AshNi poem: Pyar ka ehsaas

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

I'm back with my AshNi poem...in this I have tried to express how Ashu feels for Nidhi after she entered his life😃

His life was never the same and he completely transformed himself for her sake😃

Here it is...😊

Pyar ko paane ki chaahat kabhi pehle aisi na thi

Akele they hum raah mein socha na tha yeh kabhi

Koi andekha anjaana chehra aayega nazar ke saamne

Kaanpte huye haath aur haare huye jazbaat ko yun lagega thamne

Dil ke dard ko dega wo pyar ka ehsaas

Uski muskaan aur uska ehsaas ban jayega kuch aisa khaas

Subah ki pehli kiran ki tarah mere Jeevan ko jagmagati woh

Mere dil ki bagiya ko phool ban mehkati woh

Uski hansi mein hain ek bachhe ki masoomiyat

Dekh use khil jata mera jahan sambhal jati meri tabiyat

Jo tum aayi mere Jeevan mein to jaana pyar kya hai

Rab ki meher hai isme maa ki jaise dua hai

Tumhare bina jeena pade din wo aaye na kabhi

Mere sukh mile tumhe tumhare dukh ho mere sabhi

Hai dua yeh rab se aaye na koi aisa lamha

Hona pade juda tumse Jeevan ho jaye mera tanha

Hope you liked it😃

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Babita

@babita..

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Posted: 7 years ago

Awww, such sweet feelings of Ashu

Very beautiful poem on Ashu's feeling for Nidhi coming into his life 👏👏

Loved it to the core 😃

When Nidhi entered his life as an intern, he wanted her to go away so that there is no one to say a word to her and mallika taught him to let her go for her career and her life ahead.

This was the worst decision he had for Nidhi but he never let himself forget her or doing something or the other for her. What i read here is the time when finally she came back and he accepted her as a lover and then decided to fight the world to be with her all their life !

Very nice progress of him and Manisha di you have gracefully shown his feelings to possess her all his life and never let her go now !

Awesome lyrics, somewhere i felt emotional and felt for Ashu, and feeling so good inside that they were together forver !

Thankuu di for the lovely poem, i really appreciate your efforts to write something or the other for Ashni and giving us their life yet again and again 🤗

Thanks will always be a very little word for your efforts di, we all mean it 👏👏

Lovess ❤️

Edited by babita.. - 7 years ago

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Babita

@babita..

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Babita

@babita..

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Posted: 7 years ago

I really feel that the initial pics of Ashu will suit here 😳

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 7 years ago

This is really awesome n too pleasing poem Manisha dear... ⭐️👏

Thanks for the lyrical ... 😃

Nice to see Ashu happy in his life always... he had so much pains n loneliness in his life that a little joy wud heal it up n he used to enjoy the moments..

Pain that Baba gave him... Nidh healed it up.. giving him immense love n company to see himself as his own., !

Lovely feelings you have inserted of him Manisha... incredibly written fabulous... hats off to you...👏

I wish we cud have second season..,, then we wud have lived a life of Ashni after that.. miss it so much...

Thanks dear.. for the delightful efforts... means so much... 😳

Bless you,,, keep the flow going... ⭐️

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 7 years ago

Apt pics for this poem Babita... ⭐️👏

N you are right... Manisha is too Awesome,,,, 😃⭐️👏

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift
Apt pics for this poem Babita... ⭐️👏
N you are right... Manisha is too Awesome,,,, 😃⭐️👏

Agreed!

These both girls are perfect in posting their shares 👏

Brilliant as always! ⭐️⭐️

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

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Posted: 7 years ago

What a lovely ambience you have created Manisha ❤️ 🤗

The magical lyrical is too adorable and emotional when we go down the memory lane! The missing thing was always love in Ashu's life and you have beautifully adorn his feelings for Nidhi!

What a poem! What verse showing his fondness towards Nidhi and sentiments not to lose her! Warmth felt and reverence seen!

Thanks for the beuateous persona Sweetie, am so touched👏

Loved every bit of it and enjoyed the most⭐️ Always a treat to read ya!

Luv ya, you know i do 🤗

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

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Posted: 7 years ago

This pic 😳

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: babita..
Awww, such sweet feelings of Ashu
Very beautiful poem on Ashu's feeling for Nidhi coming into his life 👏👏

Loved it to the core 😃

When Nidhi entered his life as an intern, he wanted her to go away so that there is no one to say a word to her and mallika taught him to let her go for her career and her life ahead.
This was the worst decision he had for Nidhi but he never let himself forget her or doing something or the other for her. What i read here is the time when finally she came back and he accepted her as a lover and then decided to fight the world to be with her all their life !
Very nice progress of him and Manisha di you have gracefully shown his feelings to possess her all his life and never let her go now !
Awesome lyrics, somewhere i felt emotional and felt for Ashu, and feeling so good inside that they were together forver !
Thankuu di for the lovely poem, i really appreciate your efforts to write something or the other for Ashni and giving us their life yet again and again 🤗
Thanks will always be a very little word for your efforts di, we all mean it 👏👏
Lovess ❤️

Thanks a lot dear for the appreciation...I loved the way you correlated the poem to the show...I really didn't know whether I'll be able to express the feelings well or not...but reading you is always so motivating for me...thanks a tonne dear Shona for your support as always...Love you sweetheart for your affection for me and my write ups😃❤️🤗

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