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AAnkhon Ki Gustakhiyaan Season V- The Exploration

Part 3

Omkara was kicking himself; he should have listened to Ri and woken up on time. He was now sitting in the bathroom in Bareilly, all soaped up without any water! He had just poured the last mug on himself when he stopped hearing the tap.

Gauri, love, please help' he shouted.

What is it? Hum busy hain?' Gauri replied back. She presumed Jatadhari is calling her for some mischief.

Gauri, paani lao, I still need to finish my bath, the tap has stopped running' Omkara pleaded.
Gauri couldn't control her laughter. Good, now Hippie will finally know the value of water'. She thought.
She had spare water in the kitchen which she didn't need, they were leaving Bareilly after breakfast anyways. So she carried a bucket over to the bathroom.

I am coming in' she warned him lest she catches him in a compromising position.

High time.' He was annoyed, soap had gone into his eyes and he couldn't see anything.

She peeped in, shyly. He was sitting on the stool in his boxers, all soaped up, eyes closed, empty mug in his hand. He made a funny but sensuous sight. This is the first time, she had seen him in this glory, the last few times when they were intimate, was in the dark. She tip-toed into the bathroom so as not to get her saree wet, to put the bucket closer to him. She turned around to go, when he caught her arm, Not so soon Mrs. Oberoi. Pour it, I can't see anything'.

She swallowed hard and moved behind him, took water in the mug and poured over his head. He washed his eyes. She then poured more water over his shoulder. That's when she noticed it.
Omkara-Gauri' a tattoo, both names drawn beautifully in cursive hindi, intertwined, a work of art was staring at her. It was etched on his left shoulder-blade. That she was surprised would be an under-statement. She touched it, caressing it with love.

Yeh?' she looked at him questioningly.

He understood, This is my wedding gift to you my love, that day you were shy so I didn't ...I wanted to have you very close to me, all the time, so I got your name etched , just like you put mine in your mehendi' he continued.

She bent down and kissed him there, 'It is beautiful, did it hurt? You shouldn't have to give so much pain to yourself' she had tears in her eyes. She was very touched by his gesture, the man who couldn't bear to have her name next to his on paper, had now etched it on his own body! She kept kissing him there again and again caressing her hands on his shoulders and back, as if in a trance.

Omkara was getting aroused. Unknowingly, his innocent titli was playing havoc on his senses. He wanted to take it slow with her, but she was making it impossible for him. He knew that love-making was something very new for her and any amount of biology books or romantic novels would not be enough to prepare her for it. Although she expressed her desire every now and then, she was still shy with him, when it came to opening up completely or baring it all.

But how was he supposed to control himself, if she was being like this? When he couldn't bear it anymore, he pulled her on the front; she was now on his lap, getting all wet.

Omkara' she screeched. But couldn't say anything further, as her mouth was enveloped in his.

Jal jal ke dhuan ho rahe hum, nas nas mein nasha, bheega hain hum
Jismo ki dabi aarzoo hain, mar jaye teri bahon mein hum

She took the mug and poured more water over him, but he was unstoppable, not now. They played with each, teased, touched, her saree was drenched and covered by his soapy lather by now and he was playing havoc on her senses, touching her everywhere. His bare body, his eyes, his touch, his smell, everything was intoxicating her, telling her what she did to him, how she made him feel, out of control, obsessed...

Aaj sharm se koi keh de naa aaye yahan, chune se tere o janeman hota hain junoon , deewnapan, nasha...
Jal jal ke dhuan ho rahe hum, nas nas mein nasha, bheega hain hum
Jismo ki dabi aarzoo hain, mar jaye teri bahon mein hum

He carried a drenched Gauri out of the bathroom and made her stand next to the wall, as she needed support. She was still in her drenched light beige saree, looking lost, eyes closed. He drifted away from her, wore his robe, took a towel, came near her and whispered,' Change, nahin to sardi lag jayegi. You stay here, I will go outside' and he left. She was shocked at her own state; she was wanting more, was it right? Yes, was the only answer she got. She wanted to reach the depths of these new found emotions with him. She quickly gathered her nerves and got ready for Mumbai. They locked up the house and boarded the chopper.

They had a heart to heart in the chopper which was another good way of distracting Gauri the chatter-box. He told her how he felt relieved that she thought of him as her hope and saviour. But he knew that he was not there for her when she needed him most, it was only her courage and intelligence that had got her out of very dangerous and tricky situations. He wanted to promise her that this will never happen again. He could never live with it, he was already finding it difficult to deal with this fact, of what she had to go through with Kaali, of what could have happened if things went the other way, and that he was not there, for her. And he was feeling very angry and vengeful towards Kaali and his brothers. I know' she said, that's why I didn't want to tell you all the details but you insisted in knowing. Gauri caressed his hair and spoke lovingly.

This morning she had decided to put the Kaali incident away in the past forever and that's why she was back to her old cheerful self. Omkara had woken up in the middle of the night with another nightmare,' Gauri' he had shrieked in his sleep. She had tended to him all night like a child whilst he cried. Although he wouldn't remember much this morning, she recalled all of it. I am sorry Gauri, I am so sorry, I could have lost you' he kept asking for her forgiveness in his delirium. A fear had made home in his heart. And she never wanted to see him in that state again, so she decided to put it away for both their sake. She will have to balance out his pessimism with her optimism, that's why they were soulmates. Whatever happened then, for her, it was a boon, since she met Omkara and he married her, whatever the circumstances, even if he did not accept her all his life after that, she was still content, her Shankarji had saved her. She kept filling this beautiful thought in his head all along the chopper ride, that it was adverse conditions, but they met and they were together now. He was at peace; she always knew how to get him there.

When they reached Oberoi Mansion, there was a sombre atmosphere. Everyone had gathered in the living room, Tej and Shakti were looking very serious and Shivaay was sitting with his head down, looking at the floor, tapping his feet. Anika, Rudra and Bhavya stood in attention position behind him.
They came and took Daadi's blessings and then of all the elders and were surprised to see Divya Ma there. Looking at the mood, Gauri couldn't help asking, Sab theek hain? Aap sab log itne gambhir kyun lag rahe hain?' She was getting worried now.

Tumse hume ye ummeed nahin thi Gauri' Tej looked at her.

Gauri was shocked, what had she done?' She looked at Omkara who looked angry, ready to burst at his father for scolding his chirayya. She held his hand stopping him.

Haan, Gauri, bade bhai sahib sahi keh rahe hein' Shakti added.

Gauri now looked at Anika, then Shivaay seeking some answers. But they had a complete poker face on.

Bachcha, aisa bhi koi karta hain? Why didn't you tell us before?' It was Shivaay's turn.
Gauri ran to him and hugged Shivaay, tears showing through her eyes now,' Please bade bhaiyaa, bataiye humse kya galti ho gayi? Please, humse aur nahin raha ja raha'. Omkara also looked very worried.

Gauri gave Omkara a glance asking if knew anything at all, but he was clueless. Whilst they were trying to comfort each other through their eyes, AniRuvya came forward and screamed,

SURPRISE'...everyone clapped and laughed.

And then Gauri was enveloped in a hug by all three of them, she was already in Shivaay's arms and now three more pair of arms had engulfed her. Omkara was feeling left out, so he joined the party by hugging them from the outside.

Sorry bachcha, we just had to open it' Shivaay held an open envelope in his hand.

Gauri gave him a quizzical look. It is your result. You have passed with flying colours a distinction!' he gave the envelope to Omkara who looked in it and gave her a bone crushing hug with a 1000 watt smile on his face.

Divya Ma came and hugged her; Gauri in turn touched her feet with tears of joy in her eyes.' I am so happy to have you as my student Gauri. You have made me proud.' Daadi and Jhanvi also expressed their pride and joy.

Shakti came forward in all this commotion and offered another envelope to the newly married couple,

Omkara, Gauri yeh humari taraf se tumhare liye'

Yeh kya hain chote papa' Omkara enquired.

Woh hum decide hi kar rahe the ki honeymoon ke liye tumhe kahan bheje ki Gauri ka result bhi aa gaya. Ab toh double celebration banta hain. So this is a holiday package for you both to the Swiss Alps' Jhanvi Ma added.

Omkara, although happy that he was getting to escape with his chiraiyaa, rolled his eyes thinking, God knows what obsession Indians have with honeymoon in Swiss Alps?' He had been there before, but he was happy that this time Gauri would be accompanying him. Just then he remembered something which he was waiting to announce just after all the wedding functions were over.

He walked to his room and came back with yet another envelope.

I also have a surprise for Gauri and everyone.' He announced.

Everyone listened intently; this was turning out to be a really special day after all.

We received this invitation last week when the wedding festivities were on, that's why I didn't mention it yet. Gauri had joined crafts classes when in Berlin and one of her works was selected for the Biennale in Italy this year. Since this is Gauri's first exhibition, I would really love for her to attend. I was going to book the tickets this week, but now we can extend the Swiss tickets and go there after the honeymoon' Omkara informed everyone with pride brimming through his eyes, all the time looking at his love.

Everyone applauded, Anika whistled, Rudy hugged his little Chul Bhabhi and Daadi kissed Gauri on the forehead.

Humein nahin pata tha ki artist Kara ke saath artist Ri hume mil rahi hain. Khush kar ditta puttar. Arre koi inki nazar utaro. Mere bachche kitne sayane hain' Daadi felt her heart will burst out of the chest.
Shivaay was really feeling so happy, he had tears in the corner of his eyes,' Yes Om, I will get my PA to extend the tickets and make other arrangements as well.'

The joyful gathering scattered when lunch was announced and everyone met again at the dining table. Gauri had not yet had the chance to thank her Jatadhari for the sweet gesture of taking her to the exhibition, so she held his hand at the dining table for some time caressing his palm and reminding him of how much she loved him.

Omkara knew he was in for a treat, first in Switzerland with his chiraiyya and then Italy! He couldn't wait and had started planning for it already in his head. Gauri was looking forward to exploring her new found intense desires and passion with him in new locales, just the two of them, together.

END

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super superb superb...
best part was that tattoo..
its so sweet nd loving..
very well written..

That was wonderful loved it so much.

Finally caught up with this. Love love love! You put a lot of effort into your writing and we can see that. Look forward to reading more.

superb

That's beautiful

Bechara Om..pani do ghante..par woh bhi nahi mila...but due to this he got some time with his chiraiyya..loved how she helped him taking the bath...the tattoo made me feel like Aww..!! Finally Omkara is aware of the truth..he's so guilty and disturbed..but his titli reassured him it wasn't his fault...she made him realized how he saved her life..and finally he's convinced whatever happened wasn't done by him... Gauri passed her exams..everyone is so proud of her..and honeymoon is on the way..yippie..

It gets better and better with each part

WOW!