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Originally posted by: Shrinika13

RES! 😲

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Excellent poem Ramya👏

Draupadi's feelings about her five husbands are depicted so beautifully

I always love reading any related to Draupadi and Pandavas❤️

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Awwie! The descriptions are so so sweet! Loved how you dealt with all five brothers effectively! <3

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Ramya..🤗

beautiful description of five pandavs.❤️

amazing..👏

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Excellent word selection while describing the enigmatic love of  Draupadi towards her five husbands and her emotional feelings for them! Expectations are very high Ramya ! 😊

Originally posted by: Shrinika13

His face in harmony with the rest of the earth, he was born to rule, 

The wielder of enormous wisdom, never once lost his cool, 

With righteousness evident in his eyes, 

Behold the one whose justice stands unmatched and the subjects' joyful cries. 

I luurvvee Dharmaraja, as I am sure you are aware 😉 I love the second line, it describes his very name.  Same with the 3rd. 😎 

Obviously, I have seen your love for Dharmaraja first hand.😉

Mightier than the mightiest with a strength unparalleled,

The second Pandava that is seldom appalled, 

And beyond those metallic muscles is a gentle heart, 

A childish contentment in that on his loved ones' cart. 

I loveee this too! ❤️ I hate how people forget him all the time. 🤔

I would never do such a thing, you can trust me.😳😉

Then there is the dark skinned one, 

Storming into the field and the war is as good as won,

Deep eyes that could get my mind derailed,

And a skill with the bow that never failed. 

Your Arya is so cute  *cue to play Gaandiva Dhaari Arjuna* 

Gandiva Dhaari Arjuna, Mahesvasha Dhananjaya...

Incredibly handsome is his being, 

He whose twin's thoughts are foreseeing, 

Together the two invincible and unafraid,

And in my bosom their charms stayed.

I loved this <3 The first 2 lines, tho. 

<3 <3

Their eyes make forbidden sights, 

Capable of worsening my soul's plight, 

For they make me blush and all hopes of retrieval are lost, 

As I am in love with each one as the sun shines through the frost.

Hey, I can totally visualise Panch like this.  Adorbs she is. 

There, I gave you inline and all. Ciao. 😆

Originally posted by: .moonglade.

I dedicate this to Janu di as she has been trying to make me write something like this.😆 The poem describes how draupadi feels about each of her five husbands. 

Love Of Eternal

His face in harmony with the rest of the earth, he was born to rule, 

The wielder of enormous wisdom, never once lost his cool, 

With righteousness evident in his eyes, 

Behold the one whose justice stands unmatched and the subjects' joyful cries. 

Mightier than the mightiest with a strength unparalleled,

The second Pandava that is seldom appalled, 

And beyond those metallic muscles is a gentle heart, 

A childish contentment in that on his loved ones' cart. 

Then there is the dark skinned one, 

Storming into the field and the war is as good as won,

Deep eyes that could get my mind derailed,

And a skill with the bow that never failed. 

Incredibly handsome is his being, 

He whose twin's thoughts are foreseeing, 

Together the two invincible and unafraid,

And in my bosom their charms stayed.

Their eyes make forbidden sights, 

Capable of worsening my soul's plight, 

For they make me blush and all hopes of retrieval are lost, 

As I am in love with each one as the sun shines through the frost.

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