Love,Annihiliation,Restoration-A Shivika FS Last Part, Page 29. - Page 24

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Posted: 8 years ago
It was so beautiful nd soothing to read
I would love if u continue it
Lovely update Amnu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Amnu...finally I took the time to read the FS at one go😆
First, I should say u r a good writer.. the way u portrayed the feelings n emotions is awesome..

I loved Shivaay n Tej the most in ur story.
Tej with attitude plus goodness gives a good feeling after seeing his evil avatar in DBO.. I love the actor who played Tej but makers have destroyed his character to the most during spin-off. I live the way he is protective about Shivaay.

Shivaay is perfect to the core.. as I love him. Loved how he ran to Annika knowing she is not well😆.perfect billu in the situation. The jealousy traits in him are so entertaining to read..😆 I must say I imagined NM acting out the situations in the story..lol🤣

U made Ragini n Vikram a couple here.. 🤣 the makers couldn't do it but u have done it successfully..

I enjoyed pinky's OMM the most.. and the shivaay's promise part took my heart..

Well done once again👏

N do keep writing more...n if u write, let me know.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it. I always wanted the NKK to backfire on pinky & shivaay and always wanted annika to have surname as big as the royalty's. Thank god somebody else had the same idea. Was a total awesome one. Loved the way how u portrayed tej's character and Om's best friend character here. Even Rudy's insecurity about being annika's favorite was lovely. And shivaay's jealousy was like cherry on top of the cake.
I never had found u before. And hats-off to your writing.
P.S. could u please pm me about any of your upcoming works.
P.P.S. even u follow sabyasachi. Don't u?? Even I follow him with the show BBB

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