Devotion And Hatred: [16+] Rikara FF : CH-3:PG 9: 2NOV

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

LOVED THE UPDATE

daaamn poor omkara tried to show her how much he loves her and how sorry he is but sadly it seemed forced, and gaurs felt trapped

I HOPE THAT soon all the misunderstandings and the fear and the pain will be erased and they can start a fresh

pls pm me as soon as you update

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priyadil

@priyadil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

when i was going through the forum i just saw your story. even thought i recently joined i went through most of the Rikara stories. I don't know how i missed this story...😕

It is a really nice story

i read all the 3 chaps in one go...👏

You have nicely penned down how om wants to bring her wife back to normal and how Gauri misunderstands him and hide away from him.

will he able to clear her fear for him any time soon?

You wrote their emotions-guilt, fear, care, (mis)understanding, very well.

How om wants gauri to be comfortable around him, and every time how she becomes uncomfortable around him was amazingly gathered into a beautiful story...

Eargely waiting for the next chap

Pls update soon