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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: janumkrk

hi friends can anyone you help me in promoting my story...


regarding promoting.. add the link of ur story as ur signature.. so when u comment on someone's story u read, other readers vl notice it in ue post vl gve it a look.. i vl also tell my friends to read ua story..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 2




All staff are rushing here and there making everything fine no no perfect before MSK enters because he never accepts anything less than perfect... he himself being a perfectionist, now a days its became like a ritual for kc staffs to see someone getting fired daily by becoming prey to his anger. All staffs know MSK'S anger is dangerous.. its almost time for maan sir to enter being a punctual person he is never late...

At sharp 9am the lift door of 10th floor opens and here comes Maan Singh Khurana with his bodyguards walking behind him on both sides and adi by his side, all staffs stands in their own place in attention as if standing in parade ground.. the whole floor is silent except his branded shoes sound making his presence obvious. "Good Morning sir" everyone repeated the prase when he passed through their desk. Noone want to make themselves his todays prey. He was about to open his door and everyone sighs out for their small victory but it didn't last long..

A heavy sound of something falling makes everyone turn on their heels.. maan turns and walks towards the place from where the sound comes and sees a staff on ground collecting the files fallen.. the staff stands up after completing the files only to see angry maan standing before him. All are waiting for maans words YOU ARE FIRED echoes in air as all excepted. Next second their see maans door closed after he enters..

Adi enter's Maan's cabin to see him sitting on his chair and checking some files.

Adi goes near maan to talk about his restlessness but before he starts maan distract him asking about the presentation and his other schedules today.. After briefing maan he goes back to his cabin not before sending coffee to maan through poen.

Maan drinks his coffee and engage himself in files untill his intercom rings to notify him about client's arrival. He leaves his files and heads to meeting room after all formality with Mr. Sunil Mehra, adi starts the presentation followed by chief architect anisha. This project is on building a high society apartment with all facilities worth 200cr in main area on delhi near by delhi university. Everything was fixed and deal signed.

Maan leaves to his cabin and starts his work again on noida files... he dint have his lunch and now its 7pm. Adi knock his door to gain his attention, Adi: its late we have to leave.
Maan: yes adi its getting late but we are not able to do anything.
Adi: maan first lets go home its not good for us to stay we dont know what may happen...
Maan: No need to speak of it adithya.
Adi knows maan calling him with fullname means he is getting out of his control
Adi: your anger is not going to fetch you out of this it will only increase it.. so keep your cool maan, we will find a solution for this..
Maan looks at him with angry frown and controls himself knowing what adi is saying is true and not to lose his only companion, they go to parking lot maan takes the wheel and adi in passenger seat... no words exchanged. Adi cant see his friend like this so he took his phone and quickly text a message to someone who to a level can cool down Maan for now. He hope his plan should work.. after a good 2 mins the silence in car is disturbed by a ringtone from maan's phone.. Maan divert his attention from road to see who is it, the phone blinks with his angels name..his thoughts again go to the girls giggle and he knows only thing that can make his restlessness to vanish is her.Hopefully he attends the call

Delhi university campus(3pm):
Geet and gang after eating goes to attend class now its 3pm all classes gets over for the day so they heads back to girls hostel room.. pinky and geet was opening the door and all enters pinky and geet throws there bag on table and falls on bed pulling annie along with them enjoying their girly time. Annie loves this careefree and friendly side of geet which she misses from her brother who is always protective about her.

Suddenly annies phone rings and she runs to attend it as if her life depends on the call all smiling but on seeing the screen flashing dadis name her smile reduces a little but happy to speak to dadi she attend the call..
DADI:Annie bete how are you
ANNIE: Haan dadimaa am fine, how are you and bhai
DADI: Yes dear, we are fine
ANNIE:where is bhai, did you speak to him dadi
DADI: He will be in office, No today morning i tried but maan left to kc without even listing to what i want to say, i feel like i lost my maan who once used to spend a lot of time with me.. now who cares for this old woman.
ANNIE: Dadima dont you forget that i care for you
DADI: Yes, i can see that how much you care for me.. its been 2 weeks you last met with me... ok how is your friend and bhabhi.
Annie feels guilty to hide things from her close people but she can't reveal it now, it has some complication from her side its her brother and her studies which will end by 6months and from his side its his dadaji. So she has to maintain the lies..
ANNIE: Sorry dadi am little busy in studies, but this week i will come to meet you and about my friend pinky is fine and bhabhi she is super good. And what happened to your bahu purana? Suddenly you are calling geet my bhabi as if she is not your would be bahu?
DADI: hmm, i dont know what will be your bhai's decision so i dont want to have high hope.. k annie you enjoy and takecare bye..
ANNIE: OK dadi takecare of your health and bye.

PRECAP: SAME..
friends i know am giving same precap from prologue but before getting their i want to fix the base... and i promise in next update i will make them meet(i mean through call)
Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
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i had posted pic here to check if its working.. removed it now..
Edited by LovelyUmang5 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom



Didn't know you had updated. Will read and comment



Ok akka.. waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

beautiful start.. read the other version as well..
keep writing.. hope u vl continue gving us new stories like this..



THANKYOU dear, with you peoples support i will give new stories
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yet to read...will comment by evening...😳

By the way, congrats on becoming Groupbie 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vaidhumom



Yet to read...will comment by evening...😳

By the way, congrats on becoming Groupbie👏



THANKYOU Akka.. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 1
AMAZING...SO WELL WRITTEN 👏

Hmm.. Something has happened during Maan's Australia trip... He has shifted himself to his outhouse and meets Daadi only during breakfast...😲

College scene is too good...Sasha and Tasha are real pain 😡. Good Geet showed them their place and the professor asked them to Get out..

Who is Calling Annie?

Geet and CBI officer?? Interesting...Lagtha hain apne dil ke chor ko doondne ja rahi hain 😳

lets see what she does

Do update soon..😛
Edited by Vaidhumom - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

PART 1

AMAZING...SO WELL WRITTEN👏

Hmm.. Something has happened during Maan's Australia trip...
YES
He has shifted himself to his outhouse and meets Daadi only during breakfast...YES SO SAD
😲

College scene is too good...Sasha and Tasha are real pain😡.
ALWAYS
Good Geet showed them their place and the professor asked them to Get out..

Who is Calling Annie?

Geet and CBI officer?? Interesting...Lagtha hain apne dil ke chor ko doondne ja rahi hain😳



lets see what she does

LET'S SEE Do update soon..😛



UPDATE ON THURSDAY
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely CS and Prologue
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Hmm!!!! what happened to Maan in Australia that he is living in outhouse with Adi not with Dadi in KM even not talking with Dadi properly, one side Maan is so serious and other side his queen and her gang is full of masti and naughtiness, loving it
Eagerly waiting for next

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