Ishra TS:Humko pyaar hua epilogue pg 85 mar 29 - Page 59

Originally posted by: MagicalHeart91

Shot:1- Poor kid Ishu 😔 People are so busy that they won't have time to spend with father/husband/wife/daughter/son that hurts. She had very bored childhood at least one good thing happened to her is being Raman wife😳. He is too good. Glad to hear that she was not raped, I also thinking there might be some dark past. Hope she open up to him. Let me see what happened next :)

thnxx gree
glad u lykd it

Originally posted by: MagicalHeart91

Shot:2- Itna kuch hua ishu ke saath. I really pity on such parents who don't care their children and their children have to go through so much pain and all these molestation's happens. I wonder how can anyone bear this utter shit in real life. I really feel for your friend :(. Ishu is right of course after hearing such things from wife , no husband really supports instead they throw them out but only few or rare can support. I loved how he was soothing her pain by giving tiny tiny smooches on her wounds. She felt serene and she slept after whole 15 years :). Then aage kya hai 😉

thnxx gree
I agree, we can't even imagine what they go through, this actually is unbearable

Originally posted by: MagicalHeart91

Shot-3: Ishu is still bothering with nightmares :( it's definitely out of guilt . So happy that Raman took ishitha to psychiatrist , otherwise she would never come out of this mental trauma. At least now ishitha parents came to know what hurricane she pass through when they left her to live a miserable life. Thanks to raman, he brought that death certificate and made ishitha to live a normal life. So ,ishitha all set to move on . I really wonder how can a man read what emotions a women going through , we our self fails miserably to predict at times. We women are mad 😈 ishu and her insecurities thinking he don't want to consume .Then they end up doing that in washroom 😆. Is that place too comfortable?🤣 never mind😛

thnxx gree
well raman understood it
glad u lykd it

Originally posted by: MagicalHeart91

Shot 3b- Good to see ishra are happy together and puttar flirtatious all the time😳 . Ishu and running NGO too good. I loved how both are complementing each other. Everyone in family know about ishitha now , Toshi ji is super star yaar 😉 I wish to get a saas like one in future 😛. Amma and appa at least now you took time to see your daughter🥱. Happy ani ani to Ishra. Mission getting Chotu motu daughter started😆

thnxxx gree
toshiji definitely is a star and so is raman

Originally posted by: MagicalHeart91

Epilogue: I thought Ishra were getting married again 😛 . But it's simmi heee. Ahaan ishu you told baby is awake at first and now telling she slept despo madraasan 😆. They blessed with baby girl 😳 oye hoye. Nice end! . Thank you PM. I am so glad I finished it in one go 😊. Write more and more. See you soon :)

thnxx gree
glad u lykd d story n commented individually

I read all the parts in a go..and i must tell u this is some serious good writing and talent. .its not the usual tinepass romantic stories we write on ishra..it had a message.a great one..kudos to u..and to ur friend who been thru it..kudos girl..i hope she find her raman soon 👏

Originally posted by: ammuamal

I read all the parts in a go..and i must tell u this is some serious good writing and talent. .its not the usual tinepass romantic stories we write on ishra..it had a message.a great one..kudos to u..and to ur friend who been thru it..kudos girl..i hope she find her raman soon 👏

thnxx nandana
m glad u lykd it
it feels really great seeing someone appreciate this story as it is nowhere d usual romantic chessy stuff
thanks again!!

Veryyy nice & heart touching story akku ..


Thx for pm yrr!!

Hey Akriti, I read this today, in the afternoon.

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Hey Akriti, I read this today, in the afternoon.

I was going through your index when I found this and chanced upon this from the introduction. Real stories have always interested me and especially the concept. I am fond of concepts of having a bad past and the journey of overcoming the fears and finding the life and happiness again. That is just so endearing and more because, this actually happens. Many people have bad pasts so I could relate to this very, well.

You have done really a nice job in conveying this story because I literally could feel what Ishita has gone through. That is the worst thing any child could experience. Heartbreaking honestly. I often do not believe that such things happen but then my sister is there, telling - outer world is like this only.

I know this is one of the earlier written pieces from you but now that when I know you write so much better - I really feel you should take a short break from updating whenever you can and start editing this story [you know what I mean right?] Because this is one beautiful story and I feel you should now do that.

Please do not take this in an offensive way. I haven't read your recent works so I don't know how you write now, but please, please do not write dialogues by giving dashes in front of character names. You have written a great fic so please do not visualize it like a script. I hope you are understanding what I mean.

Apart from that, beautiful, heartwarming story. Keep writing.

Much love

-Harshada

hey harshada
m so glad u read d story n liked it as well
yes this is one of my earliest pieces here, my fifth or sixth story on d forum n my writing has changed over d tym
I will surely think abt editing this story as soon as I get sm tym
n abt adding dashes, many readers of mine tell that paragraphs get boring n adding commas is smthng m nt much used to doing, adding dashes has got into my veins nw!😆
will try chaging that soon as well😊
thank u so much fr ur comment n time to read this one
a spcl piece it is fr me n feels good to see ppl reading n liking it
n yes nver think I mind anyone's honest views
one shud nvr b sorry fr being real, I take appreciations, advises and criticisms all positively!!
hav a good day😊