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Posted: 7 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Ramya..🤗

beautiful description of five pandavs.❤️

amazing..👏


Originally posted by: _Eternity_

a night retreat


superb ramya..👏

Thank you so much!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Excellent word selection while describing the enigmatic love of Draupadi towards her five husbands and her emotional feelings for them! Expectations are very high Ramya ! 😊


Originally posted by: -PyaariBhootni-

Such a sweet poem❤️

Lovedd reading it😳


Thanks a lot! 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Shrinika13

His face in harmony with the rest of the earth, he was born to rule,
The wielder of enormous wisdom, never once lost his cool,
With righteousness evident in his eyes,
Behold the one whose justice stands unmatched and the subjects' joyful cries.

I luurvvee Dharmaraja, as I am sure you are aware 😉 I love the second line, it describes his very name. Same with the 3rd. 😎

Obviously, I have seen your love for Dharmaraja first hand.😉

Mightier than the mightiest with a strength unparalleled,
The second Pandava that is seldom appalled,
And beyond those metallic muscles is a gentle heart,
A childish contentment in that on his loved ones' cart.

I loveee this too! ❤️ I hate how people forget him all the time. 🤔

I would never do such a thing, you can trust me.😳😉

Then there is the dark skinned one,
Storming into the field and the war is as good as won,
Deep eyes that could get my mind derailed,
And a skill with the bow that never failed.

Your Arya is so cute *cue to play Gaandiva Dhaari Arjuna*

Gandiva Dhaari Arjuna, Mahesvasha Dhananjaya...

Incredibly handsome is his being,
He whose twin's thoughts are foreseeing,
Together the two invincible and unafraid,
And in my bosom their charms stayed.

I loved this <3 The first 2 lines, tho.

<3 <3

Their eyes make forbidden sights,
Capable of worsening my soul's plight,
For they make me blush and all hopes of retrieval are lost,
As I am in love with each one as the sun shines through the frost.

Hey, I can totally visualise Panch like this. Adorbs she is.

There, I gave you inline and all. Ciao. 😆

Thank you, Muffuu! 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
Yet another random poem.

Falling For Him

Deep eyes a shade of burgundy,
Trailing me off of my sanity,
How I felt, I have no clue,
Cheeks had streaks, a scarlet hue.

His voice, his smile, his charming face,
Can't have him, it's such a disgrace,
My words resort to treachery,
His words drop me in the mortuary.

Ruffling his hair in dreams privy,
Lab partners incurred my envy,
I stare at him without a blink,
And when he looks, he has my brink.

A sailing ship without a crew,
Never got hints to take the cue,
Love or more I could not tell,
Felt more like a sorcerer's spell.

~

Edited by .moonglade. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: .moonglade.

I dedicate this to Janu di as she has been trying to make me write something like this.😆 The poem describes how draupadi feels about each of her five husbands.


Love Of Eternal

His face in harmony with the rest of the earth, he was born to rule,
The wielder of enormous wisdom, never once lost his cool,
With righteousness evident in his eyes,
Behold the one whose justice stands unmatched and the subjects' joyful cries.

Mightier than the mightiest with a strength unparalleled,
The second Pandava that is seldom appalled,
And beyond those metallic muscles is a gentle heart,
A childish contentment in that on his loved ones' cart.

Then there is the dark skinned one,
Storming into the field and the war is as good as won,
Deep eyes that could get my mind derailed,
And a skill with the bow that never failed.

Incredibly handsome is his being,
He whose twin's thoughts are foreseeing,
Together the two invincible and unafraid,
And in my bosom their charms stayed.

Their eyes make forbidden sights,
Capable of worsening my soul's plight,
For they make me blush and all hopes of retrieval are lost,
As I am in love with each one as the sun shines through the frost.

~


OMG, I'm so sorry for taking so long to reply to your lovely poem, Ramya. After reading it, I feel like smacking myself for denying myself this beautiful work for so long.
This is absolutely amazing. You really should consider publishing a book of poems, because you have real talent in this art, I'm not joking. The way you utilize the vocabulary to have the right rhythm and rhyming is what makes you such a talented poet.

I really love the verses you wrote on each of the Pandavas. They're perfect and describe them just as they are. 👏 I particularly love Dharmaraja and Vrikodara's lines, though they're all perfect.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
^Completely agree there. Now we need to find a publishing house to get all these gems on paper
PS : We'll want a special mention there 😆

On a serious note, Janu Di's right! These are simply freaking marvellous pieces, specially the pandav one and Lord M ones. <3

😳

So blessed to come across such pieces
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
Beautiful poem collections
Each n every poem loved them
Do send me link when u will update once again.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
Is this why Milu thinks you are in love? 😆
Fabulous job, Donu! This poem is why I feel like falling in luuurrveee. <3 <3
Hats off, little sis! ❤️
Edited by Shrinika13 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99
This is such a sweet poem. The tittle is so cute and the poem even more. Enjoyed reading it.
And I jus realised that I missed your old poem. How could I miss a Draupadi poem? 🥱
Just read it and really loved. The way you described the five Pandavs in a short yet so beautifully is amazing! Very nice. Keep writing more such.

Sam


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Posted: 7 years ago
This one's amazing! So soft, and beautiful! <3

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