Pt 21 Updated Pg 146: Predator Turns Prey Advni FF - Page 110

This part will soon be updated on wattpad.

This part will soon be updated on wattpad.

This part will soon be updated on wattpad.

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Hi All

Okay the next part is out, TBH this part is all over the place IMO, hope u like it. There are a few good convos, tho. But things are now moving forward to include other sub plots and moving away from Advay Chandini, so please forgive me the story feels a little jarred, are bringing in new characters into the narrative seamlessly is proving to be a little challenging

TBH i havent proof read, so typos etc, please forgive

Hope you like it, do comment and let us know what you make fo this update,

❤️ Chitra

Originally posted by: ChitraGS

yes filmy just working on that , this had to be done first, but i still have to write a small part...will do it later tonite or first thing tomorrow morning😃

ok will wait no issues

oh Chitra you are thinking of Karva Chauth I am elated

Amazing update. Their conversations seem so real and the childishness that you bring out in Chandni is so cute. And Advay, as usual, is fantastic. Such a good hubby 😊

hope you can update the next part soon

I really admire you for writing two amazing stories simultaneously

wow this thread is about to end soon