Don't Go Where I Cannot Follow - ShiVika TS

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Not too happy with the ongoing track. So thought of writing something on old separation track.


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Prologue


Devastated, he held on to his knees, his head down. The sham was finally broken. The truth finally found its appearance.


The truth of his birth.


The truth of the illegitimate child of Oberoi family.

The truth of the whole fiasco managed by Anika, the woman he loved and who loved him equally back, probably a little more than him.


Sacrificing him for him, she had stepped out of his life, only to protect him from something that could just snatch his belief on himself.


"Shivaay." She whispered, trying to take off his hands that were covering his face by then. He could not meet her eyes. Everything just played like a movie before his eyes, every thing he had said to her that night, everything he did to her. The guilt was just too much to take.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res😳😳
My jadli wala Unres 😛😛

The teaser is really nice.⭐️⭐️
I wanted to read something like this. Infact, I was amongst those who wanted Shivaay to be illegitimate. I could make an awesome angsty track.😉😉
Now, I would be getting it here.🥳🥳


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic concept
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the teaser...hope you will update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This has always been a fantasy. Bring it on
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice prologue...
Eagerly waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I very interesting title, made me very curious to read ahead
Loved the prologue, so shivaay has found out the truth but how ?
DO continue soon please

Much love!
.Saumya.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Intresting teaser yar...
I really wanted to read something like that...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting Teaser, I am hooked.
Do continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it can't wait wait to read more

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