OS~ Vanvas (ft Oberoi Family)

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"Biggest breaking news of the decade. Insider spills beans on Kalyani Mills' secret. To know more, stay connected with us as we reveal every detail on our 9 O' clock news.

The whole Oberoi Mansion sat frozen as the news scroll appeared on the TV screen incessantly. The flash news increased the heart beat of the every Oberoi present. Daadi was a minute away from fainting hearing all the speculations made. Tej, Shakti and Shivay were contacting all possible sources they know to understand what the heck is happening in the media and who is trying to tarnish the image of their family name. Jhanvi and Pinky were busy accusing each other's husbands, while Annika and Gauri were on their foot trying to maintain every family member stable. Rudra sat in a corner brooding with a straight faced Omkara beside him analyzing the situation.

"Shivay, did you speak to MD of the channel? asked Tej even when his own fingers were busy trying the number of another known person for help.

"Bade papa, he is not ready to talk to me. His secretary is saying that news is from reliable source and he is not ready for any negotiation.

"What bloody reliable source? Who is that? And what evidence do they hold? Didn't we settle matters with Svethlana already by giving her 100 crores? Who can leak the information now? said Shakti.

"I don't know papa. I don't understand anything. No one is ready to talk to us or help us. It is like we are cornered.

Shivay looked around the living room for a minute and his heart felt like it is losing the last bit of its strength. His whole family looked devastated. What had come upon them?

Shivay looked at Gauri walking towards Omkara and Rudra with a glass of water. He saw Omkara patting back of a weeping Rudra and making him drink water. A brother, they protected hiding in the cocoon of their love was now facing the harshness of reality and his older brothers had no clue how to protect him.

"Shivay.. he heard Annika call him.

Shivay needed her support. He wanted her to assure him everything will be alright. He might be Shivay Singh Oberoi, but she is his real support.

"Annika... he whispered taking her hand in his.

"Everything will be alright, Shivay. Don't worry. She assured and Shivay was almost convinced that everything will be fine.

"Bhavya he said as he saw their last hope walk inside with a dejected face. "What did Commissioner say?

"Bhaiya, commissioner sir said he cannot disclose anything to me as I am not part of the mission. She said helplessly/ "But I asked one of my friends to collect every possible information. He will contact us soon.

"Shivay sir. Called Khanna as he rushed inside panicking.

"What is it? asked Shivay alarmed

"Sir, Khanna hesitated for a moment. "Police Commissioner is here.

As if on cue, commissioner walked inside accompanied by five other policemen.

"Commissioner sir, how can I help you? asked Shivay trying hard to maintain composure.

Commissioner looked at the whole family gathered around them before turning his gaze to Shivay.

"I am sure you are aware about what is happening here. Said Commissioner

"How are we supposed be aware, Mr.Commissioner when no one is ready to reveal anything? asked a slightly agitated Tej

"Well, Mr.Oberoi I can help you with that. Said Commissioner with hint of pride. Not every day someone gets to be involved in case with Oberois that makes the best case of their career. "Tej Singh Oberoi you are under arrest for intentionally causing fire in Kalyani Mills for insurance money.

"What? asked Tej Perplexed

"What are you talking about commissioner? How is that possible? "Asked Shivay panicked. It was his worst fear coming to life.

"Why is that not possible, Mr.Oberoi? With proper evidence we can arrest culprit even after years for justice to be served. Smirked commissioner

"Don't say that word! fumed Tej at calling him a culprit

"Why? Mr.Tej. That is the truth. Said commissioner

"Who is culprit and who is not is decided by the court and not by you. Warned Shivay

"Sure. But in order to take him to court at least let us arrest him first. Chuckled commissioner before ordering his subordinate to handcuff Tej

"Ek minute.. warned Shivay as he stood between Tej and the commissioner. "What evidence are you talking about? How sure are you about its authenticity?

"Oh! That we are very sure, Mr.Oberoi. Because we received it from a trustworthy source.

"Ah! Who is this trustworthy source everyone is talking about? asked sickened Shivay.

"It is me. This time the voice came from his left and Shivay looked at his younger brother horrified.

"Om... he whispered.

Omkara felt all eyes on him after the revelation. However, he stood confidently with his head held up straight.

"I gave the proof to police and media. He declared

"Oh My Mata!! exclaimed Pinky

"Omkara??? I can't believe this. Declared Shakti

"How could you, Om? asked a disheartened Jhanvi

"What were you thinking, Omkara? Have you gone mad? asked Tej

"No, Mr.Oberoi. I have not gone mad. It is you all who have gone mad. Mad with the power of money. continued Omkara with a determined look. What did you all think, that you can hide the truth with money and power?

"Om, there is some misunderstanding. We can talk about it, Okay? It is inside the family. What is the need to involve police? asked Shivay

"Of course there is need to involve police, Shivay. Do you have any idea how many lives were destroyed by the act of this man? he asked pointing to Tej.

"Om, I...

"No, Mr.Oberoi, please. I have no more energy for your stupid excuses. A sinner should be punished for his sins and I will make sure that you get what you deserve. I am the one who gave the tapes with proof and I will testify against you anywhere.

"How dare you, Omkara? Before Tej could charge his son, policemen held him back and pulled his hands.

"You can continue your family drama after we leave, Oberois. Declared commissioner. "We are taking Mr.Tej. I would advise you to better contact your lawyers instead of glaring at us. He said looking at Shivay

Every person looked at retrieving figure of Tej with feeling of dread and misery except Omkara. Omkara was devoid of any emotion as he saw his father being arrested.

Once Tej was out of sight all eyes turned to Omkara. Without even a blink of uncertainty, Omkara met eyes of each member of his house bravely. His wife immediately hurried to his side with a worried expression indirectly indicating that no matter what happens she will be by his side.

"Are you happy now, Om? " questioned Shivay. "After all you had your revenge from your father.

"What are you talking about, Shivay? It is not about revenge. Mr.Oberoi has wronged and he deserves to be punished. Reasoned Om. He was in a belief that his elder brother will definitely listen to him rationally instead of judging him futilely.

"How sure are you that bade papa has done all this, huh?

"Shivay, I saw the video that Svethlana possessed with my own two eyes. It was crystal clear that Mr.Oberoi was the man who lit the factory.

"No there was no image of him actually lighting the factory. Argued Shivay

"Really, Shivay! We are not kids, we all know Mr.Oberoi is capable of it.

"You know Svethlana better Om she was only trying to spoil the Oberoi name. Said Shivay

"Yeah! If you are so sure that Mr.Oberoi isn't the culprit then why did you give her money to shut her mouth? And moreover Shivay, what is with the Oberoi name, huh? You are talking as if we are some royalty. The very base of this name has started with destruction of thousand lives.

"NOO... shouted Shivay looking at his brother dangerously. "Don't go there.

Everyone in the house, especially Omkara was taken aback by the look in Shivay's eyes. Because it was not their Shivay, it was SSO, THE Shivay Singh Oberoi.

"Shivay...

Shivay cut off Om from speaking holding his hand in a stop sign. "Today you have hurt me so much, Om. He said. "You know what this family means to me. This family is the life of everyone I hold dear to me. We are Oberois, famous Obros. He chuckled painfully. " And you destroyed all within a second. You ruined everything that was built over years. Dreams of dadaji, hard work of bade papa and papa and most importantly my pride. You have broken me today, Om

Om looked at his brother staggered. He was aware what Oberoi name meant to Shivay. However, the world knows that Omkara holds to truth with as much passion as Shivay holds to his naam, khoon and kandaan ideology.

"Truth, justice and equality will prevail only if the sinner is punished. And for me the ultimate god is truth. I will never support immoral act even if it is for family and you know that. I have no regret in sending Mr.Oberoi to jail. Declared Omkara. "Moreover, I really don't care about Oberoi name. I just...

"Of Course. Said Shivay in infamous SSO son. "Of Course you don't, Om. After all you are not an Oberoi.

The whole house skipped a heart beat for a moment when those cruel words came out from Shivay's mouth.

"Shivay... shouted Daadi. Her calling him by name instead of Billu was itself is a proof that she was angry at her grandson

Shivay realized the impact of his words as he saw his badi maa fall on the floor breaking down. Rudra walked towards his bhaiya in trance to observe his expression as he didn't want to believe what words that left his mouth.

"What do you mean, Shivay? asked Om reaching his brother in two long strides

Shivay kept staring at the ground speechless cursing him for the heartless slip of tongue.

"Om.. called Annika as she reached between the brothers. "He is just blabbering. Don't take him seriously. Gauri, take him to room. She instructed to her dumbstruck devrani.

"Bhabhi, please... said Omkara pushing Annika aside. "Shivay look at me. He said. "Into my eyes, Shivay. He instructed. "And repeat what you said.

"Om, I just.. Shivay said still not meeting Om's eyes.

"Truth, only the truth. What did you mean? asked Omkara

"Om, I am sorry. Apologized Shivay holding his brothers shoulder. Tears dropped down unabashedly from the elder Oberoi's eyes

"Not an Oberoi, huh? he asked

"Om, please..

"It is true after all. Omkara Tej Singh Oberoi ka najaiz beta hai? he asked

"Omkara listen... Annika said as she saw Omkara walk behind in slow strides defeated.

"Not an Oberoi, huh? " he kept repeating.

"Om, I am sorry. I didn't mean it. I just...

"No, Shivay. I know exactly what you meant. Not any more word needed. I understand when you said that I am not an Oberoi. Not an Oberoi, huh? With that final word Omkara marched into his room followed by his worried wife.

Gauri looked at her husband with tears rolling down her eyes. She was helpless looking at his state. He was shattered, extremely shattered. It was evident from his bloodshot eyes that he was hurt beyond words and damaged beyond repair.

"Omkaraji... she called.

He was dumping their belongings in a bag as if in trance and didn't even hear her calling him.

"Not an Oberoi, huh? he kept repeating to himself

"Omkaraji... she again called. When he was still continuing with whatever he was doing like a robot, Gauri walked to his side and touched his elbow.

"Huh!! he turned to look at her. For a moment the man who she has only seen as epitome of strength looked like a lost baby.

"Omkaraji, you should talk to...

"Gauri.. his voice sounded loud enough to make her cringe and Gauri took a step backwards scared. Never has he ever used that tone on her, not even when he hated her like toxin.

"Pack your things, Gauri. He said determined

"But, Omka...

"I. SAID.PACK. he punctured each word with gritted teeth.

The whole house was frozen in an image with which Omkara has left them before sauntering to his room. Daadi and Pinky were sitting on the floor on either side of Jhanvi crying. Shakti stood beside them trying to absorb the situation. Rudra was held by a weeping Bhaiya as it looked like he needed a support even to stand. Shivay stood in the middle like a statue beside Annika who was demanding her husband to resolve the situation.

"Not an Oberoi. Said Omkara to no one particular followed by a humourless chuckle. "So, obviously neither me nor my wife deserves to stay amongst the Oberois. We are leaving. We have not taken anything that doesn't belong to us, feel free to check after we are gone.

Omkara held the hand of his wife as he walked out of the Mansion he used to call his home without sparing anyone a second look as he knew else he will not be able to carry out this painful decision.


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*Disappearing after writing this*

Not sure how you guys will take this shot

I wanted to try out on this concept before anyone beats me to it. Hope you all liked it.

I have a very strong feeling that it is Omkara who is going to go on 'Vanvas'

Lets see what happens in the show

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tasnimrodela thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Whereas people say it's Shivaay who is go on Vanvaas I always believed it's gonna be Omkara..he's the epitome of truth..he would never support anything, anyone over truth...it's so beautifully written..the characterization was on point..ShivKara's clash always gave me goosebumps..I'm just too afflicted with the thought of vanvaas..take a bow girl...
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Whereas people say it's Shivaay who is go on Vanvaas I always believed it's gonna be Omkara..he's the epitome of truth..he would never support anything, anyone over truth...it's so beautifully written..the characterization was on point..ShivKara's clash always gave me goosebumps..I'm just too afflicted with the thought of vanvaas..take a bow girl...


initially I thought it could be Shivay with him being pillar of family and all, but now I don't think it will happen... Omkara has always been sach ka boyfriend so it should be him

Vanvas is inevitable as it is basic plot, however I just hope they don't forget the basic nature of characters

If RiKara go on vanvas it will be interesting to see them support each other
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Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie



initially I thought it could be Shivay with him being pillar of family and all, but now I don't think it will happen... Omkara has always been sach ka boyfriend so it should be him

Vanvas is inevitable as it is basic plot, however I just hope they don't forget the basic nature of characters

If RiKara go on vanvas it will be interesting to see them support each other

Oberois ki lanka tab jalegi jab inme se koyi ek vanvaas jayega still give me shudders..whenever Omkara was presented as sach ka boyfriend my belief on him going to vanvaas just aggravated..but now I can't stay still with my belief as the basic plot of IB is totally changed...I just hope I really hope they send Omkara to vanvaas..want Gauri to support him..their relation has much more to explore rather than saying ek jhaap to Svetty and calming an angry Ru..
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You're on a roll, Liz! 😆 Keep'em coming!
The drama here kept me on the edge...Om's repetition of 'not an Oberoi' was really hurting. Kudos to this wonderful piece!

I was of the mind that it will be Shivaay going on vanvaas but your story makes sense too! After all Om is sach ka boyfriend anyway 😆
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Oberois ki lanka tab jalegi jab inme se koyi ek vanvaas jayega still give me shudders..whenever Omkara was presented as sach ka boyfriend my belief on him going to vanvaas just aggravated..but now I can't stay still with my belief as the basic plot of IB is totally changed...I just hope I really hope they send Omkara to vanvaas..want Gauri to support him..their relation has much more to explore rather than saying ek jhaap to Svetty and calming an angry Ru..


I believe the makers are trying to set field for their future story... So let's just hope everything goes well

Also omkara and Shivay are two most strongest and idealistic characters so only if they stand against each other it will be fun

I have a feeling that something big is awaiting
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Loved it.
Sacchai ka bf omkara ...I feel it suits om more
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Wow its so good.. Dramatic. I wish to see this in onscreen. The great wall stands for family. Om stands for truth.
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Originally posted by: _Annie_

You're on a roll, Liz! 😆 Keep'em coming!

The drama here kept me on the edge...Om's repetition of 'not an Oberoi' was really hurting. Kudos to this wonderful piece!

I was of the mind that it will be Shivaay going on vanvaas but your story makes sense too! After all Om is sach ka boyfriend anyway 😆


Thank you

Two OS n one evening ... If I get paid to write ishqbaaz fanfiction I can earn a lot then

I know many think itn well be Shivay but in don't think Shivay will abandon family like that also I don't think svety has strong enough evidence to blackmail SSO

Sach ka boyfriend also had unsolved najaiz mystery so i m hoping it's om ... Moreover vanvas can do wonders for RiKara
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Originally posted by: Gratitude_Me

Loved it.

Sacchai ka bf omkara ...I feel it suits om more


Thank you

Yup... Sach ka bf will no tolerate injustice

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