Anuvir OS: New Start

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Guys I am going to write OS avi new character on laado 2 with Manish as Viren Anuvir OS by Arisha.. In Virpur.. Morning one girl going towards college ... She is Roli Virpur ki Madani yes she is very strong and brave girl.. she is sherni she believes that law is very powerful.. She going towards college that time one Rantej trying to molest girl he trying to take her dupatta.. That girl is shouting for help.. But no one coming for help... Roli gets angry she when towards men and slap him hardly.. Roli:You jerk don't you have same shameless people idiot and she slap him more & more.. Roli: if I see you again that you are molesting another girl I will kill you dammit stupid .. Roli took dupatta and give that girl.. Are you ok asked roli.. Girl thank you so much for saving me I am very thankful to you Roli: doesn't matter its ok but you have to fight for you if you don't fight for you no fight for you.. Roli hug her.. Know she turn towards village people.. You guys have no shame he was molesting that girl you were seeing tamsha.. Because of people today girl is not save.. All make their heads down and shamed.. Roli move from their.. Haaa this girl slap me I will not leave her in any cost she have to pay.. One day Roli going somewhere.. Suddenly someone make her faint.. After sometime she wake up and see herself tieing with tree... Roli: how I come here? To bring me here.. Suddenly she saw that Rantej coming..

He hold her face & caress it..

Anushka: u jerk leave me will not leave u..

Rantej: u slap me right I will show u your dead..

Anushka: I am not afraid from u idiot..

Rantej: Boys..

Some boys came with fire stick.

They spread gaslat & give fire stick to Rantej..

Rantej: Know u see girl what happened with u..

Anushka try to free herself..

He throw stick towards her but someone hold stick ..

He came in front of Anushka.

Anu cant able to see him.

Rantej: Ayyo hero just leave from here.

Viren: I am not here for leave. Just leave this girl.

Rantej: no never she has die if u are ready to die with her most welcome.

Viren laugh and kick on his chest.

Others boys came to beat viren but give everyone good beat.

All went from their Viren turn to Anu both lost each other in their beautiful faces. Viren came in sense and open Anu.

Are u ok?asked Viren. Yeah thank u for saving me said Anu. My pleasure Lady said viren smile naughtily. Anu glare him Viren just smile.

Shall we go ?asked Viren.

Yes please said anu as she don't want to leave here for a second.

Viren show her path and both start walking.

Since long they are walking but not getting wait. Even its getting dark Anu is really pissed off. How long we need to walk like this?said anu.

Ammm I don't know I think we should stop here as its dark know it's dangerous to move as wild animal in this jungle. Said viren warning her. No I want to go out from this . Said anu angrily. Anu move out but suddenly hear a tiger roars. She move back her legs slip and about to fall but Strong arms hold her from falling yes Viren save her. Both gazing each other.

Anu clutch his shirt fear from falling.

Viren holding her from waist. Both looking each other for long . Again they hear a roar and came out from trance.

Viren make her stand properly.

There were awkward silence due embarrassment. Anu yet to came out from his touch which make her shiver in spine.

Finally breaking silence Viren asked Her name.

She told and viren told his.

So Miss Anushka we have to spend this night here. Anu just nodded without any other option.

Both sat under tree and Viren start talking with her and she to involve with his talks.

She don't know when she sleep on his shoulder.

Viren look at her she sleep so innocently on his shoulder.

Viren gazing here She saw anu shrinking herself may be she feeling cold. He remove his jacket and put around her.

Viren to don't know when he slept.

Sun rays hit on their faces.

Viren wake up and saw Anu sleeping.

He shook her little. Anu wake up yawing .

She found Viren found herself on his shoulder.

She don't deny she feel good in his presence.

Anu move and said sorry. Its ok he replied.

Both again start moving and finally reach on road.

Thanks for the help man and know let me leave.said Anu.

Viren hold her hand holding her for go.

Going like this only atleast give your number girl said viren. No said anu and begin to move when she heard a song.

She saw Viren singing.

Kuch to bata arey kuch to bata
Na na na...
Phone ka number ghar ka pata
Na na na...

Kuch to bata arey kuch to bata
Na na na.. na na..
Phone ka number ghar ka pata
Na na na.. na na..

Tere liye hal hai yeh dekh mujhe tu yu na sata
Kuch to bata arey kuch to bata
Na na na.. na na..
Haan phone ka number ghar ka pata
Na na na.. na na..

Kehna hai joh kaho, jaldi jaldi
Ver na yu hi rahon main to chaldi
Aise karo nahin, hi bye
Aao piye kahin chai bai
Samjao kitni bar
Yeh koshishe bekaar
Samjo mujhko hai inkar

Dil meh pyar hai albetta
Na na na.. na na..
Kuch to bata are kuch to bata
Na na na.. na na..

Dil ka kahoge jo
Kissa bissa
Aayega mujhko toh
Gussa bussa

Jaane de gusse ke..
Chakar bakar
Aa chalke dekhenge..
Picture viture

Karte ho kyun yeh shor
Dekha karo na bore
Yeh dil mange na
Anymore..

Koi toh milne ka rasta
Na na na.. na na..
Arey kuch to bata arey kuch to bata
Na na na.. na na..
Tere liye hal hai yeh dekh mujhe tu yu na sata

Haan kuch to bata are kuch to bata
Na na na.. na na..
Phone ka number ghar ka pata
Na na na.. na na..

He neel down and hold her hand.

Viren: I fall for u anu from moment I saw saving that girl and I following u from that day. I Love u till my last breath. Will u marry me?

Shidat sa tujhe sa Mohabat karna laga hai Sanam.

Teri mohabat mai dhal na laga sanam.

Dil mai meri tasvir ban gaye hai teri sanam.

Aj hum akrar karta mohabat karna laga hai sanam.

(Its original written by me do not copy)

Anu got tears and she neel down and hug him and confess I love u to.

Both start new chapter of life lets bless them.

Note: Don't comment negative about character.

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angelsaranya thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
awww amazing os dear...loved it...
anu5 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely OS dear
Loved it !!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing ari keep doing on.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#5
1st of all..hearty congratulations on completing this sweetest os ari darling...!!!!it was soo sweet and cute os..who will comment negative about the character when manish is playing it..my cutie pie..everything was perfect...and the banner was also soo wonderful..loved it...!!!👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice os arisha... aviman in laado2 super combo hope it happens in real soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#7
ur imagination of Manish entering laado2 as a new charac 4 anushka with this OS was so sweet.beautiful banner.Anushka is superb..how bravely she saved the girl.but shocking that the evil guy tried to kill her.what a heroic entry of Viren n how he saved Anu was superb.tiger roar...oh...anu getting scared..viren holding her..both looking at each other...both sleeping on each others shoulder was romantic.viren holding her hand n asking her 2 give ph no b4 going was cute.what a cute song he sang 4 her.loved it.how he confessed that he fell 4 her seeing her saving that girl n proposing 4 marr n anushka too confessing that she loves him was romantic
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh ho this was awesome yaar. Nice ari. Want more from you dear. Just now I saw u change your writing style. Nice work baby. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Love your suprise os it's really good wao anuvir both are so brave and so cute both spent a cute time together and finally both fall in love and a happy happy ending thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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super awesome hope we get them in real too loved it sweet cute & romantic both hero heroin brave fighting for right viren entry was awesome ekdum heroic loved it anuvir falling for each other in first sight then their cute sa jungle scene viren singing song for Anu that was so cute & proposing her was romantic fab job ari but give credit for name viren to me & roshni ;-P he he kidding

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