SHOT 1: AVIN'S VULNERABILITY and Juhi's DesireAUTHOR'S POV
Tillu. Shweta shouts panicked
Neil comes running
What(He looks where Shweta is looking. He runs in). Avni what have you done. Neil says
Juhi didn't want Avni to died but wanted her to go through the same pain she went through in Rang Mahal and kept waiting for Neil and when he came to Rang Mahal was to save Avni.
He protected and saved Avni putting Ragini Pandit in coma, killing Dayawanti Mehta and putting Amol Mehta in jail.
Yes for a while she did get Neil's sympathy but not love she wanted she did get her daughter back and Neil left them to build their lives on their own he went back to Avni to build his happy married life. It made her insecure. So she decided to end Avni by
DD take out the car fast have to go the hospital. Neil says
Avni bacha open your eyes. Bebe says worried
What happened. Prakash says worried
We all are here know bacha. Neela says worried
Doctor please fast. Neil says panicked
[I]Ali, Nanno and Aman come[/I)
What have happened to Di.Aman says
Avni tried to suicide again. Juhi says
Shweta and Aman catch the subdued happiness Juhi is trying to hid
There is no goodness left in the world. Who put all her relationships twice on stake from her pain she is getting happiness. Shweta says
Shweta Aunty what can be expected from a sex worker. Aman says
Bhai take care of yourself Bhabhi will be fine. Kareena says
Fourth time she tried to suicide What should I do, I can't understand. Neil says
Shweta Aunty you said I was doing drama now you see in a few days see what has happened to Avni. Juhi says
Juhi stay in your limits otherwise I will be forced to arrest you. Neil says
What happened to angel. Mishti says
Nothing Angel is little unwell. Prakash says
You are a police man. Mishti says running to Neil
What's happened Mishti beta. You will not tell Maddy Aunty. Maddy says
Aunty,Mom had gone to meet Papa in jail she was talking about Angel there to him. When angel got kidnapped Mom had told Papa about her. Mishti says
Mishti... Juhi says angrily
Juhi enough I will not give my name to her but I will not let you rise your hand on a kid because she is stating facts. Neil says hugging Mishti
Aman Uncle why are you crying. Mishti says
Mishti child you like Church. (she nods) There is no Church here but let's go to the temple there we both will prey for Angel. Aman says
Mishti and Aman leave
Somebody has said the truth children never lie. Who they love they care for them from their heart. Neil says
Mishti is lying... Juhi says
Your are calling your daughter a liers before I didn't think this girls was so selfishs. Shweta says with disgust
I am disgusted with the thought of I loved a girl like you I was a idiot you are not worth trusting if Pandit did anything right in her life by keeping you in that rangmahal. Neil says angrily
Juhi was shocked to the core. They hear Mishti. Neil controls himself
I want to meet Angel. Mishti says
Mishti batcha you can't meet for now... Neela says smiling at her childish behaviour
Nothing to worry you can see her (Aman takes her near the door from the see through glass she see Avni) See there Aman says
Aman Self Talk] What is Di talking to Harish Uncle about... what is begging about. What has happened. Why did Juhi go to jail to meet Vidyut. What is all this happening.
Harish, Avni... Neela says
Neela, now she is conscious. She will be shifted to the room you can meet her there. Harish says
Avni is shifted. She was lieing down with her eyes closed.
Harish Uncle you said Avni is fine. Why is unconscious. Neil asks
Officer she was given medication it's just the effect she will be fine in another five minutes. Junior doctor says
(Inside the room)
Batcha please open your eyes. Neela says
AVNI'S POVMaa. I say
Batcha what is all this my Avni child was not so weak. Neela says
Maa is Neil fine
What do you think after seeing you like this how will he be. Neela says
Why is there so much of noise. I say
Tillu. Bebe and Shweta say
At the same time
Neil. Fatima, Prakash and Ali says
At the same time.
Jiju. Aman says
At the same
Sirji. DD says
What happened to Neil. I say
She gets up
Maam you can't go now. Nurse says
Avni pushes the nurse aside and runs to the door
Batcha. Neela says
Avni opens the door
Neil. Avni
Everyone looks at the door
Angel. Mishti says hugging her
Avni is searching for Neil. Neil closed eyes is weeping he does hear her but doesn't react.
Where is Neil . I ask
He still doesn't react
Tillu Avni. Shweta says
Avni walks towards him as she is still weak she stumbles. Neil catches her at the right time. Hugs her tightly she hugs him back lightly
Neil you marry Juhi. I say
Everyone heard her. No one says anything. As they know Avni is not in the right mind at the moment. Juhi was happy she starts walking towards Neil. Shweta stops her. This was not the first time Avni had said this to him.
Wifey, I am already married how can I marry someone else. Neil says creasing are hair lovingly
Neil. I say
Shh I am here,I will make everything right, trust me. (Cupping her cheek creasing it softly) Never again talk about going away from me. i promise no one can come between us i will not let anyone come in between us... Neil says
Batcha lets go and rest. Neela says
Neil please i am not worth you. I say
Wifey if you are not worth then I am not worth living. I love only you Wifey. Neil says
Neil. Juhi says panicked
Avni is leaning into him. He was finally at peace. She hugs him Neil cresses her cheek. Kiss her on the her forehead and both her cheeks. She hugs him tighter from before he smiles. Juhi gets even more jealous.
Neil please. Avni says
Juhi smirks. Neil holds both Avni hand in his hand creasing her wrists kissing them.
Wifey what you done with the same knife stab me in heart. You know I can't live without you. I not there without you. It simple. I never let you go away from me and I will never go away from you. Neil says
Angel...Mishti says
Out of habit from Goa AvNeil bent down to her level.
Mishti. Juhi shouts
Neil notices Avni was in slight pain. Neil picks Mishti. Juhi smiles. At the same time Neil pulls Avni closer. Juhi smile changes into jealousy.
Mom, went to meet Papa before you were kidnap and after that many times . Mishti says
Juhi shouts again.Mishti is scared. She starts to shivering out the of fear.
Mishti don't be scared. Sirji is here he will not let anything happen to you. DD says
(Mishti you don't need be scared. Siri is here nothing will happen)
Yes batcha we all are here Juhi will not be able to do anything. Shweta says
Angel Mom also went to jail to meet Papa a lot of times. Mishti says
Mishti, why are you felling so scread of Juhi. Aman as.
Mishti hugs Neela
Batcha what's wrong. Neela says
She will slap me she will scold me. She is worse then Papa... Mishti says
Juhi tries to slap Mishti.
Juhi enough how can you go so low.. (Angrily walking towards Juhi) how can you do this to you own daughter. Neil say staking Juhi
Neil stops and notices Avni's hand slipping from his hand he holds it back.
My wifey put her life in danger you are exploiting your own daughter. Neil says trying to slap Juhi
Neil what are you. (Avni pulls his hand which has their wedding band on it) My Neil (Neil smiles) is not like that. you dont fall till her level. I say
Wifey you did what not and her ( looking at Avni with love) You are my strength your are my pride. (Neil smiles) And her she tried snatching my life from me (pulling Avni closer looking at Juhi) My wiifey again stopped me from doing something wrong)
Avni is right my Tillu has never raised a hand on girl. but doesn't mean you will be speared. Bebe says slapping Juhi hard across her face
Beb...Juhi says
Don't even try both my children because they have already suffered a lot because of you now keep quiet not a world. Bebe says
AvNeil hug each other tightly
Avni. Neil says
Avni hugs him tightly
I thought you actually... Avni says
Wifey that will never happen. I love you. You are my life. Neil say
They both hug each other
You should not react like that. Vidyut can't be trusted. If something happens to you. Avni says
If something happen to you what would I have done. Neil says
With Juhi or even with sakshi. Avni says with a smile
Wifey stop joking. I will not not spend my life with some one else I want to spend every second with you. (Avni places ear near his heart) My every heart beat is on your name. Neil says
You are thinking of to much of romance. if Vidyut had done something to you that would happened to me your heartbeats is the best medley in my life. Avni says
Their eyes met she could clearly see how effected Neil was with her condition. She cupped one cheek he kissed her hand then she cupped another cheek she kissed her other palm. She stepped on his toes putting her lips lightly on on his for a peck. His lips came crashing down on her with love care and passion. They kept kissing each other for a while. No one said anything. After Avni and Neil returned from Goa and everything with family cleared out. They were inseparable. They were always with each other no matter what. Family ignored them but they were many times got in act at the police station by DD or the by Ali in the cafe. Avni would shy away but Neil on the other hand was totally cool with all the PDA he loved to show the everyone only one woman had control over him no matter what or where his Wifey his zindagi his life line his Avni Ayesha Neil Khanna. Juhi was over the top jealousy. Avni places ear near his heart. Hugging him with one arm around his shoulders and on around her hips just like a shield.
Shakshi is all over Neil he enjoying the tension he getting and more then that he knows Avni is watching and getting jealous. Avni taking advantage of it goes to Vidyut to talk to him and know more about Mishti.Vidyut had opened up to her.
Ananya what is this. Vidyut says looking at her ring
Ring. Avni says
This is from your past lover. I know how it feels when someone you love cheats on you. Vidyut says
I understad. Avni says
Why are you wearing it. Vidyut says forcefully trying to take it off
Ahh. Avni says
Take it off now. Vidyut says
But I like it. Avni says
I said take it of. Vidyut says
You heard the lady. Neil says angry
Who are you. Vidyut asks
Doesn't matter who I am you can't hurt any one. Neil says
Mr do you know how it fells have a permanent reminder of betrayal. I know that why I am telling her to get rid of it. That ...Vidyut says
Vidyut bas tu kuch bhi bola raha hai. Tu mera ex husband... bas kar tu. Avni says
Take it of now main tera liye nay luga. Vidyut says
(Take it of now I will get you a new one)
I will not take it off. I like it. Avni says
Neil smiles. Shifts Avni behind him
You might be her boyfriend you might want to be her boyfriend but that doesn't give you right to hurt her in any way. Neil says
Sir I will handle it you go your girlfriend is waiting for you. Avni says
Neil gives a look. Vidyut pulls Avni from behind him. Angering Neil even more. Neil holds her hand and pulling her closer to him and pushing Vidyut even further away from her, hugging her tightly
Jaan. Neil says
Kissing Avni's hand and inspecting her finger which was bleeding slightly.
How dear you. Vidyut says
Avni looks at Neil and shakes her head.
Vidyut don't shout. Avni says
You just get lost. Vidyut says pushing Neil
Vidyut enough is enough (looking at Neil) before people see you. Avni says
Vidyut goes. Avni walks away from there Neil goes behind her.
Jaan what are you doing...Neil says
Neil. (hugs him tightly) if something happened to you, Vidyut is mad. Avni says
Jaan if something happened to you I was scared. Neil says
Neil, if something happened to you what would i have done, i was just Mishti. Avni says
Mishti has to be saved but for me she is not more important then you. You and your safety is my top priority . Wifey you are my today, my future, you are my life. Neil says
I love you Hubby. Avni says hugging him with one arm around his shoulders and on around her hips just like a shield.
Jaan, I am fine Neil's says
Neil... Avni says hugging him tighter
Neil crease her hair lovingly. Everyone is silently watching. Avni closes her eyes as she at peace.
Jaan...Jaan...Wifey... Wifey... Avni... Avni...Neil say worried
Tillu kya hua. Bebe says
(Tillu what happened)
AVNI'S POV
Aakhee khol please bhut daar laga raha asea maat kar mera saas ruk jaati hai mera dharkane ruk jaati hai please asea maat kare aakhee khol. Neil says
(Open your eyes please it's very scary. )
Juhi is jealous. Avni looks up at him his eyes are full of worry.
Hubby I am fine, you're arms are a save haven for me. I say
Jaan please don't close your eyes. Neil says smiling and pulling her even closer
Avni is remembering the time all they (AvNeil and Juhi) were together and they attacked and Juhi came out hardly injured. Then when Vidyut had kidnap Avni and a lady came to meet him time and again. Avni turns around in Neil's arms
Juhi. I say
Wifey this all can happen later. Come you only rest for now don't take stress. Neil says concerned for Avni wellbeing holding her close not letting him go a inch away
Neil puts his face in the crock of her neck try his best calming himself with her being a live save and his arm but in his heart he knew his biggest mistake was to trust Juhi blindly. Their eyes. Neil saw fear he had seen it before the fear of loosing him not to someone but to dead and he gone through this himself not once but it was the fourth time she had attempted suicide. She walked to Juhi she was angry fear was only to show Neil but she didn't attack physically
You went to meet Vidyut. Avni says
That I wanted to save you. Juhi says
Avni batchane ki liye Tillu hai tera eshaan ki koi zarrorat nahi hume. Shweta says
(Tillu is there to save Avni we don't need any favour from you)
This is not answer of my question. Went or not. I say
That. Juhi says
Went or not. I say
That... Juhi says
Yes or no... I say closing up on Juhi
Juhi is backing into the wall. Shweta looks at Avni she see a certain expression which make her stop from telling Avni to stop and relax till she is in better health
Shweta Self Talk] Iss Juhi ko lag raha Avni gussa magar iss kon samjhae jab ek patni kuch thana leti hai toh insaan toh yamraj ko khud uss ke samne jhuk jata hai.
Answer Juhi. I say
Yes. Juhi says
Neil first saved then your daughter how much more guilt are you going to put him through. Do you even love him have you ever loved him. All those attacks which happened before I was kidnapped how come you were never injured. Why would you be injured you with Vidyut caught them there what were you trying to do get yourself killed another fake death so again Neil will be in guilt. I say
AvNeil Juhi and DD are going somewhere in a car. All of sudden some men attacked them. Neil and DD fought them off after a while they ran of. Neil looked around for Avni immediately.
Wifey are you fine (checking for injuries and hug her) Jaan hold me please. I can deal with anything till you are with me the thought of loosing you drives me crazy. Neil says
Hubby I am fine. Avni says
Juhi gets jealous
Jaan come with me stay near. Neil says
Ahh. Juhi says
DD take her to the doctor. Neil says
Jaan you are hurt to you need first aid. Avni says
I don't need to go the hospital. Let's go to some place save it's not save here. Neil says
Jiju take the bike I will come with Ali Bhai. Aman say
They sit on the bike.
Jaan hold me. (Avni holds him)Jaan I am you husband (Avni hold tighter. Neil pulls one of her hand pulling her even closer) Jaan sit as close as possible please. (Neil stops bike a little away. Juhi smiles) Jaan get off. Neil says
Jaan what's wrong. Avni says
He holds her hand get in front.
Jaan you have injured you leg. Why didnt you say anything. Neil says lifting her making her sit on the bike) Show me. Neil says
Jiju when did you become a doctor. Aman say
Aman love makes you do a lot thing when you fall in love you will now. (Avni blushes. Neil tries to twist her leg) Hold me Jaan this does hurt alot. I so sorry. (Hug her) Sorry Jaan. I Love you. Neil says
Juhi is jealous
You don't have have any proof. No one will believe you. Juhi says
When we all believed your lie without proof what makes you think we will not believe Jaan. I trust Jaan I don't need any proof. Jaan wouldn't lie. Neil says
Fine forget that why did you come to meet Vidyut after I was kidnapped. Did you once even tell Neil, Vidyut's location. How many times did you come to meet him weren't you were supposedly scared of Vidyut to even save your own daughter. I say
A few times. Juhi says
How many times you no kid Juhi. I say
You didn't seem to understand the question Juhi do I repeat. Shweta says
Juhi could clearly see she was being cornered no one not even Neil was standing by her. She knew tears are not going to work at all so she tries to slap Avni. On the other hand Avni was surrounded by her family but was trying to portray herself weak in front to Juhi. That exactly what she wanted Juhi to react physically so her physical attack could simply be in self defence. Avni held her hand tightly
This is mark from Ragini Pandit...You said she tortured you looks like you have forgotten that already now you see what I do unfortunately for you I am Dayawanti Mehta granddaughter after all I am her blood. I say
Ahhh... Avni it's hurting. Juhi says
Hurt seriously you, your lies and everything you've been has hurt the most. (Tunting) guess, guess Juhi... let's make it easy Neil how much more will you hurt him. I say
Ahhh... Juhi says
I love him. Juhi say
LOVE...do you really love him. Do you even understand him. Avni says
You illegitimate girl whose father didn't give him her name whose Dadi only wanted to kill her all her life whose own brother wanted sell her. And you are married to him Neil. You married by cheat. You have only wronged everyone you are curse and burden on every you used Neil for you own good. You say YOU LOVE HIM. I loved only him all my life. Juhi says
Neil walk towards Avni from behind
AVNI IS MY WIFE MY LOVE MY PRIDE MY LIFE and NO BODY THAT NO BODY SAYS ANYTHING TO MY JAAN. MERI HAAR DHARKAN AVNI SE HAAR SAAS AVNI SE. Neil says hugging Avni from behind
(My every heartbeat is from Avni my every breath is by Avni)
Avni turns to face him.
Jaan sorry. Avni says
Shh Jaan just hold me. Neil says
I love you. Avni says
I know I love you. Neil says
Avni looks at him kiss him on the lips. Their eyes closes and are lost in each other Neil lifts her and take her in the room.
NEIL'S POVJaan you promised me last time you will not do this again what is this. I says
Jaan sorry I didn't want hurt you. I don't know it just hard I tried. Avni says
Nothing to worry I am there with now I will stay with you take care of all day every day however long it takes. I say
No I will take care of myself I will not do this again. Avni says
Promise. Neil says
Avni hugs him tightly. Juhi is gets jealous
Neil Self Talk] Why is Jaan being so hesitant. Jaan is hiding something. What can it. What fear does Jaan that she is not even telling me. I knew that man was not enough to force Jaan to commit suicide even once.
Jaan what are you thinking. Avni says
Jaan, now I will take care you myself I have trusted everyone a lot it hasn't helped at all. I have almost lost you to four time already. I can't afford it again. I say
What about your job. You can't just leave it. It is your responsibility. Maa is there she can take care of me. You go save the world. Avni says
That exactly what I will do Jaan you are my world. I say
Phir romance socha raha tujhe. I am serious. Avni says
(again you thinking of romance. I am serious)
Jaan so am I, Jaan you are my world. I will take leave. I say
It's not needed I can take care of myself. Avni says
Jaan you pushing me away again why aab asea kya hua hai. I says
(Jaan you pushing me away again why now what has happened)
Nahi Jaan I am not. Avni says hugs him guilty
(No Jaan I am not)
Why does it fell like that. Jaan you can tell me everything. I says hugging her back
Neil Self Talk] What so big that it making you lie to me. This out right lie.
Avni Self Talk] I wish I could tell you but I can't I am sure I can't burden you I wish this all didn't hurt you so much.
We have to check the patient. Doctor says
Who is stopping you. Neil says
Sir you will have leave. Doctor says
That not going to happen. Jaan shift a little. Neil sits down next to her) What are you waiting for (pulling her closer)Jaan kya hua. Neil says
Avni gives her peck on the cheek.
What is nurse putting have you even checked. Why does it smell wrong. DCP hoon main. Neil says
What is this Nurse. (Nurse gets scared) Rajni who is this I told you take care personally. Harish says
DD get this lady arrested. Harish Uncle don't worry Hospital ka naam nahi aaga news mein jab tak [Hospital name will not come in news till) Jaan is fine everything is fine. (Juhi gets worried) Why did you do this. Don't lie. I say
That lady gave me money for doing. Nurse says
Juhi. DD take her in police custody also for attempt to murder. I say
Attempt to murder. Juhi says
DD arrested both the nurse and Juhi. Neil hugs Avni tightly. The thought of loosing again in front of him he was loosing it.
Jaan I am fine. Avni says pecking him on the lips.
Neil blushes
Harish when will Avni get discharged. Neela asks
You can take her home right now. She is absolutely fine. There are some medicines. Harish says
Medicines, Uncle but why. I say
Just multi vitamins. Harish says
Jaan stay right next to me please. Neil say
Jaan, I am right here. Avni says leaning into Neil
Jaan better stay right next to me. I can't live without you for a second you never try to leave me and I am surely take a long leave from work. I say
Avni Self Talk] Now what if he stops going how will I hid it from him. How will I tell him if ... I want him to be save I want to be him but if he gets to know I have to get rid of it but how.
Avni hugs him tighter breathing him in. Kiss his neck
Jaan what happened all of sudden. I says
I love you. Avni says
Neil Self Talk] Not the answer I was looking for. Don't worry I will figure it out I not a ACP just like that. And after all your my wife my life going to be hardest case surely.
Neil carries her car.
Jaan where are you going its a car. I say
Jaan what are you doing. Avni say
Jaan when I am here why are sitting so far. I will never let you get hurt. Neil says
Tillu I love you. Avni says sitting on Neil lap hugging him tightly
Jaan. I says
I am sleepy. Avni say closing eyes
Neil hids her face.
Neil Uncle why are you hiding Angels face. Mishti asks
Neil is just protective about about your Angel. Ali says with a smirk
Jaan is only mine you get it. Mishti, Jaan is sleeping that why I did sun was coming on her face. Neil says
Avni cuddles into him. He blushes
Jiju we have reached. Aman says
I can see. (He looks at Mishti) what are you doing. Let Angel sleep. I say
We reached home. Mishti says
Beta I will take Jaan inside myself she has still not fully recovered so let Jaan rest. I say
Everyone see and smiles.
AUTHOR'S POVWill Angel be fine. Mishti says
Mishti Angel will be absolutely fine Neil is with her. Neela says
Why is Uncle carrying her like that. Mishti says
Because Uncle loves Angel and love to protect her. Shweta says
Tillu is very spread of loosing Avni don't know what he will do to protect that Vidyut and Ragini go burn in hell. Bebe says
Bebe calm down. Neela says
Why is Bebe angry. Mishti scared asks
Mishti come with me you need to rest. Ali says
Neil puts her on the bed and lies next to her holding her hand. After a while the effect of the medicines and pregnancy effects subsides Avni wakes up. She tries getting up but couldn't . She notices Neil is holding her hand. Softly she slips her hand from his. She goes to the washroom
Avni Self Talk] Till now I successfully kept it from him but now if stay he notice and the way he is he surely will try to figure out.
Neil tries to press her hand as he couldn't he wakes ups and see she not there he panics.
Jaan. Neil says
Avni self Talk] He up already.
I woke up Jaan, when did we reach. Avni asks
Jaan you were asleep that time. I says
Now I am awake. Avni says
Come out of the washroom or I am am coming in. Neil says
Try it locked. Avni says
Jaan are you forgetting I am a cop I brake it open. Neil says
You try MR ASP. Avni says
He tries breaking Avni open the door he falls in washroom. Avni starting laughing. He looks at her smiling.
Neil Self Talk]I can keep doing this to if it makes you laugh it been so long I have heard you laugh I miss it. I love everything about you each and everything about you
He stands up and walks towards Avni.
Never leave like that alone on the bed. You know how worried I was. Neil says
You were sleeping. Avni says
You could have woken me up. Neil say
Would you do that how many times have I told you. Avni says
Jaan please understands. Neil says
I like see you sleep you look cute. Avni says
Did I just hear you call me cute.(She nods) Jaan I understand that because I also find you cute when you are sleeping I always did but next time wake me up. Neil says hugging her tightly.
NEIL'S POVJaan what wrong. Avni asks
Kuch mat puch. Jaan just hold me. Avni hugs him back immediately.
Jaan remember what I told you when we returned to Mumbai after saving Mishti. I says
(Don't ask anything)
What. Avni says
Jaan tu bhul gayi. (Jaan you forget) What I told you in Goa about our future. You want me tell you again. I say
Avni Self Talk] I remember every word you said but the is very cruel. I wish I could tell you.
Jaan what tell me dont ignore my question. I says pulling her face up
Jaan you forgot what you just said in hospital. Avni say
Jaan you are again changing the topic. (Avni kisses him. He finally gives up and responds making the kiss deeper and more passionate. They separate reluctantly to breath) Jaan (Avni look at him her eyes are dark with desire so are his) you know this not fair you can't always ignore my question. I say
Neil Self Talk] For how long will you ignore I will get it out of you sooner or latter. Now I am home all day all night romance toh hoga hi I will make you tell me the reason soon.
Edited by AvNeil_TV - 8 years ago
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