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Posted: 7 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: tarannum6

read part 2
yaay Ok Heer prem ko Prem ji nd Prem Heer ko Heer ji bolte hai
abhi ke liye
i m loveing it ☺️
awosome dailouges
Prem nd Preet Maan Family ko pasand aaye
pata nahi Harman aai gay ya nahi?
Love premeer convo
thanks for the pm :)

Thanks for the review.
Harman will be different than prem and preet.
Posted: 7 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: tarannum6

part 3
wow amazing Update
love it
haha
Ash 😛
wo preet ko pasand karti hai na??
ya prem ko :(
waiting for next part
awosome story
loving it ❤️

Ash is confused for now.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Part 3 page 7

I started to read on the day you've updated I think but I had to leave that day somewhere and didn't continue I think.
So I re read this ch.

The singing contest went well hai na. Nihal's voice isn't heard yet :P Hope he speaks also.
V meaningful words in btw dialogues.

These are really true and ppl generally don't realize this.

I'm glad you added this:
"Kal ho naa ho. Prem started to sing from his soul. His whole life was built up on that philosophy. Prem thought about his life in deeper level, he thought about the purpose of his life but he never forgot to appreciate and love who was closer to him. He wanted to enjoy his life around his friends and his relatives as he learned that life could be short sometimes from the premature death of his parents. He felt deeply in debt to his badi maa and papa for giving their helpful hands when he became an orphan."

Also this paragraph:
"Preet zindegi hassin hain is liye hume usse enjoy karna chahiye aapne pariwar aur dosto ka saat jabtak zindegi hamari saat hain. Kyun ki zindegi kabhi bhi badal sakte hain tumhare khilaf. Zindegi tumhe kabhi bhi aisi halat me dhal sakte hain jaha tumhe kutch samaj nahi ararah hain, tab agar koi tumhara dost tumhare saat dene ke liye haat badata hain tab tumhe uss haat ko tham lena chahiye. Kyunki kya pata woh tumhe tumhari asli manjil tak le jaay. Prem replied to Preet in a serious tone, however his eye met with Heer at the end of the statement."

Fab update lob yay
Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: AASUS

Part 3 page 7

I started to read on the day you've updated I think but I had to leave that day somewhere and didn't continue I think.
So I re read this ch.

The singing contest went well hai na. Nihal's voice isn't heard yet :P Hope he speaks also.
V meaningful words in btw dialogues.

These are really true and ppl generally don't realize this.

I'm glad you added this:
"Kal ho naa ho. Prem started to sing from his soul. His whole life was built up on that philosophy. Prem thought about his life in deeper level, he thought about the purpose of his life but he never forgot to appreciate and love who was closer to him. He wanted to enjoy his life around his friends and his relatives as he learned that life could be short sometimes from the premature death of his parents. He felt deeply in debt to his badi maa and papa for giving their helpful hands when he became an orphan."

Also this paragraph:
"Preet zindegi hassin hain is liye hume usse enjoy karna chahiye aapne pariwar aur dosto ka saat jabtak zindegi hamari saat hain. Kyun ki zindegi kabhi bhi badal sakte hain tumhare khilaf. Zindegi tumhe kabhi bhi aisi halat me dhal sakte hain jaha tumhe kutch samaj nahi ararah hain, tab agar koi tumhara dost tumhare saat dene ke liye haat badata hain tab tumhe uss haat ko tham lena chahiye. Kyunki kya pata woh tumhe tumhari asli manjil tak le jaay. Prem replied to Preet in a serious tone, however his eye met with Heer at the end of the statement."

Fab update lob yay

Thanks for the very long and thoughtful review.
Yes, Prem has a deeper understanding of life than other people.
He will always handle every situation with courage and integrity.
Posted: 7 years ago
#75
It will be updated soon in few minutes.
Posted: 7 years ago
#76
You are my destiny
Chapter 4
Heer was finally able to confront her cousin Ash after returning from hangout.
"Ash aaj subah jab tune Prem ji ki room mein gayi thi tab tu iss tara bartab kyun ki. Heer asked Ash.
"Di aab kya bol rahe hein mujhe kutch nahi samaj arahi hein. " Ash replied to Heer.
"Jyda boli bonne ki koshish maat kar Prem ji room ki darawaja khule tit u kutch bole bina unke sirf body dekh raha thi, tu bol Ash tujhe kya ya sobha dete hein. Kya sochenge wo hum logo ke bare mein. Heer told Ash.
"Di aab bhi na kitna old fashion ho. Aarhe unhone koi shirt nahi paheni thi iss liye maine unka abs, cheast, muscle dekhi thi. Aura b to jantei hein Ash hamesha acche product ke tariff karte hein. Manna hoga di kya body paya hein hamare second cousin ne. Bilkul John Abraham ki tarah, aur wo kyun hamare bare bura sochenge , wo log to Canada mein bari hui na waha par to log bahut comfortable hote hein aapne skin show karne mein. Ash remarked.
"Ye tum kaisi basha ki istemal kar raha ho Prem ji koi product nahi hein woe k insane hein aur hamare second cousin hein . Insan ka pechan sirf woska cxhera, body shape se nahi hota Ash insan ki asli pechan unka sirat mein hote hein, unke dilo ki acchaye mein hote hein.
Jaha tak mein Prem ji ko jana hein wo dil ke bahut acche hein aur hum sab se iss tarah ki bartab paritiksha nahi karte hein. Ha Prem ji aur Preet Canada mein bari hui hein lekin ye maat bolo wo hamare khoon ke rishtedar hein aur unloko ka bhi bajoot iss mitti se hein. Iss liye un dono ka moral value hum logo se milte hein . Heer angrily told Ash.
"Di kutch chease kabhi nahi badtalte hein jaisi ki aap aur aapki naitikata ki bashan, aap bhi bahgut acche tare se jante hein jydar insan paheli mulkat mein aapne surat se mapa jati hein. Aap ki shadi to Harman ji se horahi hein iss liye jahir se baat hein aap kisi dusre ladke ko khas karke aapse umar mein chote ladke ko wos najar se dekh ne ki koi jarurat nahi hein lekin mein to abhi bhi kumara ho iss liye aur Prem ji se umar mein choti ho iss liye mein unme itni interested hu. After saying that ,Ash left the place.
Heer felt disturbed after hearing the thought process of Ash, she promised herself that she would prevent any activities of Ash that could embarrass her family.
On the other hand, whole Maan family was preparing to welcome rest of the Juneja family specially their to be son in law Harman Juneja.
Rest of the Juneja family finally arrived at Maan house in the night.
"Balraj paaji kaise hein aap, hum to hum bhuli gaye the. Gayetri complained to Balraj.
"Mein aapni payari behen ko bhul jao ye kabhi sambhab hein kya, kaise ho tum sab? Balraj asked the Juneja family.
"Hum to acche hein Ballu , ye bata hamare hone wali bahu kaha hein? Lalit asked his childhood friend.
"Wo andar hein aabhi aarhae hein, waise Harman puttar koi dekh nahi raha hein kaha hein wo? Balraj asked Lalit.
"Wo dusre flight mein aayega. Lalit assured Balraj.
Meantime Heer came from inside of the house and touched the feet of Gayetri and lalit.
"Jeete raho puttar, dekhiye kitne soni lag rahi hein humare hone wali bahu. Gayetri told her husband.
"Ha Gayetri tumne ekdam sahi kaha, Heer puttar saach mein bahut soni lag rahi hein. Lalit agreed with his his wife.
"Prem aur Preet kaha hein? Gayetri asked.
"Wo dono so rahe the, mujhe lagta hein wo dono abhi aate hein honge. Teji assured Gayetri.
Prem and Preet soon came from inside the room and took blessing from Lalit and Gayetri.
"Badi ma Harman bhaiya kaha hein ? Prem asked Gayetri.
"Wo kal 10 baje ayega aur shadi bhi kal hi hogi. Gayetri informed Prem.
"Lekin maa shadi to parshu hone ki baat thi. Preet asked his mother in a curious voice.
"Ha lekin tera Harman bhaiya ka koi kaam hein parsu. Lalit told Preet.
"Shadi ki waqt bhi kaam ye insan hein ya robot. Daljit muttered under her breath but teji heared that and gave her a disapproving look.
Soon whole Juneja family and Maan family were sitting in dining room of Maan house.
"Aur batayie bhabi ye dono aap logo ko tang to nahi kya? Gayetri asked Teji.
"Maa aap bhi na. Preet complained.
"Nahi bhaiya ye dono to bahut acche hein, shadi ki tayrai mein hume bahut madat ki hein. Teji assured her.
"Ha wo dono to Geet ki bauji ko jail se chorane mein bhi madatr ki hein. Dj told Gayetri.
"Kya Balwant jail mein gaya tha aur aap bhaiya mujhe bataya bhi nahi. Gayetri complained to Balraj.
"Guss maat kar Gayetri mein tujhe kamhaka tension mein dal ne nahi chahata tha. Ye Balwant to nalayek hein , hamesha khud ko koi na koi mussibat mein dal dete hein. Balraj tried to assure his cousin sister.
After that, everyone went to their room for getting some sleep as they would have a busy day in tomorrow.

Everyone woke up early in the next morning as they had a busy schedule in front of them.
First sangeet function happened instead of Haldi as Harman still did not reached.
Despite initial reservation, the women of the house allowed men of the house to stay in the house.
Soon the function begins with Geet singing and soon Meher and Ash joined in the dance
Bole Chudiyan, Bole Kangna
Haai Main Ho Gayi Teri Saajna
Tere Bin Jiyo Naiyo Lag Da Main Te Margaiya

Le Jaa Le Jaa, Dil Le Jaa Le Jaa
Le Jaa Le Jaa, Soniye Le Jaa Le Jaa... (2)

Prem, Preet and Nihal joined the dance and start singing

Aah Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah
Bole Chudiyan, Bole Kangna
Haai Main Ho Gayi Teri Saajna... (2)
Tere Bin Jiyo Naiyo Lag Da Main Te Margaiya
Le Jaa Le Jaa, Soniye Le Jaa Le Jaa
Dil Le Jaa Le Jaa, Ho

Geet , Meher, Ash were starting singing and dancing again

Bole Chudiyan, Bole Kangna
Haai Main Ho Gaya Tera Saajna
Tere Bin Jiyo Naiyo Lag Da Main Te Marjaawa
Le Jaa Le Jaa, Soniye Le Jaa Le Jaa
Dil Le Jaa Le Jaa, Ho

Haai Haai Main Marjaawa Marjaawa Tere Bin
Ab To Meri Raatein Kat Ti Taare Gin Gin
Bas Tujhko Pukaara Kare, Meri Bindiya Ishaara Kare

Prem and Preet singing

Hoye, Lashkaara Lashkaara Teri Bindiya Ka Lashkaara
Aise Chamke Jaise Chamke Chaand Ke Paas Sitaara

Meher danced and started sing again

Oh Oh, Oh Oh Oh, Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh
Meri Paayal Bulaaye Tujhe, Jo Roothe Manaaye Tujhe
O Sajan Ji, Haan Sajan Ji
Kuch Socho, Kuch Samjho Meri Baat Ko

Prem and Preet danced in mixture of deshi and western style and definitely impressed the girls with their dancing skill

Bole Chudiyan, Bole Kangna
Haai Main Ho Gaya Tera Saajna
Tere Bin Jiyo Naiyo Lag Da Main Te Marjaawa
Le Jaa Le Jaa, Soniye Le Jaa Le Jaa
Dil Le Jaa Le Jaa, Ho
Apni Maang Suhaagan Ho, Sang Hameshaa Saajan Ho

Ash got near of Prem and sung

Aake Meri Duniya Mein Vaapas Na Jaana
Sehra Baandhke Maahi Tu Mere Ghar Aana

Prem got uncomfortable and quickly left from there.
Balraj and Lalit also joined in the dance and singing

Oye Soni Kitti Soni Aaj Tu Lagdi Ve
Bas Mere Saath Yeh Jodi Teri Sajdi Ve
Roop Aisa Suhaana Tera, Chaand Bhi Hai Deewana Tera

Gayetri, Teji initially blushed after seeing their husband's antics.
However, they also sung in good spirit

Jaa Re Jaa Oh Jhoothe Teri Galla Hum Na Maane
Kyoon Taarife Karta Hai Tu Humko Sab Kuch Jaane

Everyone started to sing and dance together

Bole Chudiyan, Bole Kangna
Haai Main Ho Gaya Tera Saajna

Tere Bin Jiyo Naiyo Lag Da Main Te Margaiya
Le Jaa Le Jaa, Soniye Le Jaa Le Jaa
Dil Le Jaa Le Jaa, Ho

Le Jaa Le Jaa, Soniye Le Jaa Le Jaa
Dil Le Jaa Le Jaa, Ho

Aaja Heeriye

Oh, Jaa Jaa Ranjhna

Oh, Aaja Heeriye

Jaa Jaa Ranjhna

Le Jaa Le Jaa, Dil Le Jaa Le Jaa
Le Jaa Le Jaa, Soniye Le Jaa Le Jaa... (2)

Lalit, and Balraj hugged each other, they were truly happy.

Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa, Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham
Na Judaa Honge Hum, Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham


The first song ended


Preet: First song thoda old aur traditional hogaya, hume kutch modern and recent karne chaiye.

Meher:Tumhare pass koi suggestion hein

Preet: Suggestion to hein, will you dance with me?
Meher accepted Preet offer.

"Music. Preet shouted

Preet started dancing on the floor and pulled Meher little closer to him

Na na na na...


Na na na na...

Duniya ko khud se alag karke
Rakh lunga tujhko main hug karke
I wanna say you
Main ta rehna sohniye
Tere naal naal ni

Both Preet and Meher felt something when they continued rto dance so clolse with each other. They both realized their was a nspark between them. Howevewr, they continued to dance.

Hey.. duniya ko khud se alag karke
Rakh lunga tujhko main hug karke
I wanna say you
Main ta rehna sohniye
Tere naal naal ni

Preet got himself lost in the eyes of Meher. It seemed like Meher had somehow casted a spell on him. Meher also observed that, she felt blushing ,she also felt somekinds of intense attraction towards him.

Pyaar vyaar wali baatein sab karke
Mar baitha, tujhko main love karke
I wanna say you
Main ta rehna sohniye
Tere naal naal ni

Kyunki!
Main tera boyfriend...
Main tera boyfriend...

Main tera boyfriend
Tu meri girlfriend
Oh mainu kehndi na na na na (x2)

Both of them recovered themselves soon as they did not want to create an awkward situation in front of their family.

Ruk te ja meri gal to sunn le
Oh mainu kehndi na na na na
Main tera boyfriend
Tu meri girlfriend
Oh mainu kehndi na na na na
Ruk te ja meri gal to sunn le
Oh mainu kehndi na na na na

Na na na na..

Preet's hand unknowingly touched the check of Meher's face .

Neeli neeli ankhiyon mein
Delhi wala kajra
Mainu invite karda
Tere kol kiven aavan
Tenu jhappi kiven paavan
Thought yeh excite karda (x2)

Meher felt something weird and exciting at the same time. She playfully pushed Preet little away ands started to dance on the floor.

Chala jaayega tu mujhe tang karke
Ditch waali baatein mere sang karke
I wanna say you main ni rehna sohneya
Tere naal naal ve

Soon Preet joined Meher in the dance floor

Kyunki!
Main tera boyfriend...
Main tera boyfriend...

Main tera boyfriend
Tu meri girlfriend
Oh mainu kehndi na na na na (x2)

Ruk te ja meri gal tu sunn le
Oh mainu kehndi na na na na
Main tera boyfriend
Tu meri girlfriend
Oh mainu kehndi na na na na
Ruk te ja meri gal tu sunn le
Oh mainu kehndi na na na na

Beep Beep!
Tenu vekhte hi gaddi maare
Cheekh cheekh!
Tera motion patakha
Tu hai sweet sweet!
Dil wajda hai like a drum beat beat beat!

Preet and Meher were dancing with perfect harmony . Everyone was impressed after seeing their chemistry on Dance floor.
Daljeet felt unhappy as she did not like Preet's comfort level with Meher.

High heels mein naache
Tu hai dangerous
Kudi tu lagdi hai model tu glamorous
Dress Gucci, diamond bracelet
Kinniya sohni aa par tu hai meri favorite
(O wanna be a boyfriend)

Ash felt angery. Despite hitting on Preet whole day, she also felt attracted towards Preet.
She always had a jealousy problem with Meher and her ego was hurt when Preet asked Meher for the dance not her.

Tenu pehchan di aan
Habbit main jaandi aan
Har kudi utte marda
Tera aitbaar nahi
Karna main pyaar nahi
Kyun mera picha karda

Listen!
Tenu pehchan di aan
Habbit main jaandi aan
Har kudi utte marda
Tera aitbaar nahi
Karna main pyaar nahi
Kyun mera picha karda
Meher was enjoying her dance with Preet very much. She had to confess to herself that she found Preet handsome and cute.
Karle tu feel mainu touch karke
Pyaar dikha de very much karke
Please ik vaari keh de
Rehna sohniye tere naal naal ni

Preet also found that free spirited girl very interesting. In Preet's opinion that cute girl had something unique which was pulling him towards her.

Kyunki!
Main tera boyfriend...
Main tera boyfriend...

Hey!
Tu mera boyfriend
Main teri girlfriend
Ab na karungi na na na na

Tu mera boyfriend
Main teri girlfriend
Ab na karungi na na na na

Ruk te ja meri gal ta sunn le
Ab na karungi... na na...

Main tera boyfriend
Tu meri girlfriend
Oh mainu kehndi na na na na
Ruk te ja meri gal tu sunn le
Oh mainu kehndi na na na na

O...
Na na na na...

Preet and Meher ended their dance in close proximity, they could both hear each other's heartbeat, however they were separated f5rom each other when they heard loud sounds of clippings.



"Aab hamare Prem bhaiya ek ganna gayega. Preet declared.


"Thick hain main gaoonga par aap sab ko bhi join karna padega . Prem told everybody.

Prem started singing. Everyone joined into the dance , they even pulled Heer into dancing.

Round de chak one
Round de chak
Round de chak
Alloma lao say] 4 times

Let's have some ranouk shaunak
Let's have some party now
Let's have some roula rappa

Round de chak hey
Round de chak

Heer was surprised to hear Prem's ability to sing songs from different generes so perfectly.

Let's have some dhol dhamaka
Let's call the dholi now
Let's have some matti tappa
Chalo chalo ji lak lachka lo
Chalo chalo ji mauj mana lo
Chalo chalo ji nach lo gaa lo
Pakad kisi ki wrist

Lalit and Gayetri were getting worried as Harman still did not come, however they too join the dance for the sake of kids.

And we twist
We twist
We twist
We twist
And we twist
In the mean time while dancing Heer lost her balance due to crowded condition and landed on Prem's chest and they both fell down on the geound.
Heer landed on the top of Prem. Prem and Heer both felt awkarad. However, they soon stand up and start dancing.

We twist
We twist
We twist
And we twist
We twist
We twist
We twist
And we twist
We twist
We twist
We twist

Heer gave Prem a silent thanks through her eye.

[Round de chak one
Round de chak
Round de chak
Alloma lao say] 4 times
Wicked shiked si, duniya chal le
Ther bhi chal le, balle balle
Ho gaayi
Haan ho gaayi
Oh hassi khusi mein, gham ki gaddi
Hawa mein uddi , voka talo
Kho gaayi
Haan Kho gaayi
Hooohooo..
Choodo choodo sab rone dhone
Choodo choodo dukh aage kone
Dekho dekho dil sone mone
Yeh life ki jist

Soon Lalit felt his mobile beep, when he opened his mobile he saw someone sent him an email .He opened the email it had some attachment

And we twist
We twist
We twist
We twist
And we twist
We twist
We twist
We twist
And we twist
We twist
We twist
We twist

The attachment contain some video files and pictures.

And we twist
We twist
We twist
We twist

Lalit did not know what he would do next after seeing the videos, documents and pictures he was shaken by core.



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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
Thank you for updating
Awesome too good very nice part
Love the whole dance sequence.
Premeer and meet scene were awesome
I'm guessing Harman got married to some other girl
Really excited to read next part
Eagerly waiting do update soon
Edited by preciousrose26 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
OMG lusshhh part 👍🏼
How many songs u added
Nice to read ...Enjoyed 🤗
Posted: 7 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: preciousrose26

Thank you for updating

Awesome too good very nice part
Love the whole dance sequence.
Premeer and meet scene were awesome
I'm guessing Harman got married to some other girl
Really excited to read next part
Eagerly waiting do update soon

Thanks for the review.
I am glad that you like the dance scee.
Next chapter will be a major turning point in the story.
Posted: 7 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: sadiaharshiti

OMG lusshhh part 👍🏼

How many songs u added
Nice to read ...Enjoyed 🤗

3 songs.
Thanks for the review and I am hoping that you will enjoy the next chapters also.

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