RishBala SS : Zarir (Completed - 02/02 - P: 60 + Epilogue - P: 63)

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Maangeet

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Posted: 7 years ago

#251

lovely update superb waiting for their marriage

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Aaniya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
Res !

Sorry Maithu..
for the late Unress..

was held up in some personal things :(

unres !

coming to both the updates..

Part-A

wow.. man.. I loved this part..
its lovely.. but being lovely too it raised many
Different questions..
one is ofcourse on Rk's intentions..
cause we know.. he is Rk..
hus agendas can never be straight !

so, He Proposed her.. so blunt proposal..
hahaa..
i thought She will Faint ( given the shocked state she was in)

even i was shocked too..

but the Part & Rk's lines were awesome..

loved it..

thankyou so much for pm :)

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Aaniya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#253

part-B

superb Dear..

hmm.. after Part*A we were desperately waiting for Madhu's reaction..
and whats her reaction..

hahaa.. the thoughts.. i loved it Again..
the series of their thoughts..
its serious ofcourse.. the Situation they were in .. its serious..
but i like the fun elements u added thereof..

aww.. Rk.. she is ur parents choice..
and hopefully urs too..
now Only the culprits remained !

lets see what Rishbala do together !

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Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: Hend_Refai
does that mean she accepted his proposal?

Yup dear!

She has accepted his proposal after all her thinking! Heee

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Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: aishu007
Nice update maithu...
Their thoughts part was funny... Both have opposite thoughts..lol..

Rk want to punish the culprits behind their parents death & also want to give madhu a happy life.. That's why he proposed her..
She accepted at last..

Waiting for the next part..
Thanks for the pm..

Thank you so much dear!

Happy that you find the clash of thoughts funny LOL

Yup dear! You got the point on why he proposed her ! ;-)

Finally she accepted! With all her thoughts, I though a new part is needed! Hehehehe

Thank you once again!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: Clara20
Hey awesome update..read both parts..
So rk proposed madhu coz she is the girl his parents chosen for him..
And madhu also agreed waiting for next

Thanks buddy!

Glad you liked it and being here to share your view!

Yup! That's the reason he proposed! ;-)

Will be updating on time!

See you!

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Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: magicalmirage
Part 8A
Nice update
They hide from each other to avoid the awkwardness
I like rks frankness...direct shot...great rk
Going to read 8,B
thanks for pm

Thanks for reading and commenting dear!

Glad you liked this part!

They are so like kids to play hide and seek LOL

Happy you liked RK's direct goal! LOL

Thank you!

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Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: magicalmirage
Part 8B
Awesome update
I like Thier trail of thoughts
It's awesome
And both are worried for ayaan
At last she said yes...
Please update soon
Thanks for pm

Thank you for replying separately for each parts dear!

Happy you liked this part too!

Ayaan! The centre piece of their relationship! ;-)

Finally she said it! And that too at the end of the 2nd day! :-|

Thank you once again!

See you on Friday with the next part!

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Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Awesome update
Loved it
Their trail of thoughts both are different in thinking except for Ayaan
Hope they get to know that they were supposed to get married to each other
Madhu accepted the proposal.
Thanks for the PM dear

Thank you dear!

Glad you loved it!

RK knows that MAdhu is the girl but it's just Madhu who doesn't know about her parent's wish ;-)

She will know it soon!

Thank you for reading!

Keep on reading!

See you!