Raaz behind raaz - *on track SS* 3/12

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Raaz behind raaz - on track SS


I am trying to write this on track ss for first time. Hope you guys like it. Not proof read.

Part 1:

He stood still by the side of pool like the entire world has stopped working. The darkness around him didn't bother him as much as the darkness in his heart suffered him. His brave heart which had dared every single difficulty against his family was fearing his ability to defend for the first time. His soul was shaking at the brutality of facts presented before him and the uncertainity of future which lied ahead. Closing his eyes and taking a deep breathe felt like a soothing luxury for his tormented brain.


When his eyes gently reopened again, he could see the surface of pool reflect light. The light of his life had illuminated the area as she entered. "What happened shivaay? What is wrong?" asked annika while having her fingers trace the lapel of his coat.


He wanted to hug her to his death. He wanted to scream out loud what was bothering him to her. He wanted to cure himself of this immolating raaz .
But...


How could he when it was all about her?


Years of protective instinct had trained him to be a pro in masking his feelings and fears. "Nothing " he said evading her eyes.

"You know... you can lie to me. But not your kanji eyes" she said moving her hands over his heart , silently communicating to him that "i have more than one source my hubby, don't lie to me"

He vividly remembered their initial time together where she had cursed him saying she needs the manual that came along with him so that she could understand him. He remembered their journey and how she had understood his eyes' talk and saved rudra. How far have they travelled that now she knows his silence too?

Breaking from his paining thoughts his mind had now taken a blessed stroll through their nostalgia lane. The shivika lane. There was a unknown soothing effect it gave him. His brain slightly relaxed and his lips eased up. Full of gratitude , he said "I used to fear who would take care of my family in my absence , but now with you, seeing how you saved rudra that fear has vanished that even if something happens to me my family would be safe with you"

"What? Why would something happen to you? Why are you saying this? If something happens to you i wouldn't be alive shivaay. Do you know how many times i died when you were removing rudra's bomb? I..." her shaking frame was gently enveloped in his protective arms and there she was in the safest place in this earth. Stroking her back, he gently calmed her.

"Annika.." he feebly asked

"Hmm..." she replied drowning in his arms and with ears on his torso.

"Would you be my side and be supportive of me , even if i had done something wrong? Even if i am wrong?" he asked gulping his worst fear of his life.

"My shivaay can never be wrong. Whatever he does, he does for a reason . Even if he is hypothetically wrong i would always be with him and support him. No matter what" she said while gently pressing her lips on his coat right above the coat that, it received its message. Shivaay tightened his hold on her for symbolically she had just reassured him that he need not be afraid against the greatest fear of his life. But would she be ok when she comes in light with the brutal facts?

"Can you now tell me what is going on?" She asked with her ears on his heart and fingers playing with the button of his lapel. He just thought about the seriousness of the issue and flipped his urge to tell her. He moved his eyes towards the pool while she had lifted her eyes just to see him. "Ok then... tell me when you feel like saying. But remember i would always support you no matter what" she said.

Shivaay hugged her with all his might because words failed not his emotions.

"I swear annika. I would fix everything of the past for the best future we would have" shivaay vowed in his heart looking at the pool. A vow with water, which has always been a special element in their life as a witness .

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Shivaay started walking in the halls of oberoi mansion while remembering the conversation he had with his bros, before om left for Germany.
Before a day,

"Do you guys trust me?"

"We always trust you shivaay. Just tell us what is going on. Why is svetty in here?" asked omru

Shivaay started explaining that svetty has blackmailed him with factory raaz

"I just can't believe our empire has begun with unjust money" yelled om while rudra held him back and said "how can you not trust our family. Give them a chance to prove their innocence. Are you really gonna believe svetlana more than our family? Remember last time what happened with gauri?" Yelled rudra surprising both shivaay and om.

"What rudra is saying is right. We should fight for our family first om. We should fight to find truth." said shivaay. "Rudra, am sorry. I am there to fight against svetlana for our family. But... how did you get so matured all of a sudden?" asked om confused.

"Because i learnt my lesson of what happens when you jump to conclusions recently" rudra said while his mind was full of soumya and bhavya. Shaking away his head as if it would wade of thoughts , he said "concentrate on bhaiyya om. We are here to discuss plan"

Nodding , om started looking at shivaay. "I am going to shift your property shares to svetlana. To make her believe as if she is winning us" said shivaay and started explaining the plan.

" we are there with you bhai... " said om and extended his palm . " all for one and one for all" swore all the obros declaring that no botox beauty can break them.

But little did they know it was only half the truth.

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Shivaay finally reached the destination of his walk. He reached Tej singh oberoi's room. He saw Jhanvi singh oberoi busy in analysing architectural designs for Om's art gallery.

"Badi ma" he called her feebly

"Haan shivaay. Come in. Which plan do you think would suit om's art gallery?" asked jhanvi without looking at the turmoil in shivaay's face.

"Badi ma ... i want your help" said shivaay worried that it finally awoke the concerned side of jhanvi.

"What happened shivaay? Why do you sound worried?" asked jhanvi concerned.

"Badi ma... do you trust me ?" asked shivaay

"Yes shivaay. Ofcourse i trust you. You are no different from Om for me.Now tell me what is troubling you" asked jhanvi

"I want you to fight in front of whole family to make Om as the chairman as oberoi industries" said shivaay shocking jhanvi.

"What? What are you talking about shivaay? I have never wanted to go against om's wishes. I have never been concerned about om becoming a businessman. Om is a true artist. Its his passion. Business is your passion. You are the rightful heir for oberoi industries. Why would you think i would do that? Why do you want me to do that?" panicked jhanvi.
"Badi ma, i am doing this for..." gaped shivaay shocking jhanvi to no limits. He finally explained the other half of truth, to her while hiding the mills raaz.

"I still can't believe this" said jhanvi shook to her very core.

"Can you please help me in this badi ma" asked shivaay almost pleading.

"Don't worry shivaay. I would help you in this. But You remember, you have offered me a promise that you would do anything i have asked?" questioned jhanvi

"Yes badi ma" said shivaay clueless.

"Take care of yourself and anika wherever you go. Never forget to be in contact with me. You are no less than om to me shivaay. And am doing this only because i want your happiness to be preserved. This is the promise i want you to do." Said jhanvi tears brimming in her eyes.

"Am sorry badi ma... but i have no other go..." gulped

shivaay while fumbling in emotions.
He slowly discussed the grand plan what needs to be done for the royal VANWAAS .

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Ps. This was done as a demo. Based on response next part would be updated tomorrow. If no proper response i won't write further.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow i am so wanting shivaay to take jhanavi help
i dont want her character to be ruined
please do continue
loved this
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Do continue soon and please complete the story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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WOW this is neatly written and very well put👏👏
so there are 2 raaz...this reminds me of my ever lasting thought of a plan within a plan😆😆


and Shark Singh Oberoi is telling half the truth to every member...it reminded me of when he found out about pinky😉😉

i love it...curious to know wht is the 2nd raaz exactly and wht is his plan?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is great, I am excited
Interesting start
It's going to be very emotional but i am ready, it's going to be the best
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome
I too think that OmRu knows about this plan of Shivaay
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Seems interesting.
Continue next part. Want to know Shivaays plan😊

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