RishBala OS: Under The Sun (Coming soon - SP : 17/11 - P : 2)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello!

How are you all?
So once again I'm here to announce a new story!
But no SP for now for this one as I will try to post directly the OS!

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Under The Sun

Burning or Glowing under the Sun is an art!
An art that few people manages well!
A management which includes our heart and body!
Is another word for body: soul?

Let's discover!

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Sneak-Peak

Under The Sun (Coming soon)

- Maithili

(See you all soon!)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for new story,
excited to read the story,
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations on the new story and also on completing one year of story writing.
How was your trip to India, hope you had a gala time.
Waiting to read.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Will try to update sooner possible dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: harini_

Congrats for new story,
excited to read the story,
continue soon

Thank you so much!
Me to excited to continue it!
Hope you like the story too!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Congratulations on the new story and also on completing one year of story writing.

How was your trip to India, hope you had a gala time.
Waiting to read.
Continue soon.

Thak you so much for the wishes dear!
The trip to India was amazing!
Enjoyed a lot this Diwali! Had fun on Diwali after 15 years!
And now I'm back being fresh!
Will update this soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Will PM you soon with the update!
Thank you!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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😊 Thanks dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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😊 That's y I'm updating with a SP!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello!

I thought to not have a SP to this story!
Then my inner voice said 'You need to pleasure your bad mind! So SP is needed to confuse your readers;-)!'
So here, I'm with a SP to satisfy that inner voice and bad mind of mine!
Happy reading!



Sneak-Peak


Beautiful!" he said as he checked the beautifully clicked picture in his camera.
The picture of a green van in front of red sands in the dessert with blue colour bangles adorned hand of a girl holding a white veil, hiding her face from the sun as she peeked out of that truck from it's top.

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With her form brushing against him, he made her get on her feet safely as she adjust to stand on the ground instead of mango tree branch.
With her one hand unconsciously on his shoulder and one hand setting her dress, he caught the sight of fresh raw green mango in her hand and with a childish smile adorning his face, he advanced his face towards her hand.
Felling the fanning breath getting hotter near her hand, she lifted her head to find his face near her hand and pulled it away immediately along with the mango as if he was going to devour her hand.

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"You are our guest! So stay"
"Sorry to cut your words sir!" the young man who was standing in front of 4 men and 2 women "You are saying your way of thinking changed and that's the reason why you are giving example to this village buy getting your daughter married. But isn't it wrong to get her married to a man double her age? Or are you"
"Enough!" her father turned towards the other men "I'm really sorry for the drama! I will get you good news soon! Excuses us"
"You are fooling your people in the name of changed thoughts! If you have really changed, this not what you would do to your daughter. You are repeating the same mistake you have done years ago Sir!"

(That's all for now guys! As always no PM for SP!
PM for story update will arrive to everyone who are already in my PM list.
In case you have never received any PM!
Please leave me a message!
Thank you!)

- Maithili


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