THE ALTERNATE CHOICE - An Asfiya OS [ZUBIYA's POV]

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

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AnayaZ

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Posted: 8 years ago

Oh so freaking awesomely well written! You conveyed Zubia's distressed ambivalent state so well, sure yet doubting herself at the safe time. I am so glad at the spin you gave to their conversation with her letting herself bare to him, yet not asking for his validation. It is a welcome change to see something Zubia centered while everywhere else it's Asfi who is the driving force. Oh and thank you for this. Please keep em coming. Helps with the yks hangover.

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnayaZ
Oh so freaking awesomely well written! You conveyed Zubia's distressed ambivalent state so well, sure yet doubting herself at the safe time. I am so glad at the spin you gave to their conversation with her letting herself bare to him, yet not asking for his validation. It is a welcome change to see something Zubia centered while everywhere else it's Asfi who is the driving force. Oh and thank you for this. Please keep em coming. Helps with the yks hangover.

Hi Anya!

Thank u so much for ur kind words dear. I'm so happy u liked this version... I liked the original TV version too since that showed her vulnerable side beautifully especially because Sajal was just superb...But I just wanted to explore a different side of Zubia too, the side which with she bravely decided to live alone in an unknown place without anybody's help... 😃

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seabeauty

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Posted: 8 years ago

That was beautiful.. I don't have enough words.. Your description was perfect! Please keep writing.. helps getting over the gloomy feeling..

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: seabeauty
That was beautiful.. I don't have enough words.. Your description was perfect! Please keep writing.. helps getting over the gloomy feeling..

Thank u dear! Glad u liked this version too! 😃