Rikara SS-Aankhon ki Gustakhiyaan-SeasonII-Mumbai Chapter-Part 3&4

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yayini

@yayini

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Hi dear.. it is sweet ss.. you ve maintained that sweetness in your narration which makes readers smile look forward to it.. I read all parts of first one in Goa.. sorry was busy with my work couldn't reply .. this chapter for me is a sneak peak of more cute and romantic moments that is to come, which am eagerly looking forward to. Desperate kara and naive ri is a treat and jitna bhi padoon man nahi bharega .. please continue to update soonish.. eagerly looking forward.. thanks for pm..

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Yayini

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mina

@minamma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Excited for this mumbai track

Rudy such a intruder i tell you

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Loved the New chapter

Gauri's insecurities and fear of not being equal to him where nicely portrayed and felt very real

Love that Om wanted her to accompany him to his Exhibition but understand that she is scared he will be humiliated and that she doesn't feel worthy of him

He will always support her and stand by her , and that is why she was so touched that he wanted her to pursue her studies if that was something SHE wanted to do. For the first time someone gave her a choice

loved it