HELLOOO
I am Muskaan.
i have recently started watching IB. i have been silent since a long time, but not now. i wanted to write a story, coz honestly, rikara story is very nice, but it needs some changes..and om and gauri should be together...so show me to jab milenge tab ki tab dekhenge...but i wanted to share my story with you guys!
please read and reply! please! its been years since i wrote something!
love,
Muskaan
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Omkara Singh Oberoi : A man of honor
Gauri Kumari Sharma : The misunderstood woman.
This follows after Omkara starts suspecting that Gauri is having an affair with Arjun. Arjun, a simple teacher with whom Gauri was easily believed to be having an affair with. She was very simple, kind, humble and a devout person. She believed and worshiped only two people blindly, her Shankarji and her- no not her, and, Omkaraji. She was not that much educated and the fact was not even a secret but for her this fact was a shame now. She wanted the love of Omkara but her devotion needed nothing in return. But this heart, it can be selfish sometimes. So she became selfish. She lied. No not lied, she only hid the truth. She hid the truth of the English classes and now her husband, for whom she is going to classes and learning English was now doubting her.
Omkara who desperately wanted to believe that Gauri, a woman accused of infidelity so many times was actually a good person. And he was being successful also. But this truth. It shattered him again. For a man who loved to be truthful, maybe was not loved back by the truth. Because everytime the truth revealed itself to him, he was shattered. At first, his own father's betrayal and now Gauri. Maybe relationships are destined to be painful. But this much pain?
There are not very many fond memories of him and Gauri having a good time but now the new truth' has scratched those moments also. He regretted the moment when he believed that a person like Gauri can be the one for him. The small town girl like her can only be after one ting, his money. Not his heart.
But now that she already has it. Omkara was going snatch his own heart from her. But what he did not know was that he was not only going to snatch his own but her heart as well and leave her, without any heart beat. Breathless. Dead.
Gauri. Now very happy, was returning to ObM (Oberoi mansion). She was excited to finally learn the difficult language and finally was going to express her feelings to Om in English.
but when she reached ObM, she found Omkara waiting for her at the gate. she was elated. but then Om took her to that sleazy hotel and how he shattered her! the way he played with her heart, first he became all ideal husband and now he broke her. Gauri couldn't believe she was married to a man who mistrusted her this much! who thought this low of her.
Gauri was adamant, she would leave ObM. and this time when she does, she wont be back. she tore away the greeting card she bought for him and threw it on his face. a heart that loved him so much, now broken returned to his house but to leave.
NOW
Gauri reached ObM in her auto, and Omkara, he was still on that road where Gauri has revealed her heart to him, and he, just couldnt make himself to move. Gauri on the other hand, wiping her tears fiercely packed her things. She found out that most of her things were in Omkara's room. Yes for everybody she lived in his room as his wife, but Om never treated her like one. She was a guest in his room, who was not allowed to touch anything, do anything, not even breathe, if it were possible. But now she felt somewhat free. She was living a lie, pretending one day it might come true. but her stars were not that bright, her destiny was not to be his wife, ever. And now she has to leave. Even though it was her own decision to go. She felt her hands heavy. She couldnt move them to pack her bags. But she did. She put her belongings in a small bag. Most of her fancy clothes and jewelries were Jhanvi's so she put them on the bed, openly. What if he gets another bizarre idea that she stole any of it?! For a man who thought her to be sleeping with another man, assuming she is a thief, is not a big deal.
So putting out everything expensive she had on the bed, she packed her mundane belongings and closed her bag. But as soon as Gauri turned to leave, she saw Omkara. For once again, his presence scared her. Like it always did. She hoped for a barking comment. Anything. But nothing came.
"I have not taken anything with me. she said meekly, fearing he would surely accuse her of stealing. But when she saw him not saying anything she said, "Ma gave these things to me. but I cant take it now. They belong to -Ma, -your mother. she clarified.
Omkara looked at the things once Gauri wore, and thought, she is leaving everything.
"Please check my bag so I can leave, she said looking here and there, but omkara didnt understand, he kept staring at her. "Ch- check my bag, or else you will think, I stole something. she said nearly choking on words, "I cant- handle any more accusations. saying so a tear fell from her eyes and she quickly hid it.
Not seeing Omkara move, she pushed her bag infront of him but he kept staring at her, now she felt conscious.
Omkara was speechless, he had no words and right now he did not even know what to feel.
"I will show you, saying so gauri herself put her bag on the bed, and opened it. "I have my clothes here. she shuffled through her things, "I have my slippers and jewelery I bought from Bareily, and then the bag she carried on her shoulder, "I - I, I have my phone, and some money, she clearly highlighted the small bundle of notes that was merely few hundred Rupees and showed him like she was being checked by the police.
Gauri was clearly degrading herself before Omkara himself would, but somewhere she hoped he would stop her, a tiny hope was still there that he would say that showing her bag was not necessary, that he trusted her Enough to not check her before she left. But he quietly looking at what she did, did not help him. Gauri now, shattered that he was actually interested in checking her bags, showed him the last chain of her purse, there was a folded letter. "this, this letter was - for- i - Gauri could not bring herself to say, "My mom gave me this, to give to you. She asked me not to read it. But i did. I am sorry. but i- she finally broke into tears, "it doesnt matter now. she said and put the letter dejectedly on the bed and closed her bag.
Omkara, clearly not in his senses, kept looking at her and Gauri couldnt comprehend why and how he has not said a word. Maybe he is waiting for me to go, she thought and held her bag to leave.
A tiny sliver of hope still remained in her heart where she thought maybe Omkara would stop her, maybe after her confession, he would finally realize that - but when she turned to see him, he has not even moved! Not even turned from his place. Without any further humiliation, she half ran towards the gates of ObM.
"I hurt her, I hurt her, I hurt her, I hurt her. this was the only thing going on in Om's head. He was miserable. He was not able to comprehend anything. He blankly looked here and there. She left! She's gone! He thought and finally broke from his reverie and ran towards the door, He saw Gauri was to touch the door. He was about to call her name when he heard someone falling from the stairs.
Gauri turned to a sudden thudding sounds and a scream.
Omkara heard a scream and looked at the top of the stairs and through them, fell his mother.
Gauri left her bag and ran towards her and knelt where she had just fallen, there was a large gash of wound on her head and it was bleeding profusely.
Gauri sobbed and took her head in her laps, "Maaji, Maa, - She tried to wake her up but she was not opening her eyes. she looked at Om he was not coming, again blankly staring, "Omkaraji! she called and he looked at her, in her laps, his mom!
Omkara ran towards her and nudged his mom, "Mom, mom wake up! Om said but his brain had stopped functioning, Both women in his life, the two most important women, were on verge of leaving him.
Seeing his state Gauri took her phone called Shivaay. "Shivaay bhaiya! maaji! please come Soon, She fell off the stairs.!
As soon as she ended the call, Shivaay emerged from up stairs, he too ran down in a hurry seeing them like that, Jhanvi was bleeding in Gauri's laps and Om, he was clueless.
He held Jhanvi in his arms and ran towards hospital, thankfully Om followed him. Gauri took Jhanvi on her laps again as she sat on the back seat, and Shivaay, he flew the car towards hospital.
Omkara on the other hand, looked at his fingers, they were red. From blood. His mom's blood. Shivaay looked at his brother's state and assured, "Nothing will happen, Om. You hear me? he asked looking at him but Om did not look at him back. Once they reached the hospital, Jhanvi was taken into the care of the doctors.
Om stood outside the door and kept looking at the door like a mad person. His fingers were shivering, and his forehead was sweating. "Omkara, - then he heard a slap across his face. Shivaay was calling his name 4-5 times but he was not listening, so he had to slap some senses into him. "OM, you hear me?! Shivaay shook him and Om finally looked at him, "Mom, Shi- Shivaay- mom. he pointed towards the door like a baby and Shivaay hugged him tightly. "Nothing will happen to her. Shivaay assured and made him sit on a nearby chair.
"Gauri, I will just come. saying so he left to complete the formalities of the hospital.
Gauri looked here and there when Shivaay left and not sure of what to do, she looked inside the door through a glass window. The doctors were hovering over Jhanvi and doing some things that she did not understand, but looked as if they were wiping blood.
She then looked at the shivering fingers of Om, they were too covered in blood. But after today, did she even have the right to talk to him, let alone hold his fingers to wipe his hand.?
Gauri looked at Om, clearly lost, as he was at the time when she was leaving. She was leaving- she had to leave. Gauri suddenly realized she had to leave, but leaving now would mean, leaving Om in this state! Even though she had freed him from all the rights and duties of a husband, she cannot forget hers.
She quickly went to a nearby water tank, dipped her duppatta's corner in the water and bought it towards Omkara. Om being in a trance did not realise anything till something cold touched his fingers. He looked down and saw Gauri kneeling infront of him, washing his bloody fingers from her duppatta.
Gauri expected him to snatch away his hand any moment, but Om just coudnt, even after doing all what he has done to hurt her, she still cared for him! A tear fell from his eyes and Gauri shook her head hastily wiping it away, "nothing will happen to her, she will be fine. she reassured. "please, dont- , Om said but she again wiped the tear that left his eye and continued to wipe the blood from his hands.
Omkara, ashamed of the devotion she had for him and what he had done to her in return, couldnt face her and stood up to leave. But before he did he knew she was to take it the wrong way, maybe feel that he is leaving because of her, which was exactly the same. "Please stay here. he said as he turned towards her and she looked at him shocked. Om too couldnt decide if he wanted her to stay in his life or in the hospital, but for now, it was enough. Gauri nodded and Om continued, "I'll be back.
PRECAP:
Om kneels infront of Gauri, "I cant! I can't take it anymore! Please! he said holding his head, "I can't!
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"You are the biggest fool, Omkara! Even bigger than your brother! Anika says rudely before she walks away from him.
!!INDEX!!
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