes yes yes they need to sit and talk !!

Pg16

I was all smiles for this update...lol.. The part when she suggests they should go for a honeymoon / trip and he stares at her asking you pushed your husband away at night and planning for honeymoon what are we going to do there ? 🤣🤣🤣

So she was scared because he was going to kiss her ! Oh this was what was bugging her poor girl she's so cute😆 but seems like she is more eagerly looking forward to it than J😉 just that she's scared... she isn't used to all this so naturally she would and J understood that love his 'promise' to her 😳 he truly loves her and wants to take their relationship slowly how understanding... he is love ! And then lining the pillows on bed to be on the safer side because you never know 🤣🤣 oohhh this fella is so naughty !!

He couldn't sleep not because of the coffee but due to his excitement for the trip 😉😆 he's planning... notorious dunna ooppss J 😳😆

That was amazing laddoo👏👏👏 I thoroughly enjoyed every bit of their convo!!! This feels so good to read... like I can go on reading forever... you write so well laddoo so much that this doesn't feel like a story it is as if it is happening in the life of someone we are very close to that natural it is...now I am looking forward for their honeymoon. What is she going to do ? What are his plans ? Will they get rid of their awkwardness.. we'll see soon 😉

You rock !!! Way to go girl!!! 👏

Special mention to the edits you make those match the updates perfectly!! 👏 I love how you adorn sindoor to V's hairline. Well done ! 👍🏼

Thanks for the pm ! Looking forward to the next update 😆😉

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Prema

@prema27

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Its very nice story but can't understand HINDI😭

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batgirl67

@batgirl67

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#114

I have read this fic three times now since I have found it please update soon! And if you can PM me the updates! I don't even know Tamil or tenglu and I fell in love with this movie! But more than that I love the couple and their chemistry! And you do an amazing job developing their love story in this fic together!
Also if anyone knows any other good movies of these two besides mirchi and Baahubali please comment them so I can watch!!! Love your work Laadoo! Keep going please!!:)

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