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I stopped commenting on this forum long ago, but seeing how things are in the show. I just have to say I loved the bond the three shared, but now I'm just like I don't care about the characters ...I just want to see where the story takes of since their moving away from the movie version. I wonder if they will do an ek mutthai ending since they said the wife is dead, which Is a trick. I can tell this wasn't written before the shoot. It seems more like they are writing it as the show goes.
If that's the case, it's a risky decision. I prefer writing the script, going over it and fixing whatever I need to fix ...adding good ideas and than show it to the director and make him read it. Than I can finally start the show. Right now everything is just repeating and it's moving slow for my taste. The beginning up until teni found out she was pregnant was great. Writers could have left the couple keep being lovey dovey and give us more insight on the two girls. For instance, shovori background, teni filler story on how she became alone and money hungry.
Could have went deeper on why she's so determined to go to America, and a filler about parth and shovori marriage and how they were first treated entering the house. Many other things while teni is caring the baby. I also wanted to see a huge belly , because pregnant woman are so cute when prego. Lastly, the talk and growth follow by moral lesson. Meaning I want to see a really scared side of teni when the baby is coming, and shovori reassuring her like a sister and good friend.
It may seem like the story plot will never redeem itself, but it can. They can easily turn it around, adding mature ideas somewhere...that's what I think. Coming to teni character, it's not as worse as kamla - ma...my god , I still hate that character. She's just so evil ...ugh.
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